Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và ngữ pháp nhiều lỗi. Nên trả lời trực tiếp: nói rõ bạn là học sinh hay sinh viên, chuyên ngành (nếu có) và mô tả ngắn về trường theo cách chính xác ngữ pháp. Tránh dùng cụm từ không đúng như "in doctor" và sửa thì số nhiều/đơn (country/countries). Cố gắng 1 câu chủ đề rõ ràng + 1 câu bổ sung, tối đa 5 câu. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản nếu cần.

Ví dụ: I'm a high school student studying science. My school is one of the most well-known schools in my country, and it has strong academic results and experienced teachers.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng câu hỏi và chứa nhiều lỗi khiến người nghe không hiểu (cụm "ask 12812 class" vô nghĩa). Trả lời cần rõ ràng: nếu bạn không làm việc thì nói bạn là học sinh và nói nơi bạn học (tên trường hoặc phòng học). Dùng câu chủ đề đơn giản rồi thêm chi tiết cụ thể nếu cần.

Ví dụ: I don't work at the moment; I'm a student at Nguyen High School. I usually attend lessons in classroom 12 on the first floor.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng ngữ pháp và từ vựng cần cải thiện (ví dụ: "it have" -> "it has", word order). Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 2 lí do cụ thể dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "and" để kết nối. Tránh từ lặp như "very great"; dùng "excellent" hoặc "very good".

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because it has modern facilities and well-equipped labs. The teachers are very friendly and supportive, so students can get help easily.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thể hiện cảm xúc tích cực nhưng có nhiều tiếng ừm (uh) và lỗi ngữ pháp ("have" -> "has", "face to face" dùng chưa đúng). Nên dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh tiếng ngắt quãng, dùng linking word như "moreover" hợp lý và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về cách giáo viên giúp đỡ (ví dụ: trợ giúp bài tập hoặc hướng dẫn ôn tập).

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like it because the campus is attractive and there are many modern facilities. Moreover, the teachers are very supportive and often give extra help after class when students struggle with lessons.

Gợi ý: Ý định nghề nghiệp có nhưng diễn đạt sai ngữ pháp và nội dung không rõ ràng ("improve finance and sport to families" không hợp nghĩa). Cần nói rõ mục tiêu nghề nghiệp và lý do hợp lý, dùng cấu trúc: topic sentence + 1-2 câu giải thích/ lý do cụ thể. Tránh lỗi số nhiều/đơn và dùng từ đúng (e.g., "improve my family's finances").

Ví dụ: In the future I would like to become a businessman because I want to improve my family's financial situation. I also hope to start my own company that can provide jobs and serve the local community.

× I am a student in doctor.

✓ I am a student studying to become a doctor.

The original sentence uses pronoun/phrase structure incorrectly and omits necessary verbs and prepositions. Use 'studying to become a doctor' to show the student's role or course. Structure: subject + be + present participle phrase to indicate current study. Suggestion: use clear verb 'studying' and noun 'doctor' as occupation.

× My high school is a very famous in my countries.

✓ My high school is very famous in my country.

Errors: unnecessary indefinite article 'a' before 'very famous' and wrong plural 'countries'. Use 'very famous' without 'a' when describing the school and 'my country' (singular) to refer to the student's nation. Also word order: 'is very famous in my country' is correct.

× I am studying in that time my school ask 12812 class.

✓ At that time I was studying and my school assigned me to class 12812.

The original lacks correct temporal phrase and verb forms. Use 'At that time' for past reference, past continuous or past simple 'was studying', and 'assigned me to class 12812' to express the school's action. Also replace 'ask' with 'assigned'.

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to study?

Context: the examiner asked about work but student is a student; responding should use 'study' rather than 'work' to match context. If referring to a workplace, original is fine; however given student situation, use 'study'. This is a content/tense-context correction to align meaning.

× Of course it is very great because it have a lot of good facilities and teachers very friendly.

✓ Of course it is great because it has a lot of good facilities and the teachers are very friendly.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'it have' should be 'it has'. Remove redundant adverb 'very' before 'great' or keep one. Also need verb 'are' for 'teachers'. Add definite article 'the' or keep plural noun without article. Improved parallel structure: 'has ... and the teachers are ...'.

× Of course, I am really into it because it, uh, is very beautiful and have a lot of good facilities.

✓ Of course, I really like it because it is very beautiful and has a lot of good facilities.

Pronoun 'into it' is colloquial but acceptable; main grammar errors are subject-verb agreement 'have' should be 'has' for 'it'. Also omit extra 'am' before 'really into it' for simpler phrasing: 'I really like it' or 'I am really into it'. Use consistent subject for verbs.

× Moreover, the teachers are very friendly, uh, they always help me when I, uh, face to face.

✓ Moreover, the teachers are very friendly; they always help me when I have difficulties or when we meet face to face.

Original 'face to face' is misused as a verb phrase. Use 'meet face to face' or 'when I face difficulties'. Also sentence run-on: use semicolon or two sentences. Provide clearer object: 'have difficulties' or 'meet teachers face to face'.

× In the futures, I want to become a businessman because it can help me improve finance and sport to families.

✓ In the future, I want to become a businessman because it can help me improve my finances and support my family.

Errors: 'futures' should be singular 'future'. Use 'finances' plural and possessive 'my finances'. 'Sport to families' is incorrect; likely intended 'support my family' or 'provide for my family'. Clarify purpose: 'support my family' or 'improve my family's financial situation'.