Name— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 内容が不明瞭で文法と語彙の誤りが多いため、まずは簡潔な主題文を使い、理由を1つか2つで具体的に述べる練習をしてください。接続詞（because, so, and）を適切に使って文をつなぎ、冗長な表現や不要な語を避けてください。発音や語の選択（remember, name, people）を正しく使えるように繰り返し練習し、1〜2文で明確に答える癖をつけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names because I often meet many people at work. To improve, I try to repeat their name immediately and associate it with a distinguishing feature.

Gợi ý: 答えが混乱していて具体性が欠けています。まずは主題文で方法を一つ明言し、その後に具体的な手順や例を1〜2文で補足してください。接続語（for example, then, so）を使い、手順を論理的に示す練習をしてください。また不自然な語や地名（Hokkaido）は関係がなければ使わないでください。

Ví dụ: I usually repeat the person's name immediately after hearing it and use a visual association. For example, if someone is named Mark and wears glasses, I think "Mark with glasses," and repeat it in my mind several times.

Gợi ý: 発言が不適切で意味が通りません。まずは感情を直接述べ、なぜそう感じるかを一つの理由で説明してください（例：hurt, disappointed, indifferent）。攻撃的な語や不明瞭な表現は避け、簡潔に1〜2文で表現する練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: If someone forgets my name, I feel a little disappointed because it suggests they were not paying attention. However, I understand that people meet many others, so I usually don't take it personally.

Gợi ý: 答えは直球だが文法と語順が不正確です。現在形や頻度を表す語（often, sometimes）を正しく使い、改善のために行っている具体的な方法を1文で付け加えてください。主語・動詞の一致や動詞の形（forget → forget/forgot）に注意してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget people's names, especially when I meet many people at once. To fix this, I try to repeat their name and write it down soon after meeting them.

× I'm very forward to knowing the people's name and I know his mistakes against someone's name and so I have to try more of it to member people's nation.

✓ I'm very eager to learn people's names, and I notice when someone mispronounces a name, so I have to try harder to remember people's names.

The student used 'forward' incorrectly; 'eager' or 'looking forward to' are correct. 'the people's name' is incorrect article and singular/plural — use 'people's names'. 'member people's nation' is meaningless; intended 'remember people's names'. Use 'try harder' not 'try more of it'. Also pronoun use 'his mistakes against someone's name' is unclear; rephrased to 'notice when someone mispronounces a name' for clarity. Japanese: 'forward'はこの文脈では不適切で、'eager'や'looking forward to'が適切です。'the people's name'の定冠詞と単数/複数の誤りを修正し、'member people's nation'は意味不明なので'remember people's names'に訂正します。'try harder'が自然です。

× After I posting that person with Hokkaido memorized name and I measured his face and his name check his name on his face in the house many times.

✓ After posting that person's name from Hokkaido in my memory, I pictured his face and checked his name against his face many times at home.

Use of gerund and verb forms incorrect: 'After I posting' should be 'After posting' or 'After I posted'. 'measured his face' is unnatural; use 'pictured his face'. 'his name check his name on his face' is ungrammatical; rephrased to 'checked his name against his face'. Also 'in the house' -> 'at home'. Japanese: 'After I posting'は動詞形が間違っており、'After posting'や'After I posted'が正しいです。'measured his face'は不自然で、'pictured his face'が適切です。'his name check his name on his face'は文法的に誤りなので'checked his name against his face'と直しました。'in the house'は'at home'が自然です。

× The idea that They went personal nature can fail to be brand new. I was very happy because as I said if people live and you But people without interest in interest to me. So I was very pleased to be said to fuck.

✓ When people can't remember my name, it feels personal and disappointing. I feel unhappy if people show no interest in me.

Many pronoun and phrasing errors: 'They went personal nature' unclear — intended 'it feels personal'. 'can fail to be brand new' unclear; replaced with 'disappointing'. 'I was very happy because as I said if people live and you But people without interest in interest to me' is incoherent; simplified to 'I feel unhappy if people show no interest in me'. The vulgar phrase at the end is inappropriate and removed. Japanese: 代名詞の使い方や表現が混乱しており、'They went personal nature'は意味不明で'it feels personal'に直しました。全体を意味が通るように簡潔にしました。下品な表現は削除しました。

× Yes, I have forget people's name. As usual I want it to name but I sometimes mistake so I have to try more harder to remember and at least the people's names.

✓ Yes, I forget people's names. Usually I try to remember names, but I sometimes make mistakes, so I have to try harder to remember at least people's names.

Tense and verb form errors: 'I have forget' should be 'I forget' or 'I have forgotten'. Use consistent present tense 'I forget'. 'want it to name' is incorrect — use 'try to remember names'. 'sometimes mistake' -> 'sometimes make mistakes'. 'more harder' is incorrect; use 'harder' (comparative). 'the people's names' -> 'people's names' without 'the'. Japanese: 'I have forget'は誤った時制と形で、'I forget'または'I have forgotten'が正しいです。'want it to name'は意味が通らないので'mry to remember names'に直しました。'more harder'は二重比較で誤りなので'harder'に修正しました。