Name— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear words like “portion”. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., “names” not “portion names”) and correct sentence structure.

Ví dụ: It depends. Some names are easy to remember because they are familiar or have a clear sound, while others are hard because they are unfamiliar or difficult to pronounce. For example, I remember simple, common names quickly, but I struggle with long or uncommon names.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give a clear method and a specific example. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and more natural phrases like “I remember names by associating them with…” Fix grammar (e.g., avoid ‘portion name’, use singular/plural correctly).

Ví dụ: I usually remember names by associating them with something memorable. For example, I link a name to a person’s hobby or appearance, or I think about the meaning of the name, because these associations make the name easier to recall.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear feeling statement, then explain why and contrast close friends with strangers using linking words. Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., “close people” not “clue ones”, use singular/plural agreement). Keep it concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: I feel a little hurt when close friends forget my name because it feels personal. However, I don’t mind when strangers forget my name, since we are not close. In my country, it is quite common to forget acquaintances’ names.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear frequency statement (e.g., “Sometimes” or “Rarely”), then give a specific reason and one brief example. Use linking words like “because” and correct tense and pronouns. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do, especially on busy days when I am distracted. For example, I might call a close friend by the wrong name because I’m thinking about work, and that embarrasses me. I rarely bother to remember strangers’ names unless I meet them often.

× Some portion names are so easier and meaningful, whereas others have some difficulties to pronunciations as well as difficult to understand.

✓ Some names are much easier and more meaningful, whereas others are difficult to pronounce and hard to understand.

The original uses 'so easier' and 'meaningful' awkwardly; comparative 'easier' must be modified by 'much' or 'far' not 'so' before a comparative. 'Portion name' is confused; 'names' is clearer. 'Have some difficulties to pronunciations' is incorrect collocation: use 'difficult to pronounce' or 'hard to pronounce'. Also use parallel structure: 'difficult to pronounce and hard to understand'. Improve by using correct modifiers and common collocations.

× Actually, it depends upon the portion name.

✓ Actually, it depends on the name.

Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon' in conversational contexts; 'portion name' is unidiomatic, so replace with 'name'. Keep the sentence concise.

× Some portion names are so easier and meaningful, whereas others have some difficulties to pronunciations as well as difficult to understand.

✓ Some names are much easier and more meaningful, whereas others are difficult to pronounce and hard to understand.

The phrase 'have some difficulties to pronunciations' misuses quantifier 'some' and collocation 'difficulties to'. Use 'difficult to pronounce' or 'have difficulty pronouncing'. Also ensure adjectives/adverbs match countable usage.

× Actually, I don't have to remember portion name by memorizing it, but by the familiar feelings, good connections and having their beautiful memorable meaning of name.

✓ Actually, I don't try to memorize a name; I remember it through familiar feelings, good connections, and its beautiful, memorable meaning.

Original mixes structures and incorrect gerund use. 'By memorizing it' is okay but 'don't have to remember ... by' is awkward. Use parallel gerund phrases or noun phrases: 'through familiar feelings, good connections, and its beautiful, memorable meaning.' Also add articles and fix word order.

× Actually I don't have to remember portion name by memorizing it, but by the familiar feelings, good connections and having their beautiful memorable meaning of name.

✓ Actually, I don't try to memorize a name; I remember it through familiar feelings, good connections, and its beautiful, memorable meaning.

Pronoun 'their' mismatches singular 'name.' Use 'its' for singular 'name' or rephrase to plural if intended. Also include the article 'a' before 'name'.

× Actually it feels a bit sad when some clue ones doesn't remember my names whereas the one who is not as much close as well as stranger.

✓ Actually, I feel a bit sad when someone close doesn't remember my name, whereas it is normal when a stranger doesn't.

Errors: subject-verb agreement ('ones doesn't' incorrect; use 'someone' + 'doesn't' or 'people' + 'don't'). 'My names' should be singular 'my name'. Word order and word choice 'some clue ones' is ungrammatical; use 'someone close'. Also simplify contrast with strangers.

× Actually it feels a bit sad when some clue ones doesn't remember my names whereas the one who is not as much close as well as stranger.

✓ Actually, I feel a bit sad when someone close doesn't remember my name, but it's normal when a stranger doesn't.

Missing articles and awkward phrases: 'the one who is not as much close as well as stranger' should be 'a stranger' or 'someone who is not very close.' Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and correct idiomatic phrasing.

× Usually when I am on a busy day and going to meet my some close friends, I accidentally remember different names of their and get and get them angry which makes me a bit sad as well.

✓ Usually, on a busy day when I'm going to meet some close friends, I sometimes call them by the wrong names and upset them, which makes me a bit sad.

Preposition 'on a busy day' is correct but original 'I am on a busy day' is awkward; use 'on a busy day when I'm...' 'going to meet my some close friends' wrong order—'meet some close friends'. 'Remember different names of their' is incorrect; use 'call them by the wrong names'. Remove duplicate 'and get'. Improve clarity and verb choice.

× As for stranger, I didn't remember your name anymore because they are not.

✓ As for strangers, I don't remember their names anymore because they are not close to me.

Tense and agreement problems: 'didn't remember ... anymore' mixes past with 'anymore' suggesting present. Use present 'don't remember'. 'As for stranger' should be plural 'strangers'. 'Because they are not' is incomplete; add 'close to me'. Use consistent tense and clear subject reference.