Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you work or are you a student?
Thí sinh
I am cur students. At Macao Polytechnic University and I am majoring in Computer Science. I choose this subject because I have patience for computer software. In the future, I want to work in software department to develop. Game.
Giám khảo
Where do you work?>
Thí sinh
I haven't work yet. I'm current students in Macao. The reason why I choose this place so is that. This university. Offering a lot of. Class tough in. English, this can help me improve my English skill.
Giám khảo
Is it a good place to work?
Thí sinh
Yes, although the school is small, it has a great academic atmosphere. The teacher is professional and patient. And student is an activity that they often organize a lot of activities. To let us study. Commutating. And.
Giám khảo
Would you like the place where you work?
Thí sinh
Of course I do. I feel better and better since I came to the school. Through the study in here. I feel more confidence. And there are a lot of skills. To solve problems which can adapt me, make me adapt the future. And let me find job.
Giám khảo
What are your future work plans?
Thí sinh
To be honest. I haven't had a clear plan yet. Maybe I will work in a software department to develop. Develop. Game. Or? I will also learn some knowledge about finance to find a finance job like.
Do you work or are you a student?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 用词和语法需要纠正并使答案更自然;回答应先给出直接的主题句,然后用一到两句简洁的细节支持。注意人称和时态(I am a current student),避免冗余(不要重复“develop. Game.”),并用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: I am a current student at Macao Polytechnic University, majoring in Computer Science. I chose this major because I enjoy programming and solving technical problems. In the future, I hope to work in a software development team, possibly focusing on game development.
Where do you work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答问题,然后提供简要原因。修正语法(I haven't worked yet; I'm a current student in Macao)并把零碎句子合并为完整句。用连接词(because, so that)让表达更流畅,并具体说明哪类课程或活动帮助提高英语。
Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment because I am a student in Macao. I chose this university because it offers many courses taught in English, which helps me improve my language skills and prepares me for international work environments.
Is it a good place to work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 先回答并给出一到两点具体理由。修正语法和词序(students are active; they organize many activities),避免碎片化表述。说明具体活动或资源(学术讲座、社团、实习机会)来支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to work because it has a supportive academic atmosphere and professional, patient teachers. The university also organizes many student activities and workshops, which help us practice skills and prepare for future careers.
Would you like the place where you work?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答要自然并提供具体例子说明为什么喜欢。修正语法(I like it; I have become more confident)并合并零散句子。用一两句具体技能或体验(项目经历、团队合作、编程技能)来支持说法,使内容更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really like it. Since I started studying here, I have become more confident and improved my problem-solving skills through project work and team assignments, which I believe will help me find a job after graduation.
What are your future work plans?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 先给出总体立场(还未决定或有几个方向),然后列出一两个明确选项并简要解释原因。避免重复和不完整句。可提及计划中的具体行动(学习金融课程、做游戏项目、实习)以显示可行性。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I don't have a fixed plan yet, but I am considering two paths: working in a software development team, possibly in game development, or studying finance to pursue a finance-related role. To explore both options, I plan to build game projects and take introductory finance courses next year.
× I am cur students. At Macao Polytechnic University and I am majoring in Computer Science.
✓ I am a current student at Macao Polytechnic University, and I am majoring in Computer Science.
原句句子结构混乱,多处单复数与词序错误。应使用不定冠词a修饰单数可数名词student,current作定语放在student之前,地点短语at Macao Polytechnic University与主句连成一个完整句,并用and连接两部分。建议:注意可数名词单复数与冠词,保持句子完整连贯。 (对应问题类型ID:26)
× I choose this subject because I have patience for computer software.
✓ I chose this subject because I am patient with computer software.
原句时态和形容词使用不当。choose应与过去选择相对应用chose或改为I chose,因为前后文谈已经选择;patience是名词,需用形容词patient来描述人。并且常用patient with 表示对某事有耐心。建议:区分名词与形容词,注意时态一致性。 (对应问题类型ID:13)
× In the future, I want to work in software department to develop. Game.
✓ In the future, I want to work in a software department to develop games.
原句断句不当且缺少冠词与复数形式。应在software department前加不定冠词a,develop后直接接复数名词games或使用to develop computer games。不要把句子随意断行。建议:保持句子完整,注意冠词与可数名词复数形式。 (对应问题类型ID:26)
× I haven't work yet.
✓ I haven't worked yet.
使用现在完成时表示至今未做过某事,动词需用过去分词worked而不是原形work。建议:现在完成时结构为have/has + 过去分词。 (对应问题类型ID:3)
× I'm current students in Macao.
✓ I'm a current student in Macao.
主语与表语不一致,students为复数而主语I'm表示单数,应使用单数student并加不定冠词a。建议:确保主语与补语在人称与数上保持一致。 (对应问题类型ID:6)
× The reason why I choose this place so is that. This university. Offering a lot of. Class tough in. English, this can help me improve my English skill.
✓ The reason I chose this place is that this university offers a lot of classes taught in English, which can help me improve my English skills.
原句断句和时态混乱,choose应为过去式chose;不需要why after reason;offering应改为谓语offers;class应为复数classes;tough是错拼,应为taught;使用which引导定语从句连接句子;skill应用复数skills。建议:避免在句子中随意断句,注意动词时态与正确拼写,名词单复数。 (对应问题类型ID:16)
× The teacher is professional and patient. And student is an activity that they often organize a lot of activities.
✓ The teachers are professional and patient. The university often organizes many activities for students.
原句主谓不一致且句意混乱。若要表示“老师们”,应使用复数teachers并与复数谓语一致;原句第二句把student与activity混淆,改为大学为学生组织活动(organizes many activities for students)。建议:理清主语对象,确保主谓一致并保持句子意义清晰。 (对应问题类型ID:27)
× To let us study. Commutating. And.
✓ to let us study and commute.
原句为断裂碎句且使用commutating(拼写及词形错误)。若要表达“通勤”,应使用commute,且与study并列连成完整短语。建议:避免无谓断句,注意动词原形及拼写。 (对应问题类型ID:11)
× Would you like the place where you work?
✓ Would you like the place where you study?
在上下文中考官问本意应为询问是否喜欢学习的地方(学校),而原句使用work与学生身份不符。建议:注意问题与身份相匹配,使用正确的动词。 (对应问题类型ID:26)
× I feel better and better since I came to the school. Through the study in here. I feel more confidence.
✓ I have felt better and better since I came to the school. Through studying here, I feel more confident.
“since I came”与现在完成时更搭配,应使用have felt;第二句study应改为动名词studying;confidence是名词,应使用形容词confident来修饰主语。建议:注意时态搭配(since用现在完成时),区分名词与形容词及动名词用法。 (对应问题类型ID:6)
× And there are a lot of skills. To solve problems which can adapt me, make me adapt the future. And let me find job.
✓ There are many skills for solving problems that can help me adapt to the future and help me find a job.
原句语序和词语搭配错误。use skills for solving problems更自然;which引导的定语从句应使用help me adapt to the future;find job前需加不定冠词a job或直接用help me find a job。建议:注意固定搭配(adapt to),使用正确的冠词及顺畅的从句连接。 (对应问题类型ID:13)
× To be honest. I haven't had a clear plan yet.
✓ To be honest, I haven't had a clear plan yet.
原句把短语不必要地断成两个句子。应用逗号连接表示插入语。建议:避免将插入短语单独成句,保证句子完整流畅。 (对应问题类型ID:26)
× Maybe I will work in a software department to develop. Develop. Game.
✓ Maybe I will work in a software department to develop games.
句子断裂且名词复数和动词搭配错误。use develop games作为不定式短语的宾语,games需用复数或加冠词。建议:保持短语连贯,注意可数名词复数形式。 (对应问题类型ID:3)
× Or? I will also learn some knowledge about finance to find a finance job like.
✓ Or I will also learn something about finance to find a finance-related job.
原句有多余的问号和不完整的结尾,knowledge about finance更自然可改为something about finance或study finance;finance job可改为finance-related job或a job in finance。建议:避免句尾不完整,选择更常用的搭配。 (对应问题_type_id:11}]}