Part 1
Giám khảo
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course I usually write down people's names in my notebooks.
Giám khảo
How do you remember people's names?
Thí sinh
Like I say, I usually lie down people's nests in my noble and I talk with others to remember its hobby
Giám khảo
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Thí sinh
Actually, I feel very sad because my name is very difficult
Giám khảo
Do you often forget people's names?
Thí sinh
Yes if a long time not see them I forgot them I forgot the names
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且相关,但用词和表达可以更自然,且可补充简短原因或方法。建议用更自然的表达(例如 use 'write down names in a notebook' 而不是 'in my notebooks'即可),并加一句说明为什么这样做有帮助。保持在最多五句内,并使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find it fairly easy because I usually write down people's names in a small notebook when I meet them, so I can check later if I forget.
How do you remember people's names?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 答案有明显的发音和拼写错误,句子不清晰且含义混乱。需要使用正确动词和名词(例如 'write down people's names in my notebook','ask about their hobbies'),并用连接词使逻辑清楚。建议重构为一到两句,先给出主要方法,再举一两个具体细节。
Ví dụ: I usually write down people's names in my notebook and repeat their names in conversation. I also ask about their hobbies and associate the name with something memorable, like 'Emma who loves painting.'
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了情感,但句子不完整且可更自然和具体。建议补充原因或举例说明如何应对,并使用连接词如 'because' 或 'so' 使表达更流畅。保持简短(最多两到三句)。
Ví dụ: I feel a bit disappointed because my name is unusual, so I usually gently remind them and give an easy nickname or a short story to help them remember.
Do you often forget people's names?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明白但语法和流畅性有问题,重复且缺少连接词。建议用一到两句清晰表达原因和频率,使用连接词如 'if' 或 'when',并可提出自己减少遗忘的方法作为补充。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget names if I haven't seen someone for a long time. To avoid this I try to review my notes or look at photos so I can recall their names.
× Yes, of course I usually write down people's names in my notebooks.
✓ Yes, of course. I usually write down people's names in my notebook.
原句中主要问题不是动名词,而是单复数和标点。将"notebooks"改为单数"notebook"更符合语境(一个人通常用一本笔记本记名字);并在句中加入句号分隔短句,使表达更自然清晰。建议:注意可数名词的单复数用法以及句子断句。
× Like I say, I usually lie down people's nests in my noble and I talk with others to remember its hobby
✓ Like I said, I usually write down people's names in my notebook, and I ask them about their hobbies to remember them.
原句存在多处结构错误:"Like I say"时态不当,应为过去或习惯表达"Like I said";"lie down"用错,应为"write down"(记下);"nests"拼写错误,应为"names";"noble"应为"notebook";"its hobby"代词和名词搭配错误,应为复数或指人用"their hobbies"或直接用动词宾语"to remember them"。建议:复习常用固定搭配(write down, notebook, hobby)和代词一致性,句子较长时用逗号或分句分开。
× How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
✓ How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
该句本身语法正确,使用现在时描述一般情况恰当。无需改动。解释:现在时用于询问常态反应是正确的。
× Actually, I feel very sad because my name is very difficult
✓ Actually, I feel very sad because my name is difficult to remember.
原句末尾"my name is very difficult"缺少补足信息,应补充不定式短语"to remember"使句子完整且语义清楚。建议:注意使用形容词后接不定式或名词短语以完成比较结构(difficult to do)。
× Do you often forget people's names?
✓ Do you often forget people's names?
该疑问句使用一般现在时询问频率,语法正确,无需修改。解释:表示习惯性动作应使用一般现在时。
× Yes if a long time not see them I forgot them I forgot the names
✓ Yes. If I don't see them for a long time, I forget their names.
原句时态和句式混乱:条件句应为现在时(If I don't see them for a long time),主句描述一般结果用一般现在时(I forget their names),而原句中使用了过去时"forgot"不当;此外语序与介词短语位置需要调整。建议:学习条件句第一类(真实可能)及时间状语的正确位置,注意人称代词与所有格(their names)。