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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Thí sinh

MMM yes I find it quite easy to remember people's names, especially if I meet them several times. I usually repeat the name out loud when I first hear it, which can helps me recall it later.

Giám khảo

How do you remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Umm, I usually pay close attention when people introduce themselves and I try to remember their names by making a link. For example, uh, maybe a person who have curly hair. I think it it's really cute so I will remember uh, the person had a cute name.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Thí sinh

I think it depends. If someone I'm not close to forget my name I don't mind because we don't interact very much. But if a close friend suddenly forgets my name, I would be surprised and probably ask them why they forgot, maybe teasing them or showing that I'm a bit annoyed.

Giám khảo

Do you often forget people's names?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so. But in some situations I could forget people's name, but I will remember some clues about this person, for example his appearance or his interest.

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Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Điểm: 86.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,观点和方法都很清楚,且使用了“especially”和“which”进行补充,整体自然有效。主要问题是语法错误:“which can helps”应改为“which can help”。另外,可以加入一个简短的具体例子,使答案更有说服力;注意控制在2—3句即可,避免不必要的停顿词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people’s names, especially if I meet them several times. I usually repeat a person’s name when I first hear it, which helps me remember it later. For example, I recently remembered a new colleague’s name because I used it several times during our first conversation.

How do you remember people's names?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明确的方法,但表达不够自然,例子也不够清晰。“make a link”应改为“make an association”或“associate the name with something”;“a person who have”应改为“a person who has”;“a cute name”与卷发之间的逻辑不清,应该说明是把名字和外貌、兴趣或某个熟悉的人联系起来。建议使用“First... For example...”来组织答案,并减少重复和停顿。

Ví dụ: I usually pay close attention when people introduce themselves, and I try to associate their names with something memorable. For example, if someone has curly hair, I might connect their name with their appearance and repeat it silently a few times. This helps me recall the name more easily later.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,能够进行对比,逻辑清楚,例子也符合问题。需要注意语法和标点:“someone ... forget”应改为“someone ... forgets”,并在条件从句后稍作停顿。最后一句略长,可以拆分或使用“although”使语气更自然;“ask them why they forgot”可以改成更口语化的“ask them how they could forget”。

Ví dụ: It depends on how well I know the person. If someone I’m not close to forgets my name, I usually don’t mind because we rarely interact. However, I would feel surprised if a close friend forgot it, and I might tease them by asking how they could forget my name.

Do you often forget people's names?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接,也提供了忘记名字时记住线索的补充信息。不过,“But”重复使用使句子衔接不够自然,且“people's name”应改为“people's names”;“his appearance or his interest”应改为“their appearance or interests”,以保持复数和性别中立。可以加入具体场景,例如在参加聚会或认识新同事时,更好地支持观点。

Ví dụ: No, not very often, although I sometimes forget a name when I meet many new people at once. Even then, I can usually remember clues about the person, such as their appearance, interests, or where we met. I often use these clues to recall their name later.

Ngữ pháp

4: Modal verb usage(情态动词用法错误)

× I usually repeat the name out loud when I first hear it, which can helps me recall it later.

✓ I usually repeat the name out loud when I first hear it, which can help me recall it later.

情态动词“can”后面必须接动词原形,不能接第三人称单数形式“helps”。因此应将“helps”改为“help”。

2: Third person singular issue(第三人称单数问题)

× For example, uh, maybe a person who have curly hair.

✓ For example, maybe a person who has curly hair.

关系代词“who”指代单数名词“a person”,所以从句中的动词需要使用第三人称单数形式“has”,不能使用“have”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× I think it it's really cute so I will remember uh, the person had a cute name.

✓ I think it's really cute, so I will remember that the person had a cute name.

“it it's”中重复使用了两个主语和系动词,应改为“it's”。此外,在“remember”后面加“that”可以清楚地引导宾语从句,使句子结构更完整。

2: Third person singular issue(第三人称单数问题)

× If someone I'm not close to forget my name I don't mind because we don't interact very much.

✓ If someone I'm not close to forgets my name, I don't mind because we don't interact very much.

主语“someone”是单数不定代词,后面的动词应使用第三人称单数形式。因此“forget”应改为“forgets”。同时,在条件从句结束处加逗号,可以更清楚地分隔两个分句。

1: Singular and plural issue(名词单复数问题)

× But in some situations I could forget people's name, but I will remember some clues about this person, for example his appearance or his interest.

✓ But in some situations I could forget people's names, but I will remember some clues about this person, for example, his appearance or his interest.

“people's”表示复数所有格,通常指许多人的名字,所以后面的名词应使用复数形式“names”,而不是单数“name”。“for example”后加逗号也能使例子部分更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Close— Near; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Loud— Noisy; Vociferous; Garish
Surprised— Astonished
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