Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: まず話の冒頭で簡潔に「学生です」と明確に述べ、その後に学部と学習内容を2文以内で補足しましょう。文法ミス（例: "which is include" → "which includes"）を直し、不要な語句を削減して自然な英語にします。例えば時制と前置詞の使い方（"from this April" → "since April"）や冠詞の省略に注意してください。具体的には、1) 主語＋現在の状況で始める、2) 学科名は短く説明、3) 関連分野は列挙する際に簡潔な接続詞を使う、の順で組み立てるとよいです。

Ví dụ: I am a university student. I started my first year in Tokyo this April, studying Global Studies, which includes international relations, politics and economics.

Gợi ý: 質問に対して職場を明確に短く述べ、その後に頻度や職務を1文で補足しましょう。現在進行形や前置詞の誤用（"as per times off nearby my station", "I am currently from school teacher"）を避け、自然な表現（"I work part-time" や "at a school near my station"）を使います。語順を整え、冗長な語句は削除してください。

Ví dụ: I work part-time at a school near my station. I help with classroom activities once or twice a week.

Gợi ý: 回答は短く肯定/否定を示してから理由を述べ、理由は具体的に一つか二つに絞ります。地名や学校名の扱いを明確にし、文法（"used to go and study" → "attended"、"junior and high school student" → "junior high and high school"）と語順を直しましょう。"familiar"の使い方も不自然なので "who I know" のように言い換えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is. I actually attended that school for junior and high school, so I know several of the teachers there, which makes the atmosphere comfortable.

Gợi ý: 二面性を示す場合は"Yes and no"の後に原因をそれぞれ簡潔に述べ、接続語（"on the plus side", "however"）を自然に使いましょう。語順や語彙（"accessible", "noisy"）は良いので、文法を整え複数形や冠詞を注意してください（"there are also noisy" → "it can be noisy"）。"to explain for students"は不要です。

Ví dụ: Yes and no. On the plus side, it's close to my home and the station, so it's very convenient. However, it's next to a busy main road, so it can be quite noisy sometimes.

Gợi ý: まず将来の計画が未定であることを短く述べ、その後希望する分野と理由を具体的に示しましょう。表現を自然にし、前置詞や語順を修正（"decide where yet" → "haven't decided yet"、"contribute on" → "work in"）。"advertisement"は名詞より"advertising"や"graphic design"の方が自然です。最後に簡単な将来像をつけると良いです。

Ví dụ: I haven't decided on a specific career yet. However, I'd like to work in graphic design, especially in advertising or social media visuals, because I'm interested in creating images that communicate messages effectively.

× I am a freshman of university in Tokyo from this April and I am currently studying global studies which is include international relations, politics, economics and so on.

✓ I am a freshman at a university in Tokyo since this April and I am currently studying global studies, which includes international relations, politics, economics, and so on.

The phrase 'freshman of university' is incorrect; use 'freshman at a university'. 'From this April' should be 'since this April' to indicate start time continuing to present. 'global studies which is include' has subject-verb mismatch and incorrect verb form: 'which includes' is correct (singular 'global studies' as a program takes singular verb). Also add commas and 'a' before 'university' and include 'and' before the last item in the list to follow English list conventions. Suggestion: Use 'freshman at a university', use 'since' for a start time continuing into present, and match 'which includes' for subject-verb agreement.

× I am working as per times off nearby my station and I am currently from school teacher.

✓ I am working part-time near my station and I am currently a school teacher.

The original uses awkward phrases 'as per times off' and 'from school teacher'. Use 'part-time' to indicate occasional work. 'Currently from school teacher' is incorrect—use 'currently a school teacher' (noun phrase). Maintain present continuous for ongoing work 'I am working'. Suggestion: Use idiomatic expressions like 'part-time' and correct noun phrase order 'a school teacher'.

× I usually work there once or twice a week.

✓ I usually work there once or twice a week.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Usually' plus simple present 'work' correctly indicates a habitual action. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× Of course, yes, this is because the Oklahoma school is the school where I used to go and study when I was junior and high school student, and there are some teachers who had been. Familiar.

✓ Of course. This is because Oklahoma School is where I used to go when I was in junior high and high school, and some of the teachers are still there.

Problems: 'the Oklahoma school' may not need 'the' if it's a proper name—use 'Oklahoma School' or 'the Oklahoma school' consistently. 'when I was junior and high school student' lacks articles and prepositions; correct form is 'when I was in junior high and high school'. 'there are some teachers who had been. Familiar.' is fragmented and incorrect pronoun/verb tense; better: 'some of the teachers are still there' to express continuity. Also remove unnecessary words and fix sentence boundaries. Suggestion: Use 'in junior high and high school' and express continuity with 'are still there'.

× Actually yes and no because As for positive part the place is nearby my house and station so it is accessible however it is also nearby the umm roadway Main Street so sometimes there are also noisy to explain for students.

✓ Actually, yes and no. On the positive side, the place is near my house and station, so it is accessible; however, it is also near Main Street, so it can be noisy for the students.

Issues: 'As for positive part' is unidiomatic—use 'On the positive side'. 'nearby my house and station' should be 'near my house and station'. 'there are also noisy to explain for students' is ungrammatical: 'it can be noisy for the students' correctly uses 'it' as subject and adjective 'noisy'. Use linking words with punctuation and correct prepositions. Suggestion: Use 'on the positive side', 'near', and 'it can be noisy for the students'.

× I actually could not decide where yet.

✓ I actually cannot decide yet where to work.

The original mixes tense and word order. 'Could not decide where yet' is incorrect for present inability—use 'cannot decide yet' or 'have not decided yet'. Also add 'to work' for clarity of what is being decided. Maintain present tense for current decision state. Suggestion: Use 'cannot decide yet' or 'have not decided yet' and include the infinitive object if needed.

× However, I would like to contribute on graphic art because I am interested in advertisement or visual design which can be connected to social media and if I can work there I would like to.

✓ However, I would like to contribute to graphic art because I am interested in advertising and visual design, which can be connected to social media, and I would like to work in that field if possible.

'Contribute on' is incorrect; use 'contribute to'. 'advertisement' should be 'advertising' to refer to the field. 'if I can work there I would like to' is awkward—clarify as 'I would like to work in that field if possible.' Also use commas to separate clauses and 'in that field' to show location/context. Suggestion: Use 'contribute to', 'advertising', and 'work in that field' for clarity and correct preposition usage.