Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わるが、表現が繰り返され冗長で文法ミスがある。まず最初に直接的なトピック文（I work for a car manufacturing company.）を一文で述べ、その後で経歴を具体的に短く補足すること。必要以上に同じ内容を繰り返さないこと、過去形・完了形の使い分け（I’ve worked here for two years / I started two years ago）を練習すること。発音や単語の繋がり（car manufacturing）にも注意する。

Ví dụ: I work for a car manufacturing company. I’ve been with the company for two years since I changed jobs, and I’m still getting used to my new role.

Gợi ý: 場所の説明は伝わるが、語彙・文法の誤りと不自然な表現が多い（"short of walk volume", "can't get the under the gland"）。まずシンプルで正確な表現を使う（My nearest station is Tokyo Station; it's a short walk from there）。接続詞で理由をつなぎ、便利さを具体的に述べる（e.g. It only takes five minutes to walk）。不要な語を避け、発音や語彙の混同（underground, underpassなど）に注意する。

Ví dụ: I work in Tokyo. My nearest station is Tokyo Station, and my office is only a short five-minute walk from there, so commuting is very convenient.

Gợi ý: 意味が不明瞭で多くの誤りがある。まずは簡潔に肯定か否定かを示すトピック文（Yes, it’s good / No, there are some issues）を述べ、続けて具体的な理由を一つか二つ示す。語彙の誤用（Todor station? entering bike? lining?）を避け、地下道・混雑について話すなら正しい単語（underground, crowded, entrance）を使う。文を完結にして聞き手が理解しやすい構成にすること。

Ví dụ: Overall it’s a good place to work, but I’m slightly dissatisfied because the entrance near Tokyo Station gets very crowded during rush hour, which makes commuting stressful.

Gợi ý: 肯定的意見はあるが語法と語彙の誤りが目立つ（"little satisfied" は不自然、"My law is expanded"など）。明確なトピック文（Yes, I’m generally happy with my job.）を提示し、具体的な理由を1〜2点述べる。語彙は正確に（expand our sales overseas, interacting with clients）。また"rewarding yet challenging"は良い表現だが、前後の文法を整えること。

Ví dụ: Yes, I’m generally happy with my current position. My role has expanded so I’m helping to grow our sales overseas, and interacting with international clients is both rewarding and challenging.

Gợi ý: 将来の計画がほとんど伝わらない。まず明確な未来の目標を述べ（In the future I hope to...）、次に具体的な行動や役割を一つ示す（e.g. manage key accounts, lead a team）。曖昧な動詞使用（intellect）や文の途中で切れる点を直し、文を完結させる練習をすること。時制や不定詞（to manage, to lead）を正しく使う。

Ví dụ: In the future I hope to take on a senior role where I manage key clients and oversee a small team to expand our international business.

× I work at Carmanufacturing company.

✓ I work at a car manufacturing company.

The original sentence omits an article and runs words together. Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular, countable noun and separate compound words: 'car manufacturing company'. Suggestion: Insert 'a' and separate 'car' and 'manufacturing'. Use 'work at' for companies.

× I've been working here for two years because I changed my job.

✓ I've been working here for two years; I changed my job two years ago.

There is a tense mismatch and awkward phrasing. 'I've been working here for two years' (present perfect continuous) is correct. To explain when you changed jobs, use past simple with a time expression: 'I changed my job two years ago.' Suggestion: Keep the continuous for duration and use past simple with 'ago' for the finished action.

× Then so it's been two years since I've changed my job.

✓ So it has been two years since I changed my job.

'Since' should be followed by a past simple when referring to a specific past event. Also avoid redundant words 'then so' and use 'it has' rather than contraction double with 'I've changed'. Suggestion: Use 'since I changed' (past simple) after 'it has been'.

× It's not that long a time ago.

✓ It wasn't that long ago.

The phrasing 'long a time ago' is awkward. Use 'long ago' or 'that long ago'. Also choose past 'wasn't' to match the reference to a past event. Suggestion: Say 'It wasn't that long ago.'

× I work in Tokyo.

✓ I work in Tokyo.

This sentence is correct; 'in Tokyo' is the appropriate preposition for a city. No change needed.

× My nearby station is Tokyo station then my office is short of walk volume there.

✓ My nearest station is Tokyo Station, and my office is a short walk from there.

Problems: 'nearby station' is better as 'nearest station' when indicating the closest one; 'Tokyo station' should be capitalized; 'short of walk volume' is ungrammatical—use 'a short walk from'. Also connect clauses with 'and'. Suggestion: Use 'nearest station' and 'a short walk from there'.

× So it is really convenient because I can't get the under the gland.

✓ So it is really convenient because I can get there underground.

The original is unintelligible. Likely intent: access via an underground connection. Use 'can get there underground' or 'can access it via the underground concourse'. Avoid 'can't' which contradicts convenience. Suggestion: Clarify meaning; use 'can get there underground'.

× Yar sink sorry.

✓ Yes, sorry.

The original seems to be mispronounced words. Use clear affirmative 'Yes, sorry' to acknowledge. Suggestion: Use simple, common phrases.

× I'm a little dissatisfied the place I call entering bike because it's literally close to the Todor station and it is connected underground.

✓ I'm a little dissatisfied with the place I commute to because it's very close to Tokyo Station and is connected underground.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'dissatisfied'. 'the place I call entering bike' is unclear; likely 'the place I commute to'. 'Todor station' seems to be 'Tokyo Station'. 'Literally close' is odd—use 'very close'. Suggestion: Use 'dissatisfied with' and clarify 'commute to' and correct station name.

× So if it's lining, I will not get rid

✓ So if it's crowded, I will be uncomfortable staying there.

Unclear phrasing: 'lining' and 'get rid' are incorrect in context. Likely meaning: if it's crowded, I will not feel comfortable. Use 'if it's crowded' and 'I will be uncomfortable'. Suggestion: Replace unclear words with precise vocabulary like 'crowded' and 'uncomfortable'.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

Question was asked by examiner; student should reply. However the sentence itself uses 'Would you like' which asks preference; to ask student's opinion about their own workplace use 'Do you like'. Suggestion: Use 'Do you like' for general preference questions about current situations.

× Yeah, I'm a little satisfied my current position.

✓ Yes, I'm somewhat satisfied with my current position.

Missing preposition 'with' after 'satisfied' and 'a little satisfied' is awkward; use 'somewhat' or 'a little' before 'satisfied with'. Suggestion: Say 'satisfied with' and prefer 'somewhat satisfied'.

× My law is expanded and scale up our sales volume T overseas, interacting any clients overseas is really rewarding, yet challenging.

✓ My role has expanded and I have helped scale up our sales volume overseas; interacting with clients overseas is really rewarding yet challenging.

Multiple issues: 'law' should be 'role'; verb forms wrong—use present perfect 'has expanded' for change affecting present; 'scale up' needs subject ('I have helped scale up'); 'sales volume T' is garbled; 'interacting any clients' needs 'interacting with clients'. Suggestion: Use 'role has expanded', 'I have helped scale up our sales overseas', and 'interacting with clients'.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

This sentence is correct as an examiner question about future plans. No change needed.

× before following another colleague who I used to work.

✓ I plan to follow the example of a colleague I used to work with.

Fragment and word order issues. 'before following' is incomplete; 'who I used to work' misses 'with'. Clarify intent: 'follow the example of a colleague I used to work with' or 'follow another colleague'. Suggestion: Make a full sentence with clear subject and verb and include 'with' after 'work'.

× My future career is to intellect some clients and oversee

✓ My future career goal is to manage clients and oversee operations.

'Intellect some clients' is wrong word choice; likely 'engage with' or 'manage' clients. 'Oversee' needs an object (what to oversee). Provide a complete noun phrase: 'oversee operations'. Suggestion: Use accurate verbs like 'manage' or 'engage with' and include objects for transitive verbs.