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Giám khảo

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Thí sinh

No, it isn't because I'm not good with remembering people's name. So before I call someone I usually check the name again and again.

Giám khảo

How do you remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Well, I checked the people's name many times. In addition, when I talk to someone I call his name.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Thí sinh

Well, I feel disappointed because this is mean that people don't remember myself

Giám khảo

Do you often forget people's names?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often forget people's names, so I check the people's name again and again however I'm not good at remembering people's name.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答が意味は通っていますが、文法の誤りや冗長さが目立ちます。まず主語と動詞の一致(例: "I'm not good at remembering people's names")を直し、繰り返し表現を避けて簡潔に述べてください。また、話の冒頭で短いトピック文を使い、その後に具体的な行動を一つか二つだけ説明すると自然です。接続語(例えば "so" や "because")は適切に使い、長すぎる文を避けてください。

Ví dụ: No, I find it difficult to remember people's names. So, before I call someone, I usually check their name on my phone.

How do you remember people's names?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: 過去形と現在形が混在しているため時制を統一してください(ここでは現在の習慣なので現在形が適切です)。代名詞と名詞の使い方も改善が必要です("people's name" → "people's names"、"call his name" → "use their name")。また、接続語を使って理由や方法を整理するとより自然になります。具体例(メモを取る、連想法を使う)を一つ示すと良いです。

Ví dụ: I usually repeat people's names several times and try to use their name during the conversation. Also, I sometimes make a short note on my phone to help me remember.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 感情を表す表現は適切ですが、英語表現が不自然です("this is mean that" は誤り、"remember myself" も不自然)。より自然なフレーズ("it feels like they don't value me" や "it makes me feel unimportant")を使い、理由を一文で補足すると説得力が増します。語数は多くしすぎず、1〜2文でまとめてください。

Ví dụ: I feel disappointed because it makes me think they didn’t pay attention to me. It can make me feel a bit unimportant.

Do you often forget people's names?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 同じ内容の繰り返しが多く、冗長です。現在の習慣を述べる場合は現在形で一度述べ、続けて対処法を短く示してください("however" を入れるなら前後の構文を整えること)。冠詞や複数形の誤り("the people's name" → "people's names")にも注意してください。具体的な対処法(メモ、関連付け)を一つ示すと良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often do. To cope with this, I usually write down names in my phone and try to repeat them during the conversation.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× No, it isn't because I'm not good with remembering people's name.

No, it isn't, because I'm not good at remembering people's names.

The correct preposition with 'good' is 'good at' not 'good with' and 'people's name' should be plural 'people's names' to match general reference; also a comma improves sentence flow.

Singular and plural issue

× So before I call someone I usually check the name again and again.

So before I call someone, I usually check their name again and again.

Use a comma after the introductory clause. 'Someone' is singular but using 'their' is acceptable gender-neutral pronoun; 'the name' is better as 'their name' to indicate that person's name.

Past tense issue

× Well, I checked the people's name many times.

Well, I check people's names many times.

The question 'How do you remember...' expects present habitual tense: use present simple 'check'. Also use plural 'people's names' to refer generally.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× In addition, when I talk to someone I call his name.

In addition, when I talk to someone, I use their name.

'His' assumes gender; 'their' is gender-neutral. Native phrasing is 'use their name' or 'call them by their name'; add a comma after the subordinate clause.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Well, I feel disappointed because this is mean that people don't remember myself

Well, I feel disappointed because it means that people don't remember me.

Use 'it means' not 'this is mean'. 'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and incorrect here; use the object pronoun 'me'.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I often forget people's names, so I check the people's name again and again however I'm not good at remembering people's name.

Yes, I often forget people's names, so I check their names again and again; however, I'm not good at remembering names.

Use plural 'people's names' and avoid repeating 'people's name'. Replace with 'their names' or simply 'names'. Add proper punctuation before 'however' and a comma after it.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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