Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your job, then give one or two specific details (department, main duty, frequency) using correct grammar and linking words. Correct vocabulary (customs, tariff classification) and verb tenses will help. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I am currently working as a customs territory officer at the Thai Customs Department. I specialise in tariff classification, and I usually handle cases throughout the year for imports and exports.

Gợi ý: Give a clear location and one relevant detail. Use correct department name and prepositions, and link ideas (for example, 'so' or 'which'). Avoid redundant phrases. Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: I work in the Customs Department at the Ministry of Finance, located in the Kong district of Bangkok. It’s very close to my home, so my commute is convenient.

Gợi ý: Provide a straightforward opinion followed by 1–2 specific reasons. Use correct adjectives and linkers (because, and). Avoid unclear phrases and incorrect words. Mention concrete benefits (job satisfaction, helping others, contribution to economy).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s an excellent place to work because the job is rewarding and I can help people with import procedures. Also, our work contributes to economic development by ensuring correct tariffs are applied.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a topic sentence and give specific examples of what you like. Use correct nouns and spellings for facilities, and complete the sentence. Use linking words (for example, 'for example' or 'such as'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working there because the department provides many facilities for staff, such as a fitness center, a staff canteen and a badminton court. These amenities make it pleasant to relax after work.

Gợi ý: State your career goal clearly in one sentence, then give a specific plan or reason in a second sentence. Use correct job titles and phrases (e.g., 'be promoted to section chief' or 'become a director'). Avoid repetition and conditional confusion.

Ví dụ: In the future I hope to be promoted to section chief in the Revenue Division. If I have the opportunity, I would like to become a director in the department so I can lead policy and improve our procedures.

× Currently I work and I'm custom territory officer.

✓ Currently I work as a customs territory officer.

The sentence lacks the preposition 'as' needed to indicate a job role and 'custom' should be 'customs' (noun form). This is a sentence structure and word choice issue; include 'as' and use correct noun form: 'work as a customs territory officer.'

× I work at Thai custom department and I work around once year and work about tariff classification.

✓ I work at the Thai Customs Department. I work about once a year on tariff classification.

Missing definite article 'the' before the department name and 'custom' should be plural 'Customs'. 'Around once year' needs an article and preposition: 'about once a year.' Also split into two sentences for clarity and correct preposition 'on' for a task.

× Now I work as Taikazong Department in Ministry of Finance.

✓ Now I work in the Taikazong Department at the Ministry of Finance.

Use preposition 'in' for department membership and 'at' or 'in' for ministry; include definite article 'the' before department and ministry. This fixes sentence structure and article usage.

× My department stand in Kong district in Bangkok and near my house and very convenient for go to work.

✓ My department is in Kong district in Bangkok, near my house, and it is very convenient for me to get to work.

Use verb 'is' for location ('stand' is incorrect here). Add commas for clauses. Use 'for me to get to work' to express convenience; include pronoun 'me' and verb 'get'.

× Shua is my dream because my job is great and it's a high thirty.

✓ This job is my dream because it is great and highly respected.

'Shua' is unclear; replace with 'This job'. 'It's a high thirty' is incorrect phrasing; likely meant 'highly respected' or 'high status'. Adjust pronouns and vocabulary to make meaning clear.

× I can help people for import proceed and can development Chai economic

✓ I help people with import procedures and can contribute to economic development.

Use 'help people with' plus noun phrase 'import procedures' rather than 'for import proceed'. 'Can development Chai economic' is ungrammatical; use 'contribute to economic development.' Maintain present simple for habitual duties.

× I really like Koton Cup because Cotom Cup has a lot of facilities for or members in the department such starts at Friedne Turnis, Travel Turnis and Badminton court.

✓ I really like Kotom Cup because Kotom Cup has a lot of facilities for our department members, such as a fitness center, a travel desk, and a badminton court.

Many words are misspelled and structure is awkward. Use 'for our department members' not 'for or members'. Use 'such as' to introduce examples and correct facility names. Fix spelling and noun forms.

× Sometimes when I finish

✓ Sometimes, when I finish work, I use the facilities or play badminton.

The sentence is incomplete; it lacks a main clause after the subordinate time clause. Add what the speaker does after finishing work to complete the sentence.

× Sure in the future I will move to rule of Eritine Division and promote to chief sector, but sometime I hope I hope if I have opportunity, I want to direct a general in department.

✓ In the future, I will move to the Eritine Division and be promoted to chief of the sector, but if I have the opportunity, I would like to become a director general in the department.

Tense and modality need correction. Use 'be promoted' (passive) and 'chief of the sector' for correct noun phrase. Use conditional 'if I have the opportunity, I would like to...' to express aspiration politely. Remove duplicated 'I hope' and correct titles.