Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and long vague statements. Use linking words (e.g., because, so) to make reasons clear and keep sentences shorter (max 4–5).

Ví dụ: I work as an SEO specialist and have been in the role for nearly ten years. Over that time the industry has changed rapidly, so I regularly update my skills to meet new challenges.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement about your workplace, then add one concrete detail about what you do or the company's nature. Remove redundant phrases and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I run my own online company that operates a website focused on sustainability. Because I handle most tasks myself, I’ve been able to grow the business steadily and plan to expand our product range next year.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid filler words ('uh', 'actually') and repeated phrases. Use a linking word to contrast positives and negatives (e.g., 'although', 'but').

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because I set the direction and enjoy the flexibility. Although there is strong competition and daily challenges, I believe these push me to improve the company's services.

Gợi ý: Give a concise opinion then support with a specific reason or example. Remove hesitations and avoid philosophical generalities; instead describe one concrete aspect you enjoy and one difficulty you manage, linked clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy working there because I control the creative direction and see immediate impact from my decisions. For example, despite the stress of meeting sales targets, I focus on small weekly goals to stay motivated and improve results.

Gợi ý: State one clear main plan, then give two specific steps or measures you will take. Avoid repetition ('a lot', 'actually') and keep sentences focused and varied in vocabulary.

Ví dụ: My main plan is to make my website a trusted source for sustainability information. To achieve this, I will publish expert articles and partner with NGOs for endorsements, and I will collect customer feedback to improve our products.

× I am an SEO specialist that has been my job for almost 10 years.

✓ I am an SEO specialist; this has been my job for almost 10 years.

Original sentence incorrectly uses 'that' to link the clause and misplaces verb structure. The clause requires a subject and the present perfect 'has been' correctly describes duration. Replace 'that' with a clause introducer such as 'this' and add a semicolon or conjunction to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: use 'this has been my job for almost 10 years.'

× But since then the field has been growing rapidly and the challenges as well have become more and more difficult in the past.

✓ Since then the field has been growing rapidly, and the challenges have become more and more difficult.

The phrase 'in the past' is redundant when using 'since then' and 'have become' should directly follow the subject. Remove redundancy and reorder to form a clear compound sentence joined by 'and'.

× But the more difficult that challenge is, the more I am willing to grow and I'm willing to get through them.

✓ The more difficult a challenge is, the more willing I am to grow and to get through it.

Mixes singular 'challenge' with plural pronoun 'them' and awkward word order. Use 'a challenge' and match pronoun 'it'; move 'willing' after subject for natural word order and parallel infinitives 'to grow' and 'to get through'.

× I have my own work, I build my own online website and company and I rely only on my effort in growing the company and it has seen a lot of success in the past and I am willing to grow it even further in the future.

✓ I run my own business; I built an online website and company, and I rely on my own efforts to grow it. It has seen a lot of success, and I want to grow it even further in the future.

Run-on sentence with tense inconsistency and awkward phrases. Use consistent verbs ('run'/'built' or 'run'/'build'), correct preposition 'rely on', plural 'efforts', and split into clearer sentences. Maintain present perfect for past results and 'want to' or 'am willing to' for future intent.

× It's obviously a good place to work since it's mine.

✓ It's obviously a good place to work since it's mine.

Sentence is grammatical; no change needed. Kept for completeness.

× And, uh, The thing is it has a lot of challenges.

✓ The thing is, it has a lot of challenges.

Capitalization and filler 'uh' removed for clarity; add comma after introductory phrase.

× It's, uh, growing every day has a lot of competition, but I am willing to grow and I'm willing to actually get through all these challenges and drive it to a safe place where I can succeed and it can succeed.

✓ It's growing every day and has a lot of competition, but I am willing to grow and to get through all these challenges and steer it to a secure position where both I and the company can succeed.

Original has comma splice and unclear subject for 'has a lot of competition'. Combine clauses with 'and', use parallel infinitives 'to grow' and 'to get through', replace 'drive it to a safe place' with 'steer it to a secure position' for natural collocation.

× Yes, I love the place where I work.

✓ Yes, I love the place where I work.

Sentence is correct; no change necessary. Included for completeness.

× Uh, I face a lot of mental stress because of the results, but I have to believe in myself and I'm in my abilities because actually the, the enjoyment is not in the destination, but in the journey itself.

✓ I face a lot of mental stress because of the results, but I have to believe in myself and in my abilities, because the enjoyment is not in the destination but in the journey itself.

Remove filler 'uh', fix 'I'm in my abilities' to 'in my abilities', remove repeated 'the', and simplify punctuation. This corrects pronoun/preposition misuse and improves clarity.

× So I have to enjoy, I have to work hard in order to reach the destinations.

✓ So I have to enjoy the process and work hard in order to reach my goals.

'Enjoy' normally takes an object; 'the destinations' is unnatural — use 'the process' or 'journey' and 'goals' instead of 'destinations'. Also combine clauses for fluency.

× I have a lot of working plans, but the main one is making my website the most trusted source on the Internet for sustainability and environment and actually selling my product to a lot of to a lot of people and actually have a good feedback from them.

✓ I have many plans, but the main one is to make my website the most trusted source on the internet for sustainability and the environment, to sell my product to many people, and to receive good feedback from them.

'Working plans' is awkward — use 'plans'. Use parallel infinitive structures ('to make', 'to sell', 'to receive') and correct phrase 'a lot of to a lot of people' and 'have a good feedback' (use 'receive good feedback' and omit article before 'feedback').

× And I'm willing to do that and I'm willing to take all the steps in order to achieve that.

✓ I am willing to do that and to take all the necessary steps to achieve it.

Sentence is repetitive; make it concise and use parallel infinitives. Replace 'that' with 'it' for smoother reference and add 'necessary' for clarity.