Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接说明了解得不多，再简要解释原因并给出一个具体事实。"on a large scale"和"Same as me"在这里不自然；可用"in any detail"和"I’m no exception"。注意 birthplace 应写成一个词，并避免表达过于绕。

Ví dụ: I haven’t studied my hometown’s history in much detail, and I’m no exception to the tendency to overlook what’s familiar. However, I do know that it was the birthplace of Li Bai, a famous Chinese poet.

Gợi ý: 回答切题，例子也具体。可以减少重复的"gather"，并用转折连接词自然引出家乡的不同习俗。"on a Spring Festival day"和"during lunch time"可分别改为更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned a lot of local customs from my parents, relatives and teachers. For instance, families usually get together during the Spring Festival. Unlike people in many other parts of China, we normally have our reunion meal at lunchtime.

Gợi ý: 地理位置和饮食习惯的联系明确，但一个句子中连续使用多个"so"，显得冗长。可将信息拆成两句，并用"humid"代替较笼统的"wet"；饮食与潮湿气候之间的说法宜避免讲得过于绝对。

Ví dụ: My hometown is in southwestern China, in a basin. The climate there is quite humid, and spicy food is a big part of the local cuisine. Some people believe it helps them cope with the damp weather.

Gợi ý: 答案中有明显的识别或表达错误："a ton attributed to a city"不清楚，"like city Shanghai or Beijing"也不自然。请直接说明家乡的规模，再用一个简单对比补充生活节奏。

Ví dụ: It’s a relatively small town, especially compared with major cities like Shanghai or Beijing. Life there is quieter and more relaxed, which I really enjoy.

Gợi ý: 态度清楚，也提到了食物和当地人，但"everyone should be proud"没有直接解释你个人喜欢的原因。注意修正"would is"和"I I'm"等口误，并用更自然的"delicious"或"tasty"表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially like the food because I grew up eating it, so it feels familiar and comforting. The people are friendly too, which makes the town feel welcoming.

Gợi ý: 词汇有亮点，但开头的"it's a cuisine"表达不准确，且"a one second overtime"、"every details"和主谓一致有误。直接说最喜欢的是川菜，再用具体烹饪特点支持观点，避免过度追求复杂表达。

Ví dụ: What I like most is Sichuan cuisine. Cooks use a careful balance of spices and control the heat closely, so even a small change can affect the flavour. I think this attention to detail is one reason the food is so distinctive.

Gợi ý: 观点明确，也解释了吸烟对他人的影响。不过应使用"people smoking"或"people who smoke"，并避免"relentlessly"这种不太贴切的用词。"affine"应为"fine"；用简洁表达说明需要禁烟规定即可。

Ví dụ: I dislike people smoking in crowded public places because second-hand smoke can affect children, older people and pregnant women. I think smoking rules should be enforced more strictly, and people who break them should be fined.

Gợi ý: 时间表达应使用过去时，因为你已经离开家乡上大学；"know every street quite familiarly"和"main land box"不自然或含义不清。可说熟悉主要道路和近路，并删去重复的熟悉信息。

Ví dụ: I lived there for 18 years before moving away to attend university. I know the main roads and a lot of shortcuts, so I can get around the town easily whenever I visit.

Gợi ý: 熟悉的环境和亲友是有用的理由，但"like my parents and my long term friends living there"结构不完整，俗语"golden pilot"也用错了。建议直接列出家人和老朋友，并用自然的"comfort of home"收尾。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I feel comfortable there because my parents and many of my longtime friends live nearby. I also know the area well, so it feels like home.

Gợi ý: 未来计划有对比，但时间线表达较混乱。"senior years"、"taste every moment"和"for the use and like"不符合这里的自然表达。建议清楚区分毕业后的计划与退休后的打算，并用"experience life in a big city"。

Ví dụ: Probably not in the near future. After I graduate, I’d like to move to a big city to explore career opportunities. However, I may return to my hometown later in life because the slower pace would suit me well.

Gợi ý: 提到了饮食和生活节奏，内容方向合适，但"a research"和关于排名的说法不够准确，也容易分散重点。可以用具体、可靠的特点描写川菜，并补充当地人的生活氛围；避免笼统地说"everyone"。

Ví dụ: My hometown is known for Sichuan food, which is famous for its bold flavours and use of chilli and Sichuan pepper. The city also has a relaxed atmosphere, and people often enjoy spending time in teahouses or eating out with friends.

Gợi ý: 回答切题，并指出川菜不只有麻辣这一点很具体。注意避免"it is it's"，并将"label it with"改为"associate it with"。可举一个其他口味的例子，让说明更自然。

Ví dụ: My hometown is famous for Sichuan cuisine, which is well known throughout China and abroad. People often associate it with spicy and numbing flavours, but it also includes milder and slightly sweet dishes.

Gợi ý: 回答直接，但"academically important points"和重复的"it is this reason...for this reason"不自然。可说明学校课程更关注哪些内容，并用一个清楚的原因解释家乡历史涉及较少。

Ví dụ: Not really. At school, we mainly studied the history of China as a whole, rather than the history of my hometown. As a result, I only learned a few local historical facts.

Gợi ý: 通过观察与大城市进行比较，理由也清楚。"rarer to see"和"the reason for that is people exploring"不自然；可分别改为"less visible"和"many move to..."。"conduct a census"比"make a census"更准确。

Ví dụ: I don’t think there are as many young people as in major cities like Shanghai or Beijing. I haven’t conducted a survey, but many young adults seem to move away for university or better job opportunities.

Gợi ý: 观点和理由明确，但"a quite small place"、"basic and low salary jobs"及"good place and ideal condition"搭配不自然。可具体说工作机会较少、薪资较低，再与大城市的行业和发展机会作简洁对比。

Ví dụ: No, not really. My hometown is small, and there are fewer well-paid jobs, especially in high-tech industries. Young people may have more chances to build their careers in larger cities, where there are more employers and opportunities.

× I haven't learned about my hometown's history in a large scale because people tend to treasure what they don't have but often ignore what they already own.

✓ I haven't learned about my hometown's history on a large scale because people tend to treasure what they don't have but often ignore what they already own.

固定搭配是“on a large scale”，表示“在大范围内／大规模地”；这里不能用“in”。

× Same as me.

✓ It's the same for me.

原句缺少谓语动词，是不完整句。可以加上“It's”构成完整句，表达“我也是如此”。

× But the time of gathering in our hometown is very different from other places in China.

✓ But the time of gathering in our hometown is very different from that in other places in China.

原句比较的是“家乡的聚餐时间”和“其他地方”，比较对象不一致。用“that”代替前面的“the time”，表示“其他地方的聚餐时间”，比较才平行。

× My hometown is in the southwestern part of China and it is a basin actually, so it's very special in terms of weather because it's wet, so people there like to eat spicy food to get rid of moisture.

✓ My hometown is in the southwestern part of China, and it is actually a basin. It's very special in terms of weather because it's wet, so people there like to eat spicy food to get rid of moisture.

“because”和“so”不能在同一个因果结构中重复表达“因为……所以……”。这里保留“because”说明原因，并用句号把前面的信息分开。

× It is actually a small place because it's a ton attributed to a city actually, so it is relatively small compared to like city Shanghai or Beijing.

✓ It is actually a small place because it's a town attached to a city, so it is relatively small compared with cities like Shanghai or Beijing.

“Shanghai”和“Beijing”在这里是两座城市的例子，因此应使用复数“cities”，而不是单数“city”。

× I like it because the food there would is very delicious for me.

✓ I like it because the food there is very delicious for me.

情态动词“would”后应接动词原形，不能接“is”。此处表达一般事实，删去多余的“would”即可。

× Maybe just because I I'm used to it and the people there are friendly.

✓ Maybe it's just because I'm used to it and the people there are friendly.

原句重复使用了“I”，且缺少完整的主句结构。改为“Maybe it's just because...”后句子结构完整；“I'm”中只保留一个“I”。

× And it is this attention to every details that make the Sichuan cuisine so special and popular.

✓ And it is this attention to every detail that makes Sichuan cuisine so special and popular.

“every”后应接单数名词，因此应为“every detail”，不能用“details”。

× And it is this attention to every details that make the Sichuan cuisine so special and popular.

✓ And it is this attention to every detail that makes Sichuan cuisine so special and popular.

定语从句中的主语是单数“attention”，所以谓语动词应使用第三人称单数“makes”，而不是“make”。

× I strongly dislike people smoke relentlessly in the street without consideration for other people's health, like the old people or children or pregnant women.

✓ I strongly dislike people smoking relentlessly in the street without consideration for other people's health, like old people, children, or pregnant women.

“dislike”后面可以接动名词短语。此处描述不喜欢的行为，应使用“people smoking”，而不是“people smoke”。

× I've been living in my hometown for 18 years before I went to my university, so I'm quite familiar with it.

✓ I lived in my hometown for 18 years before I went to university, so I'm quite familiar with it.

“before I went”明确表示过去时间，因此前面的居住经历也应使用一般过去时“lived”，不能用现在完成进行时“I've been living”。

× I know every street quite familiarly so I can get around quickly because I know the shortcuts and the main land box of the city.

✓ I know every street very well, so I can get around quickly because I know the shortcuts and the main landmarks of the city.

“familiar”通常表示“熟悉的”，不适合用“familiarly”来修饰“know”。表达“很熟悉／很了解”时，可以说“know ... very well”。

× Yes, I really enjoy living there and I think mostly because I'm quite familiar with the place like my parents and my long term friends living there.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy living there, mostly because I'm quite familiar with the place and my parents and long-term friends live there.

“I think mostly because...”缺少完整的主句结构；后面的“my parents and ... friends living there”也没有谓语动词。改为“mostly because...”并使用谓语“live”，句子结构就完整了。

× So it's very suitable for me to enjoy and taste every moment of my rest of life.

✓ So it's very suitable for me to enjoy and taste every moment of the rest of my life.

固定表达是“the rest of my life”（我余生／我剩下的人生），其中“rest”前需要定冠词“the”。

× But for the use and like after the graduation of my bachelor, I will go to big city to try.

✓ But after graduating with my bachelor's degree, I will go to a big city to try.

“city”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里应说“a big city”。

× According to a research, the Sichuan cuisine is the most popular one or the second most popular one across China apart from Shanghai.

✓ According to research, Sichuan cuisine is the most popular or the second most popular across China, apart from Shanghai.

“research”通常作不可数名词，泛指研究时不加“a”。此外，表示川菜这一类菜肴时，通常不需要在“Sichuan cuisine”前加“the”。

× I think it is it's cuisine, Sichuan cuisine that is very well known across China and even at the international level.

✓ I think it is its cuisine—Sichuan cuisine—that is very well known across China and even at the international level.

“it's”是“it is”或“it has”的缩写；表示“它的”时要用所有格“its”。

× But most of the time people tend to label it with spicy and mala.

✓ But most of the time people tend to label it as spicy and mala.

表示“把某物归类为／描述为……”时，常用“label ... as ...”，而不是“label ... with ...”。

× So I think it is this reason that it is for this reason that the textbooks and teachers did not pay attention to it.

✓ So I think this is why the textbooks and teachers did not pay attention to it.

原句把两种表达原因的结构“It is this reason...”和“It is for this reason that...”重复拼接在一起，导致句子结构错误。选用“It is why...”这一种结构即可。

× Even though I didn't make a census, I observed that people aged 18 to 30 are rarer to see compared with big cities like Shanghai or Beijing.

✓ Even though I didn't make a census, I observed that people aged 18 to 30 are less common in my hometown than in big cities like Shanghai or Beijing.

原句把“people”与“big cities”直接比较，比较对象不一致。改后比较的是家乡和大城市中年轻人的常见程度，比较对象更清楚、平行。

× I think the reason for that is people exploring their job opportunities or study opportunities in big cities.

✓ I think the reason for that is that people explore job or study opportunities in big cities.

“the reason ... is”后面需要接完整的原因从句，通常用“that”引导。原句的“people exploring”不是完整的从句，改为“people explore”后结构完整。

× No, I don't think so because my hometown is a quite small place with basic and low salary jobs and most of them are much less demanding than the jobs in big cities with high tech.

✓ No, I don't think so because my hometown is quite a small place with basic and low-salary jobs, and most of them are much less demanding than the jobs in big cities with high tech.

程度副词“quite”应放在冠词“a”之前，正确语序是“quite a small place”，而不是“a quite small place”。

× So I don't think it's a good place and ideal condition for younger people to sharpen their skill set for career prospects.

✓ So I don't think it's a good place and an ideal condition for younger people to sharpen their skill set for career prospects.

“condition”在这里是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。与前面的“a good place”并列时，应补上“an”： “an ideal condition”。