Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰，直接说明了身份和学习方向，但句子较长且信息过多，显得有些冗长。建议将答案分成1-2个简短句子，使用连接词（e.g. because, so）更自然地衔接，并补充一两个具体细节以丰富内容，比如你对数学研究的兴趣来源或计划方向。注意控制在5句以内。

Ví dụ: I'm a high school student focusing on sciences, especially math and physics. I want to major in mathematics at university because I'm interested in theoretical problems, and I hope to pursue academic research in areas like number theory or mathematical modeling.

Gợi ý: 回答直接且信息完整，包含学校名称、时长和住宿情况。可以稍作简化并用连词使表达更流畅，同时补充一两句关于校园环境或课程特色的具体细节会更好。避免重复（例如“located...as in its name”略显多余）。

Ví dụ: I study at Yuling High School in Suzhou Industrial Park and I've been there for two years. Because it's quite far from my home, I live on campus during term time, which gives me easy access to the school library and science labs.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有条理，举例说明了便利设施和国际氛围。注意发音和大小写细节（如“A diverse”中的大写）。可以用连词稍微压缩句子并加入个人感受（例如你如何受益）。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is. The area is very modern with many convenient amenities like subway stations, restaurants, independent bookshops and cafes, and the international community of expat teachers creates a diverse atmosphere that makes studying more interesting.

Gợi ý: 答案有趣且个性化，但在正式考试中可能显得不够稳重且有些矛盾。建议直接回答并给出理由，避免过度幽默或自我矛盾。可以用一到两句说出真实感受，然后用连接词补充原因或例子。保持礼貌和自然。

Ví dụ: Personally, I do like the place because the classroom atmosphere is pleasant and my classmates and teachers are friendly, which makes studying more enjoyable. However, like many students, I sometimes find studying tiring, so I also appreciate opportunities to relax on campus.

Gợi ý: 回答目标明确且包含具体计划，但“experimental mathematics”与“lab internship”可能概念上不太匹配，可能造成逻辑混淆。建议澄清你指的是纯数学研究还是应用/计算方向，并具体说明你会如何获得研究经验（例如参加科研项目、实习或数学竞赛）。保持句子简洁。

Ví dụ: My long-term goal is to pursue academic research in mathematics, particularly in applied or computational areas. To prepare, I plan to apply for relevant university programs and gain experience through research projects with my teachers, internships at research institutes, and participating in mathematical modeling competitions.

× I'm currently a high school student specializing in sciences, especially in mathematics and physics because I want to major in mathematics in the university so that I can pursue my dream of doing some academic research.

✓ I'm currently a high school student specializing in the sciences, especially mathematics and physics, because I want to major in mathematics at university so that I can pursue my dream of doing academic research.

错误类型：现在时/用法和冠词搭配问题。说明：原句中“specializing in sciences”通常需加定冠词“the sciences”或直接用复数名词“science”更自然；“major in mathematics in the university”中使用介词不当，英语中常用“major in ... at university”或“at the university”；“doing some academic research”中“some”多余，改为“doing academic research”更地道。建议：把“specializing in sciences”改为“specializing in the sciences”或“specializing in science”，把“in the university”改为“at university”，去掉“some”。

× I study at Suzhou Industrial Park, Yuling High School, and have been there for two years.

✓ I study at Yuling High School in Suzhou Industrial Park and have been there for two years.

错误类型：存在结构与介词搭配问题（There be/地点表达）。说明：原句中地点短语顺序和逗号使用使结构不自然，应该把学校名称与地点合理排序并使用介词“in”来表示“在……区的……学校”。建议：将“Suzhou Industrial Park, Yuling High School”改为“Yuling High School in Suzhou Industrial Park”。

× The school is located in Suzhou Industrial Park as in its name and is quite far from my home, so I live on campus during term time.

✓ The school is located in Suzhou Industrial Park, as its name suggests, and is quite far from my home, so I live on campus during term time.

错误类型：介词/短语使用不当。说明：原句“as in its name”不合习惯表达，应使用“as its name suggests”来表达“正如其名称所示”。建议：用固定搭配“as its name suggests”。

× The area is very modern with many high rise buildings, so there are plenty of convenient amenities such as underground stations, a variety of restaurants, independent book shops and cafes.

✓ The area is very modern with many high-rise buildings, so there are plenty of convenient amenities such as underground stations, a variety of restaurants, independent bookshops and cafes.

错误类型：形容词复合词及拼写问题。说明：高楼应写作复合形容词“high-rise”；“book shops”更常见拼写为“bookshops”。建议：将“high rise”改为“high-rise”，将“book shops”合并为“bookshops”。

× It's also very international with many foreigners and expat teachers which creates A diverse atmosphere.

✓ It's also very international, with many foreigners and expat teachers, which creates a diverse atmosphere.

错误类型：冠词和大小写使用错误。说明：句中大写的“A”不应大写，且“creates A diverse atmosphere”需要小写冠词“a”；另外从句应与主句用逗号分隔以提高可读性。建议：把“A”改为“小写a”，并加上必要的逗号。

× Well, if others such as teachers and classmates are listening, I would say yes because the classroom atmosphere is pleasant and people are friendly which makes study enjoyable.

✓ Well, if others such as teachers and classmates are listening, I would say yes because the classroom atmosphere is pleasant and people are friendly, which makes studying enjoyable.

错误类型：动名词/不定式形式（动词-ing形式）使用问题与语法衔接。说明：“makes study enjoyable”在这里应使用动名词“studying”或名词短语“studies”来表示“学习变得愉快”。建议：将“makes study enjoyable”改为“makes studying enjoyable”。

× But you know, it's just a one-on-one conversation between you and I and I would give an answer with a strong no because I think nobody likes study.

✓ But you know, it's just a one-on-one conversation between you and me, and I would give a strong 'no' because I think nobody likes studying.

错误类型：代词格错误与句子结构/动名词使用。说明：在介词短语“between you and me”中应使用宾格“me”，不是主格“I”。“give an answer with a strong no”表达冗长且不自然，改为“give a strong 'no'”更简洁。“likes study”应改为“likes studying”。建议：将“you and I”改为“you and me”，简化否定回答表达，并把“study”改为“studying”。

× Indeed.

✓ Indeed.

错误类型：无。说明：此句简短感叹句无语法错误，无需修改。

× As I mentioned, my long term goal is to pursue academic research, ideally in experimental mathematics, so I plan to apply for a suitable program.

✓ As I mentioned, my long-term goal is to pursue academic research, ideally in experimental mathematics, so I plan to apply for a suitable program.

错误类型：时态无误，但有词形/连字符问题。说明：“long term”作为复合形容词修饰“goal”时应加连字符“long-term”。建议：将“long term”改为“long-term”。

× Before that, I will gain relevant research experience by doing a lab internship and improving my academics to make the admission requirements.

✓ Before that, I will gain relevant research experience by doing a lab internship and improving my academic record to meet the admission requirements.

错误类型：介词/短语使用及名词选择问题。说明：“improving my academics”不太地道，应为“improving my academic record”或“academics”换为“grades”；“to make the admission requirements”不正确，正确短语为“to meet the admission requirements”。建议：用“improve my academic record/grades”并将“make”改为“meet”。