Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên/không chính xác. Nên nói rõ vai trò và thời gian làm việc trong 1–2 câu, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về nhiệm vụ thay vì câu mơ hồ. Tránh tiếng lóng (vd. "gonna") và sửa lỗi giới từ/động từ (ví dụ: "in this field", "become professional").

Ví dụ: I work as an architect and have been in this field for three years. I mainly design residential buildings and coordinate with engineers to ensure structures are safe and functional.

Gợi ý: Nói rõ địa điểm và mô tả công ty một cách mạch lạc; tránh các cụm từ không chính xác như 'work in the street' và dùng thì đúng. Sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể về công ty hoặc đồng nghiệp.

Ví dụ: I work for an architectural firm in Ho Chi Minh City. The company specializes in residential projects, and my colleagues are supportive and experienced, which makes the workplace enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Tránh ngắt quãng và lỗi ngữ pháp; trình bày lý do rõ ràng vì sao nơi làm việc tốt. Dùng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, nêu những lợi ích cụ thể (ví dụ: đào tạo, phần mềm, tăng kỹ năng) và liên kết bằng từ chuyển tiếp như 'because' hoặc 'for example'.

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because the company provides training on design software and opportunities to work on varied projects, which has helped me improve my technical skills.

Gợi ý: Tránh thông tin rời rạc và không liên quan; trả lời trực tiếp trước rồi đưa ví dụ ngắn gọn. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: 'after work' thay vì 'at the afternoon', 'colleagues' thay vì 'coworker' nếu nhiều người).

Ví dụ: Yes, I like it because the office is comfortable and colleagues are friendly. For example, we often go to a nearby restaurant after work to eat and relax together.

Gợi ý: Trình bày kế hoạch rõ ràng và có cấu trúc: nêu mục tiêu chính, các bước thực hiện và mốc thời gian nếu có. Tránh tiếng lóng và các cụm từ mơ hồ; dùng động từ đúng hình thức (e.g., 'study for a master's degree', 'start my own company').

Ví dụ: In the future I plan to study for a master's degree in architecture and then gain more experience in project management. After several years I hope to start my own architectural company focusing on sustainable design.

× I am working as an architect right now.

✓ I work as an architect right now.

The student uses present continuous 'am working' which suggests a temporary action; for a current job the simple present 'work' is more natural to describe regular employment. Use simple present for permanent or regular situations.

× I have been working this field for three years.

✓ I have been working in this field for three years.

Missing preposition 'in' is required with 'work in a field'. Also the sentence uses present perfect continuous correctly for an action continuing up to now; add 'in' to make it grammatically correct.

× And I also think about that you're gonna be professional in the substantial fields in this major.

✓ I also think that you will become a professional in the relevant areas of this major.

Multiple errors: 'think about that' should be 'think that'; 'you're gonna be' is informal and should be 'you will become'; 'substantial fields' is unnatural; 'relevant areas' is better. Rephrase to improve clarity and register.

× I work in the street too, in Ho Chi Minh City and uh, this company is working about substantial in the architect and I really love people who working with me.

✓ I work on the street as well, in Ho Chi Minh City. This company works on architectural projects, and I really like the people who work with me.

‘Work in the street’ is usually 'work on the street' if literal; sentence is run-on and needs splitting. 'This company is working about substantial in the architect' is ungrammatical; use 'works on architectural projects'. 'People who working' must be 'people who work'. Fix prepositions and verb forms and split into clear sentences.

× They're really nice and absolutely great coworker.

✓ They're really nice and absolutely great coworkers.

Mismatch between plural subject 'They' and singular noun 'coworker'. Use plural 'coworkers' to agree with 'They'.

× all of my career were really nice and a better work is to help me to enhance my ability to working in this field by uh, using our software as the hard skill and also help me to myself.

✓ All of my colleagues have been really nice, and a better workplace helps me improve my ability to work in this field by using our software as a hard skill and also helps me develop personally.

Sentence has many problems: 'all of my career were' is wrong; likely 'all of my colleagues have been'. 'A better work' -> 'a better workplace' or 'better work' and verb forms: 'help me to enhance' -> 'helps me improve'; 'ability to working' -> 'ability to work'. Rephrase for subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

× Yes, absolutely, because it's really neat too. Uh, my favorite restaurant and I used to have some beer with my coworker at the afternoon whenever we finished their worship and, uh, spend time together.

✓ Yes, absolutely, because it's really nice. My favorite restaurant is nearby, and I used to have a beer with my coworkers in the afternoon whenever we finished work, and we would spend time together.

Pronoun and word choice errors: 'their worship' is incorrect—should be 'work'. 'Coworker' should be plural if referring to more than one. 'At the afternoon' -> 'in the afternoon'. Rephrase to correct pronouns and prepositions.

× I have the plan to work, uh, to study, uh, in the master degree and, uh, be further, uh, thinking about that.

✓ I plan to work and to study for a master's degree, and to think further about my future plans.

Use 'plan to' rather than 'have the plan to', and 'study for a master's degree' is the correct phrase. 'Be further thinking about that' is awkward; rephrase to 'think further about my future plans'.

× Gonna have uh, umm, have my own company and work into substantial fields.

✓ I am going to start my own company and work in relevant fields.

'Gonna' is informal; use 'I am going to'. 'Work into substantial fields' is ungrammatical—use 'work in relevant fields' or 'work in substantial areas'. Simplify and correct preposition 'in'.