Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับให้ประโยคกระชับและตอบตรงคำถามก่อน จากนั้นเสริมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน เช่น ชื่อหลักสูตร ระยะเวลา และเหตุผลที่สนใจ ใช้คำเชื่อมสั้น ๆ และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำหรือโครงสร้างยาวเกินไป

Ví dụ: I'm a master's student at State University Thailand, enrolled in a joint program with Oboe University in Finland. I'm studying microbiology and biochemistry because I'm fascinated by science and want to become an expert in these fields.

Gợi ý: เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงคำถาม แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดที่เป็นรูปธรรม เช่น งานวิจัยที่ทำหรือเทคนิคที่ใช้ และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'for example' หรือ 'mainly'

Ví dụ: I work in my university laboratory as a research assistant, and I've held this position for two years. Mainly, I collaborate with colleagues on molecular biology projects and conduct experiments designed by my professors, for example running PCR and analyzing samples.

Gợi ý: ใช้โครงสร้างที่ชัดเจน เริ่มด้วยประโยคหลักแล้วให้เหตุผลเป็นข้อ ๆ โดยใช้คำเชื่อม เช่น 'firstly' 'also' นอกจากนี้ควรระวังไวยากรณ์และคำที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'monthly' และ 'flexible working hours'

Ví dụ: Yes, it's a good place to work. Firstly, my colleagues are supportive and cooperative, which makes teamwork easy. Secondly, my professor provides monthly training courses to help our development. Also, we have flexible working hours that improve work-life balance.

Gợi ý: คำตอบดีแล้ว แต่ควรลดความซ้ำและใช้คำเชื่อมให้กระชับ พร้อมเพิ่มตัวอย่างสั้นๆ เพื่อให้รายละเอียดชัดเจน เช่น บอกตัวอย่างของความช่วยเหลือจากเพื่อนร่วมงาน

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like my workplace for three reasons. Firstly, the relaxed atmosphere helps me concentrate on experiments. Secondly, friendly colleagues often help me with difficult protocols. Finally, the lab is close to my home, so my commute only takes about 15 minutes.

Gợi ý: ปรับคำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ให้ถูกต้อง เริ่มด้วยเป้าหมายหลัก แล้วระบุขั้นตอนที่ชัดเจน เช่น คอร์สที่ต้องเรียน ทักษะที่อยากพัฒนา และแผนการหาทุน ใช้คำที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'deepen', 'hard skills'

Ví dụ: I plan to pursue a PhD to deepen my knowledge in biochemistry. To prepare, I will take advanced postgraduate courses to improve my lab techniques and soft skills like scientific communication, and I aim to secure a fully funded scholarship to support my studies.

× I am a masters student at State University Thailand in collaboration with Oboe University in Finland that shows this program because I am fascinated by science and I want to be an expert in my field, especially in microbiology and biochemistry.

✓ I am a master's student at State University Thailand, in collaboration with Oboe University in Finland; I chose this program because I am fascinated by science and I want to be an expert in my field, especially in microbiology and biochemistry.

Use 'master's' (possessive noun) instead of 'masters' and restructure the clause 'that shows this program' which is incorrect. Use 'chose this program' to indicate the reason for enrolling. Also add punctuation to separate ideas for clarity. Suggestions: use 'a master's student' and phrase reasons as 'I chose this program because...'.

× Well, since I'm currently a masters student, I usually work in my university laboratory.

✓ Well, since I'm currently a master's student, I usually work in my university laboratory.

Use 'master's' (possessive noun) rather than 'masters'. The present habitual 'usually work' is fine. Suggestion: always write academic degrees as 'a master's student'.

× I work as a research assistant, and I've been working in this position for two years.

✓ I work as a research assistant, and I've held this position for two years.

The original present perfect progressive 'I've been working in this position' is acceptable, but 'in this position' collocates better with 'held' to show duration; change avoids awkward preposition use. Suggestion: use 'held this position for two years' for clarity.

× My work involves collaborating with many colleagues and conducting experiments from my professors.

✓ My work involves collaborating with many colleagues and conducting experiments for my professors.

Use 'for' rather than 'from' when indicating work done on behalf of or under the supervision of professors. 'Experiments from my professors' implies professors produce experiments; 'experiments for my professors' means you conduct them for them. Suggestion: use 'for' or 'under the supervision of'.

× Also, my professor actively encourages our development by providing training courses in every month.

✓ Also, my professor actively encourages our development by providing training courses every month.

Do not use 'in' before 'every month'. The correct adverbial phrase is 'every month'. Suggestion: remove 'in' when using 'every' + time period.

× We also enjoy a flexible working hours.

✓ We also enjoy flexible working hours.

Plural noun 'working hours' should not take the singular article 'a'. Remove 'a' when referring to plural 'hours'. Suggestion: use 'flexible working hours' or 'a flexible working schedule' for singular.

× I think it is a good place to work because my team and my colleagues are supportive and cooperative.

✓ I think it is a good place to work because my team and colleagues are supportive and cooperative.

Redundant use of 'my' is unnecessary but not strictly grammatical; more concise version removes redundancy. Subject-verb agreement is correct. Suggestion: simplify to 'my team and colleagues'.

× Secondly, I have friendly and supportive colleagues who will help when I am busy.

✓ Secondly, I have friendly and supportive colleagues who help me when I am busy.

Use present simple 'help' for habitual action rather than 'will help' which implies future. Also include object 'me' to clarify who receives help. Suggestion: use 'help me' or 'who help me when I'm busy'.

× And finally, the office is close to my home which makes my commute much more convenient.

✓ And finally, the office is close to my home, which makes my commute much more convenient.

Add a comma before the non-restrictive relative clause 'which makes...' for correct punctuation. Article usage is fine. Suggestion: include comma for clarity.

× I'm planning to pursue a PhD to depend my knowledge in biochemistry, so I will take several postgraduate courses to enhance both my heart skill and soft skills, and I hope to obtain a fully funded scholarship to support my studies.

✓ I'm planning to pursue a PhD to deepen my knowledge in biochemistry, so I will take several postgraduate courses to enhance both my hard skills and soft skills, and I hope to obtain a fully funded scholarship to support my studies.

Use 'deepen' (verb) instead of incorrect 'depend' to mean increase knowledge. 'Heart skill' is likely a typo for 'hard skills'. Correct these word choices. Suggestion: use 'deepen my knowledge' and 'hard skills' for technical abilities.