Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 总体回答自然且信息明确，但可以更直接地以一句主题句开头，然后使用连接词把细节连贯起来；注意少量语法和用词小错误（例如“The Mountain city”应为“the Mountain City”或更自然的“a mountainous city”）。句子数量合适，但可用更具体的细节或个人感受来丰富回答。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Chongqing, in southwest China. It’s a mountainous city, surrounded by steep hills and winding streets, so it has dramatic views and a lively night market culture. Because of the terrain, local buses are often winding and the city feels very dynamic at night.

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰，以主题句开头并给出支持细节，内容具体且有连贯性。可改进之处是连接词使用可更自然（如“firstly, secondly, most importantly”），并注意主谓一致与单复数（例如“the river are”应为“the rivers are”或“the river is”）。还可加入一两个个人小例子增强说服力。

Ví dụ: I like the green trees, clear rivers and warm local people in my hometown. For example, the trees stay green all year, making the streets very picturesque, and the rivers are so clear that I often go for peaceful walks along their banks. Most importantly, neighbours are friendly and once helped me when I missed a bus.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息完整，但句子可以更简洁并更符合自然口语，例如使用现在完成时或更自然的短语；注意地名大小写和介词使用（“moved to the northwest of China”更自然）。如果要丰富，可补充当前是否仍与家乡保持联系。

Ví dụ: I lived there until I was 18 — I was born in Chongqing and moved to the northwest of China to attend university. I still go back to visit my family every year.

Gợi ý: 回答直接但有几个语言问题影响自然度（如开头用“Exactly”不太合适，句子中有语法错误“are also love”应为“also love”或“are fond of”）。可以先给出直接立场句，然后用2-3个具体理由支持，并用连接词衔接。加入具体例子（如工作机会、娱乐活动）会更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chongqing is a great place for young people. It’s a large and rapidly growing city with many job opportunities, vibrant nightlife and affordable street food. Young people especially enjoy the lively night markets and trendy cafes, which makes life there exciting.

× The trees stay green throughout the year, which make the streets look very picturesque and the river are crystal clear, so it's pleasant to walk along the banks.

✓ The trees stay green throughout the year, which makes the streets look very picturesque, and the rivers are crystal clear, so it's pleasant to walk along the banks.

句子中存在主谓一致和单复数问题。首先，先行词是 "which" 指代前面整个主句（The trees stay green throughout the year），这里应使用第三人称单数动词 makes 而不是 make。其次原句用单数 "the river are" 错误，应与复数主语 "rivers" 或将动词改为单数形式 "is"。根据上下文谈论多条河流或河岸，改为复数 "rivers are" 更自然。建议：检查先行词指代和主语的单复数，确保动词与主语一致。

× I was born there and I left my hometown to move to the Northwest, China to start my college life when I was 18.

✓ I was born there, and I left my hometown to move to Northwest China to start my college life when I was 18.

句子使用了过去时，表达正确，但存在小的介词和标点问题：地名前通常不加定冠词，且地名中间不需要额外逗号（Northwest China 更常见）。建议：去掉 'the'，在并列句之间加逗号以提高可读性。

× The people who live there are also love the local food and the night views.

✓ The people who live there also love the local food and the night views.

原句中出现多余的系动词 'are'，导致动词结构错误。正确结构为主语 + 副词 + 动词 (people ... also love)。建议：去掉多余的 'are'，确保谓语动词形式正确。