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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Not really, because I can't remember others name and I don't have talent for remembering sentences. As a result I always try to recognize everyone's faces and their names.

Giám khảo

How do you remember people's names?

Thí sinh

I always try to write down their names and then stick photos which include their images. However, I think it's not a good thing for me because I. Remember very difficulty.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Thí sinh

I think it's just so so because I don't remember others name and I feel embarrassed at that time. So if other can't remember my name I feel very happy and I think they may don't have talents. For remembering others and then I feel very balanced.

Giám khảo

Do you often forget people's names?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course. I remember that two years ago I was a freshman and I couldn't remember my teacher's name, so he felt very embarrassed and I even forgot. Her last name and first name. So the atmosphere was very bad.

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Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更直接并用一到两句表达总观点,然后用一两句具体说明方法或原因。注意语法(复数、冠词)和简洁性,避免重复。可以使用连接词如 "so", "because", 或 "however" 来衔接句子。

Ví dụ: Not really. I find it difficult to remember names, so I focus on remembering people's faces instead. For example, I try to associate a person's face with a distinctive feature or where I met them to help recall their name later.

How do you remember people's names?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答要先给出明确的方法,然后用一两句说明效果或问题。注意句子完整性和拼写或语法错误,避免句子中断。可以提供具体步骤或例子,使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: I usually write down their name and attach a photo in my phone contacts so I can review it later. However, this doesn't always work well because I sometimes forget to review the notes, so now I also repeat the name aloud when I meet someone.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答情感时要保持一致与礼貌,避免矛盾表述(例如一方面尴尬一方面高兴),并用具体原因支持感受。使用连贯连接词(e.g. "because", "so", "however")。同时注意表达礼貌与成熟的态度。

Ví dụ: I usually feel a bit embarrassed if someone can't remember my name because I know how awkward that can be. However, I try to be understanding since people are often busy or stressed, so I don't take it personally.

Do you often forget people's names?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答应直接说明频率,然后用一两个具体例子支持。注意人称和代词一致(教师性别),以及句子连贯性,避免断句。提供具体细节(如何时、如何发生)会更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget names. For example, when I was a freshman two years ago I forgot my teacher's full name during class introductions, which made the situation awkward. Since then, I've tried using name cards and repeating names to remember them better.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Not really, because I can't remember others name and I don't have talent for remembering sentences.

Not really, because I can't remember other people's names and I don't have a talent for remembering names.

句中 "others name" 是所有格错误且单复数不匹配,应为 "other people's names"(其他人的名字)。另外原句的 "talent for remembering sentences" 意义不合,考题是记名字,应该是 "a talent for remembering names"。建议使用所有格结构(other people's)并使名词复数以匹配泛指多人。

Verb + -ing form

× As a result I always try to recognize everyone's faces and their names.

As a result, I always try to remember everyone's faces and names.

动词 "recognize" 虽可用但与后文搭配不自然,且一般说记住名字用 "remember" 更恰当。另外 "everyone's faces and their names" 可简化为 "everyone's faces and names"。同时在连接词后加逗号更符合书写规范。

Verb in the present participle form

× I always try to write down their names and then stick photos which include their images.

I always try to write down their names and then stick photos that include their images.

这里用关系代词时更自然用 "that" 而不是 "which"(限定性从句)。此外 "stick photos which include their images" 结构有些冗余,可简化为 "stick photos of them"。建议改成 "stick photos of them"。

Sentence structure errors

× However, I think it's not a good thing for me because I. Remember very difficulty.

However, I think it's not a good thing for me because I remember very poorly.

原句中有断句错误("because I. Remember")且用词不当。"remember very difficulty" 语法错误,应该使用副词修饰动词,例如 "remember very poorly" 或 "have great difficulty remembering"。建议避免在句中随意断句并使用恰当的副词或短语。

Singular and plural issue

× I think it's just so so because I don't remember others name and I feel embarrassed at that time.

I think it's just so-so because I don't remember other people's names and I feel embarrassed at that time.

同样出现了 "others name" 的所有格和单复数错误,应为 "other people's names"。此外 "so so" 常用连字符或连写为 "so-so"。建议使用正确的所有格和复数形式。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× So if other can't remember my name I feel very happy and I think they may don't have talents.

So if others can't remember my name, I feel very happy and I think they may not have the talent for remembering names.

"other" 用法错误,应为 "others"(复数代词)。"they may don't have" 违反助动词后用否定结构,正确为 "may not have"。另外 "talents" 用复数不自然,改为不可数短语 "the talent for remembering names" 更恰当。建议注意代词数和情态动词后的否定形式。

Sentence structure errors

× For remembering others and then I feel very balanced.

When it comes to remembering others, I feel quite neutral about it.

原句语序和表达不自然("For remembering others and then I feel very balanced"),"feel very balanced" 用法不正确。可用 "feel neutral" 或 "feel indifferent" 表达不在意或平衡的情绪。建议重构句子以符合英语习惯表达。

Present tense issue

× Yes, of course. I remember that two years ago I was a freshman and I couldn't remember my teacher's name, so he felt very embarrassed and I even forgot.

Yes, of course. I remember that two years ago I was a freshman and I couldn't remember my teacher's name, so he felt embarrassed and I even forgot his last name and first name.

句子中时态总体可,但原句断句和代词不清(最后一句单独成句不完整)。原文有遗漏标点且 "he felt very embarrassed and I even forgot." 不完整,应接明忘了什么。建议补全为 "I even forgot his last name and first name",并删除不必要的 "very" 或根据语境保留。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Her last name and first name.

His last name and first name.

前文指的是 "my teacher",若教师为男性应使用 "his"。原句单独成句且代词性别不一致,造成混乱。建议保持代词与先行词性别一致并将其并入上一句,以免成为不完整句子。

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