Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant with a good topic sentence and supporting reason. To improve, tighten phrasing to avoid redundancy and minor grammar slips (e.g., use 'I graduated three years ago' and 'I work on an environmental project for a private company'). Add one brief specific detail about the project to make it more vivid and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I graduated three years ago and now work on an environmental project for a private company. Specifically, I help develop a city-wide recycling program, which gives me a strong sense of achievement because I can see measurable reductions in waste each month.

Gợi ý: The answer addresses the question but has grammar and clarity problems and one redundant sentence. Improve by giving a concise location phrase and correcting grammar ('in the city center of Shenzhen'). You can add a brief extra detail (e.g., nearby landmark) using a linking word for coherence.

Ví dụ: I work for a private company located in the city center of Shenzhen, near the central metro station. Because it's centrally located, it's easy for colleagues and clients to reach.

Gợi ý: Good structure with a clear opinion and supporting reasons. Improve word choice and grammar (e.g., 'which brings a steady stream of customers' and 'bustling atmosphere'). Use one linking word to connect reasons and provide one concrete example of how the atmosphere helps your work.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because there are many shops nearby, which brings a steady stream of customers. Moreover, the bustling atmosphere makes the job more enjoyable and gives me more opportunities to meet potential clients during community events.

Gợi ý: You express mixed feelings well, but there are grammar and word-choice errors ('make my break convenient' not 'breath'). Be concise and avoid repetition. Use a linking word to contrast negative and positive aspects and give one specific example of the noise or a favourite café to make it concrete.

Ví dụ: To be honest, it depends: I find the office noisy and distracting during work hours, which makes concentration hard. However, I enjoy my breaks because there are several nice cafes nearby where I can relax and recharge.

Gợi ý: Your response communicates the idea but has multiple repetition and grammar mistakes. Keep answers natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, then a short reason and one specific example of a possible plan or a timeline. Using a linking word like 'however' can help balance the idea of living in the moment with a small future intention.

Ví dụ: I don't have detailed plans for the future because I prefer to enjoy each day; however, I would like to gain more experience in environmental management over the next few years and possibly take a professional certification to advance my career.

× If you know that city, you will be know this location.

✓ If you know that city, you will know this location.

The original sentence contains no main verb phrase for 'be know'; 'be know' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'know' in the future form 'will know'. Suggestion: remove the extra 'be' and use the simple verb 'know' after 'will'.

× it's located in city Central in Shenzhen City.

✓ it's located in Central City in Shenzhen.

Use correct noun phrase order and avoid repeating 'City'. 'City' should follow 'Central' as a proper name 'Central City' and 'Shenzhen' alone is sufficient. Also prefer 'in Central City in Shenzhen' for natural phrasing.

× which brings a string of customers.

✓ which brings a stream of customers.

'String of customers' is unnatural; 'stream of customers' or 'a steady stream of customers' is the correct collocation. Use appropriate noun collocations for clarity.

× The busy living atmosphere makes the job more enjoyable and offers more opportunities to meet people.

✓ The busy, lively atmosphere makes the job more enjoyable and offers more opportunities to meet people.

'Living atmosphere' is incorrect adjective use; 'lively' properly describes an atmosphere. Add a comma between coordinate adjectives 'busy' and 'lively'. This matches present tense usage.

× To be honest, it depends.

✓ To be honest, it depends.

This sentence is correct; no change needed. It is included for completeness because it fits present-tense usage.

× I don't like the place where I'm working because it's noisy and distracting, but I enjoy it during my breaks because there are many shops and cafes nearby which make my breath convenient and pleasant.

✓ I don't like the place where I work because it's noisy and distracting, but I enjoy my breaks because there are many shops and cafés nearby that make my break convenient and pleasant.

'Where I'm working' is acceptable but 'where I work' is more natural. 'There are many shops and cafes nearby which make my breath convenient' contains errors: 'breath' should be 'break' and relative clause should use 'that' or 'which' with correct antecedent. Also 'enjoy it during my breaks' is clearer as 'enjoy my breaks'. Fix subject-verb agreement and correct noun choice.

× Well honestly I don't have a exact exact plans for my future because I think I'm I'm a person who like enjoy everyday.

✓ Well, honestly I don't have any exact plans for my future because I think I'm a person who likes to enjoy every day.

Multiple errors: 'a exact exact plans' has wrong article and duplication; use 'any exact plans' or 'an exact plan'. 'I'm I'm' is a repetition. 'who like enjoy everyday' needs verb agreement and infinitive: 'who likes to enjoy every day' and 'every day' as two words. Also add comma after 'Well' and remove duplicate words.

× I don't want I don't want to plan a detail for my future.

✓ I don't want to plan the details of my future.

The original repeats 'I don't want' and uses incorrect noun form 'a detail'. Use plural 'details' and preposition 'of' for possession. Simplify to a single clause: 'I don't want to plan the details of my future.'