Part 1
Giám khảo
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like to remember all people's names in my class I think it is an efficient way to let me get unwell with other people and I think it is pretty polite for everyone.
Giám khảo
How do you remember people's names?
Thí sinh
It's not difficult to remember all people's name. I just need to look through the name list and remember all people's name? Not too much time to remember it have you remember them?
Giám khảo
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Thí sinh
I will feel much respective I think if some people can coming correctly. I will be very happy and I think he is friendly people.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget people's names?
Thí sinh
I seldom forget important friend's name. Although sometimes I will forget someone's name, but I will say sorry to him and ask her his name
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接点出观点并用一到两句具体理由支持。注意句子连贯与语法准确,避免用错词(例如“get unwell”错误,应为“get on well”或“get to know”)。把答案控制在最多五句话内。可以用连接词如“because”或“so”来衔接原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find it easy and important to remember my classmates' names because it helps me get on well with them and shows respect. For example, I always learn names at the start of a course so I can address people directly and build rapport.
How do you remember people's names?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要有清晰的步骤或方法,使用连贯的句子说明具体技巧,避免重复和语法错误。不要在回答中加入无关的反问。使用连接词如“first”、“then”或“by”来组织方法。
Ví dụ: I usually use a simple method: first I read the class list carefully, then I repeat each name aloud and associate it with a face or a unique feature. By doing this a few times, I can remember most names quickly.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要表达情绪并给出原因或例子,注意词汇使用(例如“respectful”而非“respective”),句子要通顺并使用连接词如“because”。避免模糊不连贯的表达。
Ví dụ: I feel pleased and respected when someone remembers my name because it shows they paid attention. For instance, when a classmate called me by name after the first meeting, I felt they were friendly and considerate.
Do you often forget people's names?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答应直接表态并补充具体情形或补救方法。注意性别指代和语法(如“friend's names”复数,“ask them their name”更自然)。用连接词(虽然/但是)使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I rarely forget the names of close friends, but I sometimes forget acquaintances' names. If that happens, I apologize and politely ask them to remind me of their name so I don't avoid them or cause awkwardness.
× Yes, I like to remember all people's names in my class I think it is an efficient way to let me get unwell with other people and I think it is pretty polite for everyone.
✓ Yes, I like to remember all my classmates' names. I think it is an effective way to get close to other people, and I think it is polite to everyone.
问题类型:主谓一致/句子结构。原句有多处问题:1) "all people's names in my class" 表达冗长而且所有格错误,改为 "all my classmates' names" 更自然;2) 原句缺少标点,应分成两句;3) "an efficient way to let me get unwell with other people" 使用了错误的短语("get unwell" 意为生病),正确表达应为 "get close to other people"(与别人拉近关系);4) "pretty polite for everyone" 搭配不当,改为 "polite to everyone"。建议:注意名词所有格和自然搭配,保持句子分句和标点。
× It's not difficult to remember all people's name. I just need to look through the name list and remember all people's name? Not too much time to remember it have you remember them?
✓ It's not difficult to remember all people's names. I just need to look through the name list and memorize the names. It doesn't take too much time to remember them. Have you remembered them?
问题类型:主谓一致、时态、句子结构和代词使用。1) "all people's name" 单复数错误,改为 "all people's names";2) 第二句中用 "remember" 可以换成更自然的 "memorize";3) "Not too much time to remember it" 是句子碎片且代词不一致,应改为完整句子 "It doesn't take too much time to remember them.";4) 最后用问句时态和形式错误,改为 "Have you remembered them?"。建议:注意单复数一致,完整句子和正确的助动词选择。
× It's not difficult to remember all people's name.
✓ It's not difficult to remember all people's names.
问题类型:单复数。原句中的 "name" 与 "all people's" 不一致,表示多个人的名字应使用复数 "names"。建议:表示多个人时使用复数形式。
× I just need to look through the name list and remember all people's name?
✓ I just need to look through the name list and memorize everyone's name.
问题类型:介词/介词搭配和代词使用。"look through the name list" 可以接受,但句尾的疑问标点不合适,且 "all people's name" 不自然,改为 "everyone's name" 更简洁。建议:注意代词所有格和标点,疑问句应使用正确语序和助动词。
× Not too much time to remember it have you remember them?
✓ It doesn't take too much time to remember them. Have you remembered them?
问题类型:句子结构与时态。原句是碎片并且句子连接混乱,缺少助动词和正确时态。将其分为两句:第一句用否定陈述 "It doesn't take...",第二句用现在完成时疑问 "Have you remembered them?"。建议:保证句子完整,使用适当的助动词和时态。
× I will feel much respective I think if some people can coming correctly.
✓ I will feel very respected, I think, if some people can pronounce it correctly.
问题类型:现在时/形容词使用和动词形式。原句中 "much respective" 错误,应为形容词 "respected"(受尊重的);"can coming correctly" 中 "coming" 用错,应为 "pronounce it correctly" 或者 "remember it correctly"。建议:注意形容词与副词的使用,以及动词的正确形式和搭配。
× I will be very happy and I think he is friendly people.
✓ I will be very happy, and I think they are friendly people.
问题类型:代词使用与数一致。原句使用了单数代词 "he" 与复数名词 "people" 不一致,且前文指代不明。把代词改为中性复数 "they" 或者改为单数 "he is a friendly person"。建议:确保代词与所指名词在人称和数上保持一致。
× I seldom forget important friend's name.
✓ I seldom forget an important friend's name.
问题类型:过去时/句子结构与冠词使用。原句缺少冠词 "an" 来修饰 "important friend"。建议:在表示单一可数名词前使用适当的冠词。
× Although sometimes I will forget someone's name, but I will say sorry to him and ask her his name
✓ Although sometimes I forget someone's name, I apologize to them and ask for their name.
问题类型:主谓一致/代词和句子结构。问题包括:1) "Although... , but" 为中英混用,不能同时使用 although 与 but;2) 时态与习惯表达中不需要将"sometimes"与将来时 "will" 搭配,改为一般现在时 "sometimes I forget";3) 代词不一致(先用 "him" 又用 "her his"),改为中性复数代词 "them/their";4) 表达更自然为 "apologize to them and ask for their name"。建议:避免连词重复,使用一致的代词并选择恰当时态。