Part 1
Giám khảo
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Thí sinh
It depends. Like uh, if if I need to say someone's name in Mandarin, then in a class of 50 people it's really hard for me to remember at the first time. But I think English name is relatively easy to remember, so I like to call.
Giám khảo
How do you remember people's names?
Thí sinh
Basically, I will write down that person's name if I meet him or her the first time or like write it in my form and but for a long time if I got more familiar with this person I
Giám khảo
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Thí sinh
I think it's fine for me because I also sometimes forget other people's name and to avoid this problem I would tell my friends that they can just call my English name that is easier.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget people's names?
Thí sinh
No, I don't think so. I think I quite able to remember the name that I contact frequently with that person and usually I just say the nickname
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 答题结构基本清晰,但存在填充词(如 uh, like)、重复(if if)、语法和词序问题(at the first time → the first time / say someone's name in Mandarin → remember someone's Mandarin name)以及表达不够简洁具体。建议:1) 删除无意义的填充词,保持句子简洁;2) 使用一到两句的结构:直接回答+简要原因;3) 改善语法和词序;4) 可加入一个具体例子或比较来增强内容。
Ví dụ: It depends. I find it harder to remember Mandarin names in a large class of about 50 people because the names are unfamiliar to me. By contrast, English names seem easier to recall, so I usually use English names when I can.
How do you remember people's names?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中断且句子冗长,语法错误(the first time → the first time I meet them; 'in my form' 表达不清),缺少连贯性与完成句。建议:1) 用一到两句完成回答,先给方法(writing down, repeating names),再给细节或习惯;2) 用连词连接顺畅;3) 提供具体例子说明何时会不再记但熟悉后会记住。
Ví dụ: I usually write a new person's name down the first time I meet them and repeat it aloud once or twice to help it stick. If I meet someone regularly, I don't need to write it down anymore because I soon remember it.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且态度友好,但句子较长且可以更精简,细节可更具体(比如说明为什么说英名更容易,或举例)。注意语法(other people's name → other people's names)。建议:1) 直接陈述感受并解释原因;2) 提及具体做法或例子;3) 保持一句或两句,避免过多从句。
Ví dụ: I don't mind when people forget my name because I sometimes forget others' names too. To make things easier, I usually tell new friends to call me by my English name, which is simpler and quicker to remember.
Do you often forget people's names?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但语法有误(I quite able → I am quite able; the name that I contact frequently with that person → the names of people I contact frequently)且表达不够具体。建议:1) 改正语法并用一两句说明记忆方法;2) 给出具体例子(比如工作或学校场合)或说明使用昵称的情况;3) 使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often forget names. I'm usually able to remember the names of people I see regularly, and I often use nicknames for friends because they're easier to recall.
× It depends. Like uh, if if I need to say someone's name in Mandarin, then in a class of 50 people it's really hard for me to remember at the first time. But I think English name is relatively easy to remember, so I like to call.
✓ It depends. Like, if I need to say someone's name in Mandarin, then in a class of 50 people it's really hard for me to remember at first. But I think English names are relatively easy to remember, so I like to use them.
问题类型:现在时态与名词单复数。句中“at the first time”用法不自然,应为“at first”。“English name” 应为复数“English names”或用代词“them”,因为泛指英语名字。此外“like to call” 不完整,应明确“use them” 或“call people by them”。建议:用“at first”表示“起初”,把“English name”改为复数或用代词,并把“like to call”补全为“like to use them / call people by them”。
× Basically, I will write down that person's name if I meet him or her the first time or like write it in my form and but for a long time if I got more familiar with this person I
✓ Basically, I will write down that person's name if I meet him or her for the first time, or write it in my form. But after a long time, if I get more familiar with this person, I ...
问题类型:动词 -ing/时态与句子结构错误。原句缺少“for”在“for the first time”,时态不一致用“got”应为一般现在时“get”。句子结尾不完整。建议:使用“for the first time”,保持时态一致(使用一般现在或将来时),并完成句子,例如“... I won't need to write it down.”
× I think it's fine for me because I also sometimes forget other people's name and to avoid this problem I would tell my friends that they can just call my English name that is easier.
✓ I think it's fine because I also sometimes forget other people's names, and to avoid this problem I would tell my friends that they can just call me by my English name because it's easier.
问题类型:代词与名词复数使用错误。应为“people's names”(复数);“call my English name” 不自然,应为“call me by my English name”。此外“that is easier” 更自然为“because it's easier”。建议:把“name”改为复数,使用“call me by ...”结构,并用“because it's easier” 说明原因。
× No, I don't think so. I think I quite able to remember the name that I contact frequently with that person and usually I just say the nickname
✓ No, I don't think so. I think I'm quite able to remember the names of people I contact frequently, and usually I just use their nicknames.
问题类型:现在时态与主谓一致、名词复数、介词使用。原句“I quite able” 缺少系动词“am”;“the name that I contact frequently with that person” 语序和介词不正确,应为“names of people I contact frequently”或“people I contact frequently”。最后“say the nickname” 更自然为“use their nicknames”。建议:加上“am”,将名词用复数并调整为自然的名词短语,使用“use their nicknames”。