Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 発音と語彙の正確さを改善する必要があります。地名や比較を述べるときは明瞭な発音と簡潔な言い回しを使い、不要な語（例："lullar", "drag"など）を避けてください。また、トピックセンテンスで直接答え、その後短い理由を付け加える構成にしてください。文は最大5文に抑え、意味のある比較を入れると高得点に繋がります。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Ismisano, which is in Osaka. I like it because it is quieter and more relaxed than central Osaka, with friendly neighborhoods and good local shops.

Gợi ý: 文法と語順を整え、具体例を加えてください。人々や食べ物について話すときは、まず主旨の文で答え、その後で具体的な特徴や例（料理の名前やエピソード）を述べると効果的です。語彙は正確な単語（例："friendly people", "local cuisine"）を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I like the people in Ismisano because they are friendly and helpful. For example, neighbours often offer advice, and the local cuisine, such as takoyaki and okonomiyaki, is delicious and popular among visitors.

Gợi ý: 時制と期間の表現を正確にしてください。『どのくらい住んでいるか』には現在完了形と具体的な年数を使い、続けて学歴や思い出を短く述べるとよいです。不要な繰り返し表現や意味不明な語は避け、文を簡潔にまとめてください。

Ví dụ: I have lived in Osaka for about twenty years. I went to elementary, junior high and high school there, so I have many fond memories of growing up in the city.

Gợi ý: 肯定の回答の後に、理由や具体的な例を続けてください。人口動向について話すときは時制を整え（現在形や未来形）、根拠や自分の意見を明確に述べると説得力が増します。語句は簡潔にし、希望を述べる際は理由を添えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think Ismisano is a good place for young people because it has safe parks, good schools and affordable housing. However, the number of young residents has been declining recently, so I hope more families will move here if job opportunities improve.

× My hometown is Ismisano in Osaka. It's a great place because Osaka ismisano, it's so lullar for more lullar than Osaka Shiri. It's drag.

✓ My hometown is Ismisano in Osaka. It's a great place because Ismisano is quieter and more relaxing than Osaka city.

The original contains many word choice errors and nonstandard words (lullar, Shiri, drag). Replace with appropriate adjectives: 'quieter' and 'more relaxing' to compare two places. Ensure correct noun: 'Osaka city'. Use comparative form for adjectives to compare two things.

× The person in Osaka is Misano speech friendly and helpful for a land parson and the local food is so delicious It was Italy is famous for

✓ The people in Misano are very friendly and helpful, and the local food is delicious; it is famous in the area.

Singular/plural and word order errors: 'The person' should be 'The people' when referring to residents generally. 'Misano speech' and 'land parson' are incorrect; use 'people' and 'helpful'. Also join clauses correctly and use present tense 'is famous' for general facts.

× I have lived in Osaka in twenty years the junior high, elementally and high school I have been to is in Osaka. It's a belly belly fond city.

✓ I have lived in Osaka for twenty years. My elementary, junior high, and high schools were in Osaka. It's a very fond city to me.

Use 'for' with a duration (have lived for twenty years). Correct school level order and past/present tense: schools 'were' or 'are located' in Osaka. 'Belly belly fond' is not English; replace with 'very dear' or 'fond' and place appropriately. Keep present perfect for current residence and past simple for past schooling.

× Yes, my hometown is so good place, but the number of younger people in Osaka was will be gradually decrease. So I hope the number of children will increase.

✓ Yes, my hometown is a very good place, but the number of young people in Osaka will gradually decrease. So I hope the number of children will increase.

Missing article: 'a good place' requires 'a'. 'Younger people' should be 'young people' for general reference. Incorrect tense combination 'was will be gradually decrease' is wrong; use future 'will gradually decrease'. Use correct word order and verb forms.