Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and improve coherence: give a direct topic sentence, then briefly add schedule details using a linking word. Avoid minor grammar slips (use "so" rather than "therefore" for spoken tone) and aim for 2–3 sentences only.

Ví dụ: I both study and work. I study at university on Monday and Tuesday, so I work part time at a nonprofit in Zurich from Wednesday to Friday.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more succinct and avoid repeating the location. Start with a clear topic sentence and then give one specific detail about the organization using a linking word.

Ví dụ: I work at a nonprofit in Zurich that runs 17 community centers across the city. For example, we offer courses in languages and IT for local residents.

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and fix hesitations/unfinished phrases. Use 2–3 coherent sentences: a clear opinion, a concise reason, and one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid vague fillers like "it's not" without completion.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because I enjoy the job and the people. I work in HR in a small team of four women, and since we have a flat hierarchy everyone is supportive and approachable.

Gợi ý: Be slightly more natural and concise: combine related points and correct small phrasing issues (e.g., "people I work with"). Use linking words to connect location, facilities and colleagues.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like it. It's close to my flat and easy to reach by public transport, and although the building is a bit old, the facilities are fine and I get on well with my colleagues.

Gợi ý: Good content and clarity; make the response more natural by removing conditional redundancy and using a linking phrase. Be explicit about one concrete goal to strengthen specificity.

Ví dụ: I want to stay in HR but move out of an administrative role into a coaching position. For example, I'd like to work as an employee wellbeing coach focusing on mental health and physical wellbeing.

× I study and work part time, usually on Monday and Tuesday.

✓ I study and work part-time, usually on Mondays and Tuesdays.

Use of simple present for habitual actions is correct, but time expressions with days of the week usually take plural form (on Mondays and Tuesdays). Also 'part-time' is hyphenated as a compound adjective before a noun or when used as an adverbial phrase.

× I attend classes at university and therefore on Wednesday until Friday I work in a nonprofit organization in Zurich.

✓ I attend classes at university, and therefore from Wednesday until Friday I work at a nonprofit organization in Zurich.

Use 'from ... until' to indicate a range of days. Use the preposition 'at' for working in/at an organization. Add a comma before 'and therefore' to separate clauses.

× I work in Zurich in a nonprofit organization and they are responsible for 17 social community centers all over the city of Zurich.

✓ I work in Zurich at a nonprofit organization, and it is responsible for 17 social community centers across the city of Zurich.

Use 'at' for workplaces and avoid repeating 'Zurich'. Use singular pronoun 'it' to refer to the organization. Prefer 'across' instead of 'all over' for concise formal speech.

× We offer different courses for all the residents of the city of Zurich.

✓ We offer different courses for all the residents of Zurich.

Omit 'the' before place names in this context and avoid redundant phrasing 'city of Zurich'; 'residents of Zurich' is clearer.

× I work in Zurich in a nonprofit organization and they are responsible for 17 social community centers all over the city of Zurich.

✓ I work in Zurich at a nonprofit organization, and it is responsible for 17 social community centers across the city of Zurich.

Pronoun-verb agreement: use 'it is' not 'they are' when referring to a singular organization.

× Yes, it's a really good place to work and I love doing my job.

✓ Yes, it's a really good place to work, and I love my job.

Combine ideas more naturally: 'love doing my job' is not wrong but 'love my job' is more concise. Add a comma before the conjunction in compound sentence.

× I currently work in HR and my team members are four women and I'm the youngest by far.

✓ I currently work in HR; my team members are four women, and I'm the youngest by far.

Punctuation and clause separation improve clarity. The sentence content is acceptable regarding singular/plural, but adding a semicolon and comma clarifies the structure.

× What I really like about it is that everyone is super helpful and it's not. It's a flat hierarchy.

✓ What I really like about it is that everyone is super helpful, and we have a flat hierarchy.

Original has fragmented sentence 'and it's not.' which is unclear. Combine ideas to state positively that the organization has a flat hierarchy. Use 'we have' or 'it has' to describe the organization.

× It's not that far from my flat and it's conveniently reachable by public transportation.

✓ It's not that far from my flat, and it's conveniently accessible by public transportation.

Use 'accessible' rather than 'reachable' for natural collocation with 'public transportation'. Add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× The building itself is not the newest, but I like the infrastructure and also the people that I'm working with together.

✓ The building itself is not the newest, but I like the facilities and the people I work with.

Use 'facilities' instead of 'infrastructure' for building amenities. 'People I work with' is the correct, concise relative clause; 'working with together' is redundant and ungrammatical.

× For my future work plans, I would love if I would still work in HR but maybe not in an administrative role as I'm doing right now.

✓ For my future work plans, I would like to continue working in HR, but perhaps not in the administrative role I have now.

'Would love if I would' is ungrammatical. Use 'would like to continue' or 'would love to' plus infinitive. Simplify 'as I'm doing right now' to 'I have now' for clarity and correctness.

× So I would prefer a role where I could coach employees, for example regarding mental health and physical well-being.

✓ So I would prefer a role where I could coach employees, for example on mental health and physical well-being.

Use 'coach employees on' or 'in' a topic rather than 'regarding'. 'Regarding' is not wrong but 'on' sounds more natural here. The verb forms are correct (modal + base verb 'coach') so only preposition is adjusted.