Name— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确，但有语法和用词问题，且句子较冗长。应直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句补充细节。注意动词搭配（例如 use "remember" 而不是 "bear"），以及时态和表达自然性。可以简化为：我母亲从小教我要记住名字，所以我养成了习惯。

Ví dụ: Yes, it's fairly easy for me. My mother taught me from a young age to remember people's names, so it became a habit and I usually remember names without trying.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，有方法和例子，但表达可更简洁、自然，并使用更恰当的连词（例如 "also" 或 "for example"）。例子中类比不够精准，建议用更清晰的联想法或发音/职业等具体特征。

Ví dụ: I usually write down new names in my phone and make a mental connection with a distinctive trait. For example, I connect "Ben" with his black hair by thinking "Ben — black" so the visual cue helps me remember.

Gợi ý: 回答意思清楚但语法与表达混乱。应先给出总观点，再区分两种情况；使用恰当的连词（"if" 和 "but"）并修正被动/主动结构。避免冗长和重复。

Ví dụ: It depends. If someone I meet for the first time forgets my name, I don't mind. But if a close friend can't remember my name when we meet, I feel embarrassed and a little annoyed.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有背景，但语法错误和时态不一致（例如 "until I won't forget" 应为 "until I didn't/ no longer did" 或 "until I wouldn't forget"）。句子可更简短有力，并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: No, I rarely forget names. My parents made me practice saying names repeatedly when I was a child, so now I pay close attention and try to remember names the first time I hear them.

× As a result, I'm accustomed to bear people's names in my mind automatically

✓ As a result, I'm accustomed to bearing people's names in my mind automatically

“accustomed to”后必须接动名词（verb + -ing），不能接不定式或原形动词。建议记住固定搭配“be accustomed to + -ing”，例如“accustomed to bearing”。

× When I meet a new friend, I usually write down his name and connections on my smartphone.

✓ When I meet a new friend, I usually write down their name and connections on my smartphone.

原句使用“his”会产生性别限定，且在泛指单个人时更自然用they/their作单数通用代词。建议在不确定性别或想保持中性时使用“they/their”。

× Also, I try to find some traits of the friend and make connection with those traits and his name.

✓ Also, I try to find some traits of the friend and make connections between those traits and their name.

“make connection with”搭配不自然，常用“make connections between A and B”。同时改用“their”保持代词一致。注意复数“connections”。

× For example, a friend of mine called Ben has black hair, so black has letter B, so does Ben.

✓ For example, a friend of mine called Ben has black hair, so black starts with the letter B, and so does Ben.

需要使用定冠词“the”来修饰特定名词“letter B”；另外原句语序不自然，改为“starts with the letter B”更符合表达习惯，并用连词“and”连接两部分。

× Well, it depends if people who we have met the first time can't remember my name is fine to me.

✓ Well, it depends: if people I have met for the first time can't remember my name, it's fine with me.

原句结构混乱，时态/短语位置错误。应使用“depends”后接条件从句，用“people I have met for the first time”或“people I met for the first time”。此外“is fine to me”不地道，应为“it's fine with me”。建议把条件从句和主句分清并调整介词短语顺序。

× But if friends we get along well with can't say out my name when we come across, I feel embarrassed and a bit angry.

✓ But if friends I get along well with can't say my name when we come across each other, I feel embarrassed and a bit angry.

“say out my name”用法错误，应为“say my name”或“say out someone’s name”很少用。“friends we get along well with”顺序可以更自然地写成“friends I get along well with”。“come across”通常需要宾语“each other”表示相遇。

× When I forgot someone's name as a child, my parents made me repeat people's names over and over again until I won't forget them anymore.

✓ When I forgot someone's name as a child, my parents made me repeat people's names over and over again until I wouldn't forget them anymore.

条件或时间状语从句涉及过去时，直到（until）从句也应该使用与过去相一致的时态，即过去将来或过去式“would”而非现在时“won't”。建议在讲述过去经历时保持时态一致。

× So now I often pay full attention to people's name to make sure I remember.

✓ So now I often pay full attention to people's names to make sure I remember.

“people's name”应为复数“people's names”因为泛指多人的名字；此外“pay full attention to”后接名词复数形式更符合语义。建议注意可数名词的单复数形式。