Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且时态一致。开头先直接回答（I am a student），然后用一到两句补充具体信息并用现在时或现在进行时描述经常发生的事情，避免情绪描述模糊（例如用“I often feel stressed”）。可以加入连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I am a student majoring in Chemical Engineering at Xiamen University. I often conduct experiments and analyze data as part of my coursework, so I frequently feel stressed because the lab work is time-consuming.

Gợi ý: 回答地点要准确（如果是学生可说明在大学做研究/助教）。句子要避免重复（如“usually”两次）并保持语法一致（data analyzing → data analysis）。用一两句说明具体职责并用连接词衔接原因。

Ví dụ: I work at Shaman University as a research assistant. On workdays I conduct experiments and perform data analysis, so I often feel stressed because the tasks are very time-consuming.

Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并注意语法（provide → provides, well equipped → well-equipped）。把零散短句合并，使用连接词并给出具体例子，不要把插入句断开成片段。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is. The campus has beautiful scenery and fresh air, and it provides well-equipped facilities such as quiet study rooms, large libraries and modern sports stadiums.

Gợi ý: 回答要避免和前题重复信息，尽量给出新的角度（如氛围、同事、交通）。注意形容词顺序和连接词，并修正搭配（a fresh clean air → fresh, clean air）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Besides the beautiful scenery and fresh, clean air, I appreciate the friendly atmosphere and convenient facilities on campus, which make it pleasant to work and study there.

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并避免不恰当词汇（comfortable and affordable 与职业规划搭配不自然）。先给出明确计划，然后说明原因与步骤（e.g. finish PhD, apply for postdoc），并使用连接词使理由清楚。

Ví dụ: In the future I plan to work as a researcher at a research institute. I am currently pursuing a PhD to develop expertise in my field, and after graduating I hope to continue with a postdoctoral position and eventually lead my own research projects.

× I am now a student majoring in Chemical engineering at Xiamen University. In my daily life, I need to do many experiments and analyze my data, so I felt very stressful.

✓ I am currently a student majoring in Chemical Engineering at Xiamen University. In my daily life, I need to do many experiments and analyze my data, so I feel very stressed.

问题类型：现在时使用不当/时态不一致。句中用现在持续的状态，应使用现在时而不是过去时“felt”。另外“now”更自然为“currently”；“Chemical Engineering”首字母应大写；形容词搭配为“feel stressed”而非“feel very stressful”。建议：用一般现在时描述习惯性或持续的状态，注意固定搭配和大小写。

× I work in Shaman University. In my work days I conduct many experiments and do large amounts of data analyzing, so I usually feel stressed because the work is usually very time consuming.

✓ I work at Shaman University. On workdays I conduct many experiments and analyze large amounts of data, so I usually feel stressed because the work is very time-consuming.

问题类型：句子结构与介词使用错误。机构前常用介词“at”而非“in”；“work days”应为“workdays”或“on workdays”；“do large amounts of data analyzing”结构笨拙，改为“analyze large amounts of data”；“time-consuming”为复合形容词需连字符。建议：用更自然的固定搭配和简洁动词短语，注意复合形容词连字符。

× Yes, it is because our campus has beautiful scenery and fresh air. It also provide us well equipped facilities for example. Quiet study rooms, large libraries and stadiums.

✓ Yes, it is, because our campus has beautiful scenery and fresh air. It also provides us with well-equipped facilities, for example quiet study rooms, large libraries, and stadiums.

问题类型：定冠词/动词形式与词序问题。主语是第三人称单数“it”，动词应为“provides”；“provide us well equipped facilities”缺少介词“with”且“well-equipped”需连字符；句子断句不当，例子应并入同一句并用逗号分隔。建议：注意主谓一致，固定搭配“provide sb with sth”，复合形容词连字符，以及正确的标点连贯句子。

× Yes, of course, because my workplace has beautiful scenery and a fresh clean air. Our company also provides many well equipped facilities such as several stadiums.

✓ Yes, of course, because my workplace has beautiful scenery and fresh, clean air. Our company also provides many well-equipped facilities, such as several stadiums.

问题类型：介词/冠词与形容词顺序错误。‘a fresh clean air’中“air”不可数，不能用不定冠词“a”，应为“fresh, clean air”；“well-equipped”需连字符。建议：可数/不可数名词区分，形容词并列时用逗号或连词，复合形容词加连字符。

× In the future, I plan to be a researcher in an institute because I'm now pursuing my PhD so that I would be an expert in my research area. So I think working in an institute is very comfortable and affordable.

✓ In the future, I plan to be a researcher at an institute because I'm currently pursuing my PhD so that I can become an expert in my research area. I think working at an institute will be comfortable and suitable for me.

问题类型：现在时与情态/将来表达不当。‘now’改为‘currently’更自然；从句中用‘so that I would be’不准确，表达目的应使用情态动词‘can’或‘will’来表示能力或预期；‘affordable’一般用于价格，描述工作环境应用‘suitable’或‘comfortable’；机构前多用介词‘at’。建议：用现在时描述当前学习状态，用‘so that + can/will’表达目的或结果，选择语义合适的形容词。