Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and produce a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific details. Correct grammar for job descriptions (e.g., 'I'm working as a marketing intern'). Avoid unnecessary context that confuses meaning.

Ví dụ: I'm working as a marketing intern at a startup near my home. I moved to Hanoi three months ago, and since then I have been helping with social media campaigns and user research.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct short answer about the location and the company type. Use one clear supporting detail about what the company does. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases; check prepositions and distances ('two or three kilometres from my house').

Ví dụ: My office is about two or three kilometres from my home. It's a small startup that develops mobile apps, and I mainly support their marketing and user testing activities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear opinion and use specific examples that explain why. Use linking words (for example, because, such as) and correct nouns ('benefits for employees'). Limit to two supporting details that are concrete.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to work because the company supports employees with flexible hours and free snacks. For example, we often have a relaxed Friday tea break and complimentary food in the office kitchen.

Gợi ý: Give a direct statement of your liking, then add one or two specific reasons with clear language. Use correct verb forms ('it provides') and complete supporting details. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' properly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like working there because it provides a flexible environment where I can learn new skills. For example, I have improved my communication by attending client meetings and collaborating with the development team.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear career goal, then give specific steps or reasons. Avoid focusing only on money; mention concrete actions (training, experience) that show planning. Use concise, natural phrasing (e.g., 'I hope to become a marketing specialist and gain more experience in digital campaigns').

Ví dụ: I hope to become a marketing specialist in the next few years. To achieve that, I plan to gain experience in digital marketing campaigns, take an online certification, and work on measurable projects that demonstrate results.

× Actually I am working at an intern marketing at a startup near my house and I have worked there for three months seeing I move from my country to the big city like Hanoi.

✓ Actually I am working as a marketing intern at a startup near my house and I have worked there for three months since I moved from my country to a big city like Hanoi.

Errors: incorrect article and noun order ('an intern marketing' should be 'a marketing intern'); wrong conjunction/word 'seeing' should be 'since' to indicate time; 'I move' should be past tense 'I moved'; 'the big city' is unnecessary article before 'big city'. Suggestion: use 'a marketing intern' for role, use 'since' for time from past event, and put 'moved' in past tense.

× I work near my house is maybe two or three kilometer away from my house and I am working at a startup which is about developing mobile apps and maybe is E are very.

✓ I work near my house; it is maybe two or three kilometers away, and I am working at a startup that develops mobile apps.

Errors: run-on sentence and missing subject for 'is maybe'; 'kilometer' should be plural 'kilometers' to agree with 'two or three'; 'which is about developing' is incorrect relative clause - use 'that develops' or 'which develops'; trailing 'maybe is E are very' is unclear and removed. Suggestion: split ideas with punctuation, use plural for quantities, and use 'that develops' for company activities.

× I think is it a good place to work because there are many benefits for employers.

✓ I think it is a good place to work because there are many benefits for employees.

Errors: incorrect word order 'I think is it' should be 'I think it is'; meaning error: 'benefits for employers' likely meant 'benefits for employees' given context. Suggestion: use normal clause order 'I think it is...' and choose correct noun 'employees' when talking about staff.

× For example, when you work on Friday you can have tea break or maybe there are many foods that you can use when working there like bread or maybe some.

✓ For example, on Fridays you can have a tea break, and there are many foods available when you work there, like bread and snacks.

Errors: 'when you work on Friday' better as 'on Fridays' for habitual action; missing article 'a tea break'; awkward 'many foods that you can use' should be 'foods available'; 'maybe some' is vague—replace with 'snacks'. Suggestion: use plural habitual time expressions, include articles, and use clearer nouns.

× Actually, I really like the place where I work because it's provide an A flexible environment for me to work in and I can develop some skill in this environment.

✓ Actually, I really like the place where I work because it provides a flexible environment for me to work in, and I can develop some skills in this environment.

Errors: 'it's provide' incorrect verb form; should be 'it provides' for third person singular; 'A flexible' wrong capitalization and article placement; 'skill' should be plural 'skills' when general. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular verb form, lowercase and place articles properly, and pluralize countable nouns for general abilities.

× For example, I can communicate more and.

✓ For example, I can communicate more with my colleagues and improve my communication skills.

Errors: sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; 'communicate more and.' lacks object and second verb. Suggestion: complete the sentence with objects and parallel structure: 'communicate more with colleagues and improve my communication skills.'

× I want to be a marketing specialist in the future. Umm I would. I would like to have more money, more salaries in the future instead of a low salary like this.

✓ I want to be a marketing specialist in the future. I would like to earn more money and a higher salary instead of a low salary like this.

Errors: fragmented 'Umm I would. I would like' remove filler and combine; 'more salaries' incorrect—use 'a higher salary' or 'more money'; 'earn' is better verb for income. Suggestion: avoid redundant fillers, use 'earn' for income, and use 'a higher salary' for singular job payment.