Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation and redundancies; start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly list key responsibilities using linking words. Aim for 2–3 short sentences, vary vocabulary (e.g., “responsible for” → “I handle”), and correct article/noun phrases (a multinational pharmaceutical company).

Ví dụ: I currently work as a management accountant at a multinational pharmaceutical company. In my role, I handle financial statements and budget planning, and I also assist with management reporting.

Gợi ý: Give a direct answer naming the company clearly, then add one concise supporting detail. Use linking words and correct plural/form (sectors include). Avoid repetition and hesitations. Keep to 1–2 sentences.

Ví dụ: I work for Mark (Mark Corporation), which has three business sectors: healthcare, science and electronics. I work in the finance department supporting those divisions.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then provide two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, “because” or “also”). Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “supportive atmosphere,” “professional development”), avoid incomplete sentences, and finish points clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. It’s a supportive workplace because colleagues are friendly and we regularly share knowledge. Also, the company offers training programs that help employees develop professionally.

Gợi ý: Respond clearly (e.g., “Yes, I like working there”) then give two concrete reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “in addition”). Use correct verb forms and plural nouns (provides, colleagues exchange ideas). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like working there because the company provides good employee benefits and the colleagues are very friendly. In addition, HR runs regular training courses that help us improve our skills.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, specific plan as a topic sentence (e.g., “I plan to study abroad to specialize in finance”), then explain reasons and intended steps using linking words. Correct verbs and vocabulary (go abroad, pass the CFA exam or similar). Keep to two sentences and avoid filler sounds.

Ví dụ: In the future, I plan to pass a professional finance exam (such as the CFA) and study abroad to deepen my knowledge. I believe this will give me a stronger technical foundation and help my career progression.

× Uh, currently I work as, uh, a management accountant in, uh, multinational pharmaceutical company, uh, and uh, uh, in my daily work, uh, I'm responsible for financial statements, uh, budget planning and uh, also.

✓ Currently I work as a management accountant in a multinational pharmaceutical company, and in my daily work I am responsible for financial statements, budget planning, and other tasks.

Missing articles 'a' before 'management accountant' and 'a' before 'multinational pharmaceutical company'. Also awkward filler words and 'also' at end; rephrase to list responsibilities and include 'other tasks' to complete the list. Use full forms 'I am' for formality. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Uh, work for Mark. I work for Mark, Uh, which? And we have three business sector include healthcare, science and electronic. And I'm in the uh, financial, uh, sector, uh.

✓ I work for Mark. We have three business sectors including healthcare, science, and electronics, and I work in the financial sector.

Fragment 'work for Mark' lacks subject in first clause; repeated and unclear 'Which?'. 'Business sector' should be plural 'sectors'. Use 'including' to introduce examples and correct noun 'electronics'. Combine sentences for clarity and proper subject-verb structure. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Is it a good place to work? ... Uh, first the auto. Atmosphere is very friendly among colleagues and we can share the knowledge with each other and to grow up.

✓ First, the atmosphere is very friendly among colleagues, and we can share knowledge with each other and grow professionally.

Remove incorrect word 'auto.' Use 'share knowledge' (no article 'the' needed) and 'grow up' is inappropriate for professional development; use 'grow professionally'. Also punctuation and connectors improved. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Offer, uh, uh, our company provide uh, uh, several benefits for employees, uh, for the colleagues are very friendly and they can exchange the idea with you. And besides, uh, the HR and the training also provide the, uh, study course for us.

✓ Our company provides several benefits for employees. Colleagues are very friendly and they can exchange ideas with you. Also, HR and the training department provide study courses for us.

Subject-verb agreement 'company provide' should be 'company provides'. 'The colleagues are' unnecessary article; use 'colleagues'. 'Exchange the idea' should be plural 'exchange ideas'. 'Provide the study course' -> 'provide study courses'. Split into sentences for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Uh, for the future, uh, I plan to pass the exam for else, uh, and uh, uh, go bored to study financial subjects because I think, uh, I should have a deep understanding for the, uh, profession.

✓ In the future, I plan to pass additional professional exams and study financial subjects abroad because I think I should have a deeper understanding of the profession.

Ambiguous phrase 'exam for else' and 'go bored' are incorrect. Likely intended 'additional exams' and 'go abroad to study'. Use 'in the future' and 'deeper understanding of' (preposition 'of' not 'for'). Use 'deeper' comparative adjective. Maintain future intention with 'plan to'. Grammar problem type ID:7