Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatically accurate and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “I’m currently working...”), include article and preposition use, and keep the answer concise (1–2 sentences).

Ví dụ: I’m currently working in the pharmaceutical industry. I started my role two years ago and work in the marketing department.

Gợi ý: Avoid fillers (uh) and correct noun phrases/articles. Give a concise direct answer then a brief reason if needed. Use linking phrase for clarity.

Ví dụ: I work for one of the leading pharmaceutical firms in the city. However, I can’t disclose the company’s name because of internal policy.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear opinion sentence, avoid incorrect words like “suddenly” and plural/form errors. Provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (because/for example).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a good place to work because the managers are supportive and there are opportunities for training. For example, I can attend industry workshops sponsored by the company.

Gợi ý: Be concise, avoid redundancy (‘silent and quiet’) and fillers. Provide a clear reason and a specific example of how the environment helps your work. Use linking words like because or especially when.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace because my cubicle is quiet, which helps me concentrate. For instance, I can review complex reports without interruptions.

Gợi ý: Use natural expressions for career goals and remove unclear phrases like “drive in my career park.” State a clear goal, give a reason and a plan to achieve it using linking words (so/in order to).

Ví dụ: I plan to advance to a managerial role. Specifically, I aim to become a marketing manager at my current company, so I am gaining experience in campaigns and attending leadership training.

× Currently I have been working in Pharmaceutical industry.

✓ Currently I have been working in the pharmaceutical industry.

Problems: missing definite article 'the' before 'pharmaceutical industry' (Article errors, ID 22/17) and present perfect progressive is acceptable but needs article. Suggestion: Use 'the' for a specific industry and keep tense 'have been working' to show ongoing action up to now. Correct sentence: 'Currently I have been working in the pharmaceutical industry.' Note: If you want a simpler form, 'I currently work in the pharmaceutical industry.' (Present tense).

× I have been working at uh, one of the most famous pharmaceutical firm, but uh, I am unable to uh mention the name of my company due to the company policy.

✓ I have been working at one of the most famous pharmaceutical firms, but I am unable to mention the company's name due to company policy.

Problems: singular/plural mismatch 'one of the ... firm' should be 'firms' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1), article/possessive use 'the company's name' or 'the name of my company' (Article errors/Incorrect use of pronouns, IDs 22/12), and preposition/wordiness 'due to the company policy' should be 'due to company policy' or 'because of company policy' (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Suggestion: Use plural after 'one of the' and use concise possessive or 'company policy'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× Suddenly I really love my firm and I think it suitable for everyone who love working in a pharmaceutical companies. I think uh, my company always support every stock.

✓ I really love my firm and I think it is suitable for everyone who loves working in a pharmaceutical company. I think my company always supports its staff.

Problems: 'Suddenly' is inappropriate (Incorrect use of adverb, ID 20) so removed. Missing 'is' after 'I think it' (Sentence without a verb / Present tense issue, ID 23/6). 'Who love' needs third-person singular 'loves' to agree with 'everyone' (Third person singular issue / Subject-verb agreement, IDs 2 and 27). 'A pharmaceutical companies' mixes article and plural (Article errors / Singular and plural, IDs 22 and 1) — use 'a pharmaceutical company' or 'pharmaceutical companies'. 'My company always support every stock' is unclear and incorrect: probably meant 'supports its staff' (Incorrect use of nouns and verb agreement, IDs 13 and 27). Suggestion: Use appropriate adverb, include 'is', match verb number with subject, and choose correct noun ('staff' instead of 'stock').

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

Problem: 'Would you like' asks about hypothetical preference; interviewer intends present preference 'Do you like' (Modal verb usage / Future vs present, ID 4/6). Suggestion: Use 'Do you like' to ask about current feelings. No other grammar errors.

× I really love working in my cubicle because it's quite silent and quiet that can help me to umm, focus on my work, especially when I have to analyze my talks or information.

✓ I really enjoy working in my cubicle because it's quite quiet and this helps me focus on my work, especially when I have to analyze my tasks or information.

Problems: 'silent and quiet' is redundant; choose 'quiet' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). 'That can help me to focus' is awkward; use 'this helps me focus' (Incorrect adverb placement / Verb + -ing form, IDs 20 and 8). 'Analyze my talks' is unclear; likely 'analyze my tasks' (Word choice). Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' or 'really like', avoid redundancy, use 'helps me focus' and correct noun 'tasks'.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

No grammatical correction needed. The question is fine as is; it uses present continuous to ask about future plans (Present tense issue check, ID 6).

× I still drive in my career park. It would be great if I uh, would be promoted to manager level. I would like to be a marketing manager in a current company.

✓ I am still developing my career. It would be great if I were promoted to manager level. I would like to be a marketing manager in my current company.

Problems: 'drive in my career park' is incorrect collocation; use 'developing my career' (Incorrect use of verbs/phrases, ID 13/26). Conditional/polite hypothetical: 'would be promoted' should use past subjunctive 'were promoted' after 'if' (Conditional structure / Modal verb usage, IDs 4 and 26). 'a current company' should be 'my current company' (Incorrect use of pronouns / Article errors, IDs 12 and 22). Suggestion: Use correct idiom 'develop my career' or 'developing my career', use 'if I were promoted' for hypothetical, and use 'my current company'.