Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise: give the town name and one clear detail. Avoid hesitations, repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., "named by" → "called"). Use a simple topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: My hometown is Gomel, a city in southeastern Belarus. It’s known for its leafy parks and cold winters, which I have always liked.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence stating one or two things you like, then give specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example," "also"). Avoid vague phrases and incorrect words ("in my theory"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I especially like the riverside park in my hometown because it’s very scenic. For example, the park has wide walking paths and international awards for its design, and I often go there to relax.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a simple time phrase, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct tense ("lived" or "had lived") and avoid filler words ("uh"). Two sentences are enough.

Ví dụ: I lived in Gomel for 20 years before I went abroad to study. I have many fond memories there, such as summer festivals by the river.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion sentence and then support it with 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because," "for example"). Avoid vague or confusing comparisons and remove fillers. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think Gomel is a great place for young people because it has modern sports facilities and lively cultural events. For example, there are regular concerts and sports clubs that attract many young residents.

× OK, actually this is a beautiful place is located in the in the incredible part of our of our world in the cold Belarus and my hometown is named by the Gommel.

✓ OK, actually this beautiful place is located in the incredible part of our world in cold Belarus, and my hometown is called Gomel.

The original sentence incorrectly repeats 'is' and misuses 'is located' with an extra subject; 'this is a beautiful place is located' is ungrammatical (There be/structure). Also 'cold Belarus' does not need 'the' and 'named by the Gommel' is wrong: use 'called Gomel'. Suggestions: remove the extra 'is', use 'called' for names, and correct article use for place names. Applicable grammar problem type ID: 3.

× Actually, there are a lot of things that I have appreciated in my country and in my theory and the first is that it has a river which is located in a great park which is awarded in the world and everything that around you is fascinating me.

✓ Actually, there are a lot of things that I appreciate about my country and in my city. First, it has a river that runs through a large park which has received awards internationally, and everything around you fascinates me.

Multiple issues: 'appreciated in my country and in my theory' uses wrong preposition and the wrong word 'theory' (probably meant 'city'); 'which is located in a great park which is awarded in the world' is awkward: use 'runs through a large park' and 'has received awards internationally'. Also 'everything that around you is fascinating me' has incorrect preposition and verb form: use 'everything around you fascinates me'. Suggestions: replace incorrect prepositions ('in' -> 'about' for appreciate), correct noun choice, and use active verb forms. Applicable grammar problem type ID: 11.

× Actually, before I, uh, have study, uh, started abroad, I had lived in this beautiful place for 20 years and there are a lot of, uh, beautiful things that spring to my mind that I can keep in mind for a long time.

✓ Actually, before I started studying abroad, I lived in this beautiful place for 20 years, and there are many beautiful memories that come to my mind which I will keep for a long time.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect forms: 'have study, started' is wrong; use simple past 'started studying' or 'had started' depending on context. 'I had lived' is past perfect but not necessary; simple past 'I lived' is clearer. 'Spring to my mind' is present idiom 'come to my mind' and 'keep in mind' should be 'keep' or 'remember'. Suggestions: use correct past tense for completed past actions ('started studying', 'lived') and use appropriate idiomatic phrases ('come to my mind', 'keep for a long time'). Applicable grammar problem type ID: 5.

× Definitely, absolutely yes. Uh, is this is an, I can say that it's a place that young people only want to be there and appreciate the moment that, uh, other people of our country don't have.

✓ Definitely, absolutely yes. I can say that it's a place where young people want to be and enjoy moments that others in our country do not have.

Problems: extra 'is' and 'is this is an' is ungrammatical; incorrect pronoun/reference 'that young people only want to be there' uses 'there' redundantly and awkwardly; 'other people of our country' is better as 'others in our country'. Also 'appreciate the moment that other people... don't have' should be 'enjoy moments that others do not have'. Suggestions: remove redundant words, use 'where' for places, and use concise pronouns like 'others'. Applicable grammar problem type ID: 12}]}