Name— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize the response with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting points, and a brief concluding remark. Avoid filler words and grammatical errors (e.g., 'vocabularies' -> 'words'; 'for Westerners name' -> 'Western names'). Use linking words (however, but, on the other hand) to contrast. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends. I find Western names harder to remember because they often have unfamiliar sounds, so I usually repeat them quietly to myself when I first hear them. In contrast, I remember names from my own country more easily because the pronunciation and structure are familiar.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give two specific techniques with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., 'repeat for several times' -> 'repeat them several times'; 'they would tell me again' -> 'they tell me again'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually remember names by repeating them several times right after meeting someone. If that doesn't work, I politely ask them to repeat their name or use it in conversation to fix it in my memory.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence about your current feeling, then briefly explain the change and give a specific example. Watch grammar and collocations (e.g., 'in their own pace' -> 'at their own pace'). Use linking words (but, however, so) to show contrast between past and present feelings.

Ví dụ: I don't mind anymore when people forget my name. I used to get annoyed, but after forgetting others' names myself I realized it's natural, so now I simply repeat my name or remind them without taking it personally.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear topic sentence and then give a specific condition when you would forget a name. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I don't met' -> 'I don't meet'; 'a classmate that haven't seen' -> 'a classmate whom I haven't seen'). Use linking words (however, for example) to introduce the exception.

Ví dụ: Not really — I don't meet many new people, so I usually remember the names I know. However, if I see a classmate I haven't seen for ten years, I would probably struggle to remember their name.

× I think it depends because basically for Westerners name, it consists of two vocabularies to me and sometimes it's really hard to remember when someone else just said it like the first time I always have to remember by repeating it and for people from my country, yes, it's

✓ I think it depends because basically for Westerners' names, they consist of two words to me, and sometimes it's really hard to remember when someone says it for the first time; I always have to remember by repeating it, and for people from my country, yes, it's easier.

The sentence misuses articles and noun forms: 'Westerners name' should be possessive plural 'Westerners' names' and 'vocabularies' is incorrect for 'words.' Also 'someone else just said it like the first time' is ungrammatical; use 'says it for the first time.' Suggestions: use possessive for groups ('Westerners' names'), use countable noun 'words' not 'vocabularies', and break long run-on sentence into clearer clauses.

× I remember people's names by just maybe repeat for several times immediately after they tell me or just ask them directly if I don't remember their name and they would tell me again.

✓ I remember people's names by maybe repeating them several times immediately after they tell me, or I just ask them directly if I don't remember their name and they will tell me again.

The verb form 'repeat' should be the gerund 'repeating' after 'by' and must agree with plural 'names' as 'them.' Also tense/modal consistency: use 'will' for future possibility rather than 'would.' Suggestions: use gerund after 'by' and match pronouns ('them') to plural 'names.'

× I used to be really sensitive about this like I would be mad if people couldn't remember my name but after quite a few times I couldn't remember others name I started to realise that it's not a big deal and also people just remember in their own pace.

✓ I used to be really sensitive about this; I would be mad if people couldn't remember my name, but after quite a few times that I couldn't remember others' names, I started to realise that it's not a big deal, and people just remember at their own pace.

Errors: 'others name' needs plural possessive 'others' names'; 'in their own pace' should be 'at their own pace.' Also insert 'that' for clarity in 'times that I couldn't.' Suggestions: use possessive for others' names and correct preposition 'at' with 'pace.'

× So now I don't feel sad anymore. Maybe I would just tell them again until they remember.

✓ So now I don't feel sad anymore. Maybe I will just tell them again until they remember.

This is chiefly a modal/tense choice: 'would' suggests habitual past or conditional; present decision fits 'will.' Use 'will' for future intention. Suggestion: use 'will' to express likely future actions.

× Not really because I don't met I don't meet a lot of new people so there's no chance to forget people's name but if it was someone from very long time ago in the class, for example, a classmate that haven't seen her or him for at least ten years then I probably wouldn't remember their name.

✓ Not really, because I don't meet a lot of new people, so there's no chance to forget people's names. But if it was someone from a very long time ago in class, for example, a classmate whom I haven't seen for at least ten years, then I probably wouldn't remember their name.

Multiple issues: 'met' is wrong form—use 'meet.' 'People's name' should be plural 'people's names.' 'That haven't seen her or him' is incorrect; use relative pronoun 'whom' and match verb: 'whom I haven't seen.' Also simplify gendered 'her or him' to 'them' or restructure. Suggestions: ensure correct verb forms, plural nouns for plural possessors, and use appropriate relative pronoun and pronoun agreement.