Part 1
Giám khảo
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Thí sinh
I find it easy for me to remember people's names because I will use memory tricks like linking a new name to something familiar
Giám khảo
How do you remember people's names?
Thí sinh
I usually remember people's names by linking it to something familiar or a famous celebrity. For example, if a person says his name is Tom, I will link it with Tom Clues
Giám khảo
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Thí sinh
I may feel a little bit awkward because my name is relatively simple to remember, but I can understand when it happens and I will politely give them some hints and help them recall my name.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget people's names?
Thí sinh
Not really, because I mentioned above I will use some memory tricks and I think it's a way to show your respect to remember others names and I will pay attention during introductions.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰且直接,但有两点可以改进:1) 语言更自然:避免冗余短语如“for me”与“I will”,可用更地道的表达;2) 增加一两个细节并使用连接词,使回答更连贯且信息更丰富。建议控制在3-4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember names because I use simple memory tricks. For example, I link a new name to something familiar, like a celebrity or a visual image. That usually helps me recall names quickly in future meetings.
How do you remember people's names?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 内容有具体方法和例子,但表达有小错误和拼写问题(应为 Tom Cruise 而非 Tom Clues),且缺少连接词令句子略显断裂。建议用更自然的连接结构并补充一句说明这种方法为何有效。
Ví dụ: I usually remember names by linking them to something familiar, such as a celebrity or an image. For instance, if someone is called Tom, I might think of Tom Cruise. This visual association makes the name much easier to recall later.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答礼貌且态度得体,但句子可以更简洁自然,避免模棱两可的词汇(如“relatively”可去掉或具体说明)。可以用一两个短句表达感觉并说明会采取的具体做法。
Ví dụ: I feel a little embarrassed if someone forgets my name, especially when it's simple. However, I understand that it happens, so I usually give a polite hint or repeat my name to help them remember.
Do you often forget people's names?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但结构较长且有重复(提到“mentioned above”显得不必要)。建议分成两句:先回答是否经常忘记,再简要解释原因并用连接词衔接。注意所有格和复数形式(others' names)。
Ví dụ: Not really. I make an effort to remember names by using memory tricks and paying close attention during introductions, which I think shows respect.
× I find it easy for me to remember people's names because I will use memory tricks like linking a new name to something familiar
✓ I find it easy to remember people's names because I use memory tricks like linking a new name to something familiar.
问题类型:主谓一致/句子结构(27)。原句中短语 "I find it easy for me to remember" 冗余且不自然,英语中常用结构是 "find it + adjective + to + do",不加 "for me"。另外原句用将来时 "will use" 与一般陈述习惯不符,应使用一般现在时来表示经常性的动作,改为 "use"。建议:使用固定结构 "find it + 形容词 + to + 动词原形",并用一般现在时描述经常性行为。
× I usually remember people's names by linking it to something familiar or a famous celebrity.
✓ I usually remember people's names by linking them to something familiar or a famous celebrity.
问题类型:介词/代词使用(11)。原句中代词 "it" 指代复数名词 "people's names",应使用复数代词 "them"。建议:保证代词在人称和数上与所指名词一致。
× For example, if a person says his name is Tom, I will link it with Tom Clues
✓ For example, if a person says his name is Tom, I link it with Tom Cruise.
问题类型:句子结构/时态(27)。例句中使用将来时 "I will link" 不符合举例说明常用的一般事实或习惯动作,应使用一般现在时 "I link" 或现在进行时。另有拼写错误,应该是人名 "Tom Cruise" 而非 "Tom Clues"。建议:描述习惯或常规做法时使用一般现在时,并注意专有名词拼写。
× I may feel a little bit awkward because my name is relatively simple to remember, but I can understand when it happens and I will politely give them some hints and help them recall my name.
✓ I may feel a little bit awkward because my name is relatively simple to remember, but I can understand when it happens and I politely give them some hints to help them recall my name.
问题类型:现在时(6)。原句混用了情态动词和将来时("may..." 与 "will politely give"),在描述应对方式时更自然使用一般现在时/习惯性行为,比如 "I politely give" 或 "I politely try to give"。此外原句中 "give them some hints and help them recall my name" 可以通过不定式结构更连贯:"give them some hints to help them recall..."。建议:在描述常规反应时使用一般现在时,并用不定式连接目的状语。
× Not really, because I mentioned above I will use some memory tricks and I think it's a way to show your respect to remember others names and I will pay attention during introductions.
✓ Not really, because I mentioned above I use some memory tricks and I think it's a way to show respect to remember others' names, and I pay attention during introductions.
问题类型:过去时/时态错误(5)。句中 "I mentioned above" 用过去时可以,但随后又用将来时 "I will use" 来描述习惯性行为,应改为一般现在时 "I use"。另外,短语 "show your respect" 在此语境不自然,应简化为 "show respect"。名词所有格 "others names" 应为 "others' names"。最后对并列动作使用一致的时态(一般现在时)。建议:在描述现在的习惯时统一使用一般现在时,注意所有格形式和固定搭配。