Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the hometown, then add one or two specific details. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words if you add details (for example, "and", "because").

Ví dụ: I come from Ichagay, a town in the province of Isabela in the Philippines. It is famous for corn production and is very peaceful and quiet, which makes it an ideal place to raise a family.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct topic sentence and then give specific examples. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to explain why you like the people. Correct awkward phrasing ("native people" -> "local people") and avoid vague statements.

Ví dụ: I like the people in my hometown because they are very friendly and supportive. For example, neighbors often help new families move in and local farmers share tools and advice, which creates a strong sense of community.

Gợi ý: Use correct tense and be concise. Start with a clear time phrase ("I've lived there since I was born"). Avoid repetition and long conditional clauses. If you want to add a reason, use one sentence with a linking word like "because."

Ví dụ: I've lived in Ichagay since I was born and I still live there with my family. I would not move abroad because I love my homeland and the close relationships I have with my community.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer and support it with two specific reasons or examples. Use clear linking words ("because", "for example"). Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases. Replace vague words with concrete benefits for young people (e.g., community support, safe environment, activities).

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe my hometown is good for young people because the community is friendly and supportive. For example, young people can join local sports teams and community events where they make friends and get practical help from neighbors.

× I live in Ichagay in province of Isabella in Philippines, known as the number one corn producer in Philippines and #2 in corn.

✓ I live in Ichagay in the province of Isabella in the Philippines, known as the number one corn producer in the Philippines and second in corn production.

Missing definite articles: use 'the province' and 'the Philippines' when referring to specific geographic entities. Also clarify '#2' to 'second' and add 'production' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'the' before country names when they are plural ('the Philippines') and before 'province' when specifying a particular province.

× I love my hometown that it is very peaceful, quiet and.

✓ I love my hometown because it is very peaceful and quiet.

Awkward clause 'that it is' and trailing 'and'. Use 'because' to give reason and pair adjectives correctly with 'and'. Ensure sentence completes the list of descriptors.

× What I like about my hometown is the native people that they are very friendly, helpful and they encourage people to grow more.

✓ What I like about my hometown is the native people, who are very friendly and helpful, and who encourage others to improve.

Redundant use of subject 'they' after a relative clause. Use 'who' to introduce characteristics of people and avoid repeating the subject. Also 'people to grow more' is vague; 'encourage others to improve' is clearer.

× We help each other even though they know nothing about them.

✓ We help each other even though we may not know much about one another.

Pronoun mismatch: 'they' and 'them' refer to third persons, causing confusion. Use consistent pronouns for the same group: 'we' and 'one another' or 'each other'. Clarify meaning: likely intended to say people help each other despite limited knowledge about others.

× I lived there since I was born and until now I'm still living there with my with my own family and children.

✓ I have lived there since I was born, and I am still living there with my family and children.

Use present perfect 'have lived' with 'since' to indicate action continuing from past to present. Remove repeated words 'with my'. Use 'am still living' or 'still live' to indicate current continuous state.

× If ever I will, if ever, if given a chance that I I will move to other country, I will not accept it because I still love to live in my own homeland.

✓ If I were ever given the chance to move to another country, I would not accept it because I still love living in my homeland.

Conditional sentence incorrectly mixes future 'will' and awkward repetitions. Use second conditional 'If I were given... I would not' to express hypothetical situation. Use 'another country' and 'love living' (gerund) for natural phrasing. Remove repeated 'I'.

× I would say yes, my hometown is good for young people, that the native people there are like what I said, friendly, helpful.

✓ I would say yes; my hometown is good for young people because the native people there, as I said, are friendly and helpful.

Awkward connector 'that' and comma use. Use 'because' to explain reason and place adjectives properly. Ensure subject-verb agreement remains correct ('people are').

× And also they treat each other not not as a neighbor, but as a friend, as a but as a.

✓ They also treat each other not as neighbors, but as friends.

Repetition 'not not' and incomplete phrase 'as a but as a' cause sentence fragment. Use plural nouns 'neighbors' and 'friends' to match 'each other' and create a complete contrasting structure 'not as X but as Y'.