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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you work or are you a student?

Thí sinh

I have a work. I am a security guard.

Giám khảo

Where do you work?>

Thí sinh

I work as a guard in the Soreko Electric Electricity Company.

Giám khảo

Is it a good place to work?

Thí sinh

Yes, it is a good place to work and I enjoy it. I love my job.

Giám khảo

Would you like the place where you work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like the place where I work because it's near. At my home it's a walking distance.

Giám khảo

What are your future work plans?

Thí sinh

My future workplace is to be a butcher, so that's why I'm practicing at IL speaking.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Make your answer natural and grammatically correct by using the correct verb form and a short topic sentence, then add one brief detail. For example, say "I work as a security guard" rather than "I have a work." Keep it to one or two sentences and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: I work as a security guard. I’m employed at a local company and I usually work the night shift to keep the premises safe.

Where do you work?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: Provide a concise topic sentence naming the workplace, then add one specific detail (department, duties or location) using a linking word for coherence. Correct the company name phrasing if needed: "Soreko Electric" or "Soreko Electricity Company."

Ví dụ: I work as a security guard at Soreko Electricity Company. I’m mainly based at the main entrance where I check IDs and monitor the CCTV.

Is it a good place to work?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly and then support with one or two specific reasons using a linking word (because/so). Avoid repeating similar phrases like "I enjoy it" and "I love my job."

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a good place to work because the managers are supportive and the schedule is stable, so I feel comfortable doing my job.

Would you like the place where you work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and a single specific supporting detail using a linking word. Combine short sentences to sound more natural (e.g., "because it’s within walking distance of my home").

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace because it’s within walking distance of my home, which saves me time and transport money.

What are your future work plans?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: Be clear about your goal with a correct phrase ("I want to be a butcher") and give one specific plan or reason using a linking word (so/because). Avoid unclear phrasing like "future workplace is to be a butcher." Mention what steps you are taking to reach that goal.

Ví dụ: I want to become a butcher in the future because I’m interested in working with meat and serving my community, so I’m learning relevant skills and practicing my English to communicate with customers.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× I have a work.

I have a job.

Using 'a work' is incorrect English because 'work' as an uncountable noun cannot take the indefinite article 'a'. Use the countable noun 'job' to refer to an employment position. Suggestion: say 'I have a job' or 'I am employed.'

Sentence structure errors

× I am a security guard.

I am a security guard.

This sentence is correct. It uses the correct article and noun phrase to describe occupation. No change needed.

Sentence structure errors

× I work as a guard in the Soreko Electric Electricity Company.

I work as a guard at Soreko Electric Company.

The phrase 'in the ... Company' is acceptable but 'at' is more natural for workplaces. Also 'Electric Electricity Company' is redundant; use 'Electric Company' or the company's proper name. Suggestion: use 'at Soreko Electric Company' or the exact company name.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, it is a good place to work and I enjoy it.

Yes, it is a good place to work and I enjoy it.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the question context. No change needed.

Sentence structure errors

× I love my job.

I love my job.

This sentence is correct as written. It appropriately expresses positive feeling about occupation.

Modal verb usage

× Would you like the place where you work?

Do you like the place where you work?

As the examiner's prompt, 'Would you like the place where you work?' is unnatural; 'Do you like...' asks about current preference. 'Would you like' implies hypothetical desire. Correction keeps present simple to match situation.

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I like the place where I work because it's near.

Yes, I like the place where I work because it's nearby.

Saying 'it's near' is incomplete; use 'nearby' (adverb/adjective) or 'because it is near my home.' Suggestion: 'because it's nearby' or 'because it's near my home.'

Incorrect use of prepositions

× At my home it's a walking distance.

My home is within walking distance.

'At my home' plus 'it's a walking distance' is ungrammatical. Use the phrase 'within walking distance' to indicate proximity, and place 'my home' as the subject. Alternatively: 'It's within walking distance of my home.'

Future tense issue

× What are your future work plans?

What are your future work plans?

This question is acceptable and correctly uses 'are' with plural 'plans' to ask about future intentions. No correction needed.

Future tense issue

× My future workplace is to be a butcher, so that's why I'm practicing at IL speaking.

In the future I want to be a butcher, so I'm practicing speaking English at IL.

'My future workplace is to be a butcher' is incorrect: 'workplace' refers to location, not occupation. Use 'I want to be a butcher' or 'I plan to become a butcher.' Also reorder to natural English: 'so I'm practicing speaking English at IL' (if IL is a course or school). Ensure 'speaking' is used as a noun phrase 'speaking English' and 'at IL' specifies location/course.

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