Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, sentence structure and fluency. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. For example, say you are a student, where you study and why in concise, correct sentences.

Ví dụ: I'm a student at a language school in Majuro. I'm studying English because I plan to study abroad, and the course helps me improve my academic language skills.

Gợi ý: Clarify the role and correct verb tenses; avoid filler sounds. Give a concise topic sentence stating your job, then one supporting detail about tasks or why it's helpful, using linking words like 'and' or 'which'.

Ví dụ: Although I'm a student, I work part-time at a clothing shop in my hometown. I help customers and manage the cash register, which gives me useful customer service experience.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and fix grammar and word choice. Start with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons using linking words such as 'because' or 'so'. Reduce hesitations and unnecessary fillers.

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a great place to work because my colleagues are very kind and supportive. They teach me practical skills, so I enjoy spending time with them and learning on the job.

Gợi ý: Use correct article and subject-verb agreement. Give one concise opinion sentence and one specific supporting detail. Replace vague phrases with precise descriptions and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like it a lot. The people there are friendly and supportive, and my colleagues often show me new techniques that improve my skills in retail.

Gợi ý: Good content and clear intention. Improve cohesion and grammar by combining sentences and using linking phrases like 'however' or 'therefore'. Be specific about roles or skills you want to develop to reach this goal.

Ví dụ: I haven't decided on a specific job yet, but I'm interested in environmental issues, so I hope to work for an international organization. Therefore, I plan to gain experience in conservation projects and learn more about climate policy to prepare for such roles.

× I'm a student, I'm go to language school in Majuro, so now I'm studying English to study abroad.

✓ I'm a student. I go to a language school in Majuro, and now I'm studying English to study abroad.

The original sentence uses 'I'm go', which mixes present continuous 'I'm' with base verb 'go'. This is incorrect. Use simple present 'I go' for habitual action or present continuous 'I'm going' for ongoing action. Also split into clearer sentences and add articles: 'a language school'. Suggestion: use 'I go to a language school' or 'I'm going to a language school'.

× MMM actually I'm a student but I'm work in polyachinic shop in my hometown to Armani, so it is a nice experience for me to study abroad.

✓ Actually, I'm a student, but I work in a polytechnic shop in my hometown for Armani, so it is a nice experience for me as I prepare to study abroad.

Multiple issues: 'I'm work' mixes 'I'm' with base verb—use simple present 'I work' for regular employment. 'polyachinic' is misspelled; corrected to 'polytechnic'. Preposition 'to Armani' is wrong; use 'for Armani'. The sentence needed commas and clearer linking: 'so it is a nice experience for me as I prepare to study abroad.' Keep tense consistent (simple present) for habitual facts.

× Yeah, absolutely, absolutely. My around people is so kind for me and they teach work for me to improve my working skills and umm, it enjoys spending time with them.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. The people around me are very kind, and they teach me to improve my work skills; I enjoy spending time with them.

'My around people' is incorrect word order; use 'the people around me'. Subject-verb agreement: 'people is' should be 'people are'. 'They teach work for me' is ungrammatical; correct to 'they teach me' or 'they teach me to improve my work skills'. 'It enjoys spending time with them' wrongly uses 'it' and wrong verb; first person 'I enjoy' is required. Improve sentence structure and pronoun use.

× Absolutely, my the people around me are very kind and supportive. They teach me new things that help me improve my skills and my colleagues is very nice man.

✓ Absolutely. The people around me are very kind and supportive. They teach me new things that help me improve my skills, and my colleague is a very nice man.

'my the people' is incorrect; use 'the people' or 'the people around me'. Subject-verb agreement: 'colleagues is' should be 'colleague is' (singular) or 'colleagues are' (plural). Also add the article 'a' before 'very nice man'. Ensure consistency in singular/plural nouns and correct article usage.

× To be honest, I haven't decided yet, but now I'm interested in about environmental problem, so I hope to work for an international organization.

✓ To be honest, I haven't decided yet, but now I'm interested in environmental issues, so I hope to work for an international organization.

'interested in about environmental problem' is incorrect: use 'interested in environmental issues' or 'interested in the environment'. Remove 'about' after 'interested in'. Use plural 'issues' for general problems. Tense is fine; correct preposition and noun number.

× Because I want to help solve environmental problems, I would like to work on projects related to conservation or climate policy.

✓ Because I want to help solve environmental problems, I would like to work on projects related to conservation or climate policy.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses 'to help' + verb base and 'would like to work' + prepositional phrase. No change needed.