Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, e.g. “I’m currently a university student,” and add one short supporting detail (year or subject). Avoid omission (missing verb) and extra words.

Ví dụ: I’m currently a university student. I’m in my second year studying English literature.

Gợi ý: Answer directly: the examiner asked where you work, so if you don’t work say so clearly and briefly. Use correct tense and structure and one short supporting detail about future plans. Avoid confusing phrases like “first master.”

Ví dụ: I don’t work at the moment because I’m studying for my Bachelor of Arts. After I graduate, I plan to start job applications in my field.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise reasons linked with connectors. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, tense) and avoid long run-on sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a very good place to work because the environment is calm and my colleagues are supportive. Also, my boss is down-to-earth, so I can comfortably discuss any problems with them.

Gợi ý: Be natural and avoid repeating previous wording. Start with a direct answer and give a specific reason or example. Keep it to two sentences max and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would. I enjoy working there because it’s calm and professional, and my colleagues are very supportive when I need help.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with correct structure and clear details. Say where you want to work and one or two specific steps you are taking, using correct grammar and collocations (e.g., “work abroad”, “become eligible”, “preparing for”).

Ví dụ: I plan to work abroad, especially in the UK or Canada. To achieve this, I’m improving my English speaking skills and gaining internship experience in my field.

× Currently I am a student and I in a university.

✓ Currently I am a student and I am at a university.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'am' and uses the preposition incorrectly. Use 'at' or 'in' with context; 'at a university' is more natural for being enrolled. Also include the auxiliary verb 'am' after 'I'. Suggestion: say 'I am at a university' or 'I am studying at a university.'

× Well I recently completed my senior education and now I am in a Bachelor of Arts in first master.

✓ Well, I recently completed my secondary education and now I am studying for a Bachelor of Arts in my first year.

Several structure and word choice errors: 'senior education' should be 'secondary education'; 'in a Bachelor of Arts' should be 'studying for a Bachelor of Arts'; 'in first master' is unclear and likely means 'in my first year'. The corrected sentence uses proper collocations and clear sequence. Suggestion: 'I recently completed my secondary education and now I am studying for a Bachelor of Arts in my first year.'

× So I am not doing work now but when I completed my degree then I applied to a job.

✓ So I am not working now, but when I complete my degree I will apply for a job.

Tense sequence was incorrect: use present continuous 'am not working' for current action, and future 'will apply' for future intention. Also use 'apply for a job' rather than 'apply to a job'. Suggestion: 'I am not working now, but when I complete my degree I will apply for a job.'

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed. Suggestion: none.

× Yes, of course it is a good place for working because of the environment and the colleagues are very kind as well as my boss is a person who are very down to earth and if I have any problem I comfortably shared my problem with them.

✓ Yes, of course it is a good place to work because the environment is pleasant and the colleagues are very kind. My boss is very down to earth, and if I have any problem I can comfortably share it with them.

Multiple errors: 'place for working' is awkward—use 'place to work'; 'because of the environment and the colleagues are' is a run-on and has subject-verb issues; 'my boss is a person who are' has incorrect agreement ('is' vs 'are'); 'I comfortably shared' is wrong tense—should be 'I can comfortably share' or 'I comfortably share'. The correction fixes agreement, tense, and sentence division for clarity. Suggestion: Break into two sentences and use 'can comfortably share'.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you work?

This sentence is acceptable and clear as asked. No correction needed. Suggestion: none.

× Yes, definitely. I recently mentioned that it is a calm and a professional place as well as their colleagues are very supportive, so I love that place to work.

✓ Yes, definitely. I mentioned that it is a calm and professional place, and the colleagues are very supportive, so I love working there.

Issues: 'recently mentioned' may be okay but 'that' is fine; 'a calm and a professional place' should be 'a calm and professional place' (no extra article); 'their colleagues are' is awkward—use 'the colleagues are' or 'my colleagues are'; 'I love that place to work' should be 'I love working there'. The correction removes extra articles and uses natural collocations. Suggestion: 'I love working there.'

× To be honest, I am planning for to work in abroad, so for that I also be preparing as well as improving my English speaking skills.

✓ To be honest, I am planning to work abroad, so I am preparing for that and improving my English speaking skills.

Errors: 'planning for to work' is incorrect—use 'planning to work'; 'in abroad' should be 'abroad' without preposition; 'I also be preparing' is wrong tense—use 'I am preparing'. The corrected sentence uses correct infinitive and present continuous forms. Suggestion: 'I am planning to work abroad, so I am preparing and improving my English.'

× So I eligible for working in abroad.

✓ So I will be eligible to work abroad.

Errors: missing auxiliary verb 'am' or 'will be'; 'eligible for working in abroad' is ungrammatical—use 'eligible to work abroad' or 'eligible for work abroad'. Use future 'will be eligible' if referring to after preparation. The correction supplies proper verb and preposition usage. Suggestion: 'I will be eligible to work abroad after I finish my degree.'