Work— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: まず、文法と語順を改善して簡潔に答える必要があります。現在完了形や期間を言うときは“for”の使い方に注意し、同じ語の繰り返し（infrastructure infrastructure）は避けます。また、話が冗長にならないように、トピック文のあとに1〜2つの具体的な補足（担当分野や主な業務）を述べてください。さらに、語彙は専門用語を正しく使い、発音や流暢さを向上させるために短い練習文を繰り返しましょう。

Ví dụ: I have been working as an IT engineer in Japan for four years. I specialize in both software development and IT infrastructure, mainly focusing on server management and network configuration.

Gợi ý: まず、会社の名前や性質を明確に一文で述べ、その後で補足を加える際は正しい時制と表現を使ってください（例："I often visit other companies"）。“visit to”は誤りなので“visit”だけで十分です。また、不要な繰り返し（"visited to visit"）を避け、訪問の頻度や理由を具体的に示すと良いです。

Ví dụ: I work in Tokyo for a local company called Medium. I often visit other companies to coordinate projects and meet clients.

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔なトピック文で始め、その後に理由を1〜2点述べてください。文法（主語と動詞の一致）や不必要な間や声のフィラー（"Oh,"）を減らしましょう。例えば“colleague are”は“colleagues are”が正しいです。“I work comfortably always”より自然な語順で表現してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, it is a good place to work because my colleagues are very friendly and supportive. I usually have a comfortable work environment and feel able to ask for help when needed.

Gợi ý: 理由を述べるときは文のつながりを自然にし、対比や因果関係を示す接続詞を正しく使ってください（例："it's not crowded, and there are many restaurants nearby"）。"no crowded"は文法的に誤りなので"not crowded"や"it's not crowded"と表現します。具体性を出すために最寄りの施設やランチの習慣を一つ添えると良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like my workplace because it is not crowded and there are many restaurants nearby, so I usually go out for lunch with my coworkers.

Gợi ý: 将来計画を述べるときは、目的と現在の行動を明確に結びつけてください。表現は自然ですが、"foreign people"よりも"people from other countries"や"international colleagues"の方が適切です。また、具体的な国や職種、いつ頃かなどの詳細を一つ加えると説得力が増します。

Ví dụ: I'd like to work abroad in the future to learn different perspectives from people in other countries. That's why I'm studying English now, and I hope to work in an international team in Europe or Asia within the next few years.

× I work as an IT engineer for four years in Japan.

✓ I have worked as an IT engineer for four years in Japan.

Use present perfect to describe an action that began in the past and continues to the present when you include a time period (for four years). The original simple present 'I work' is incorrect for this duration meaning. Suggestion: use 'have worked' for ongoing duration: 'I have worked...for four years.'

× I am related to software and infra infrastructure infrastructure in IT.

✓ I work with software and IT infrastructure.

The phrase 'related to' is unnatural for describing job responsibilities; 'work with' is clearer. Also 'infra infrastructure infrastructure' is a redundant repetition. Use 'IT infrastructure' once. Suggestion: simplify to 'I work with software and IT infrastructure.'

× I work in Tokyo at the company Medium, a local company.

✓ I work in Tokyo at a local company called Medium.

Positioning and article use are awkward. Use 'a local company called Medium' to introduce the company's name. 'At the company Medium, a local company' is repetitive. Suggestion: 'I work in Tokyo at a local company called Medium.'

× I always visited to visit to another company.

✓ I often visit other companies.

'Visited to visit to' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the simple present 'visit' for habitual actions and 'often' or 'always' for frequency. Use 'other companies' rather than 'another company' if general. Suggestion: 'I often visit other companies.'

× Yes, I think it's a good place for me to work because. Oh, my colleague are very kind and helpful.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place for me to work because my colleagues are very kind and helpful.

The phrase 'because.' ends the sentence prematurely creating a fragment. Also 'colleague' should be plural 'colleagues' to match 'are'. Combine into one sentence: 'because my colleagues are very kind and helpful.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments and ensure subject-number agreement.

× I work comfortably always.

✓ I always work comfortably.

Adverb 'always' is typically placed before the main verb (unless using auxiliary verbs). 'Work comfortably always' sounds unnatural. Suggestion: 'I always work comfortably.'

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The examiner's question 'Would you like...' asks about preference/conditional; the student should answer about current opinion. The appropriate verb for the question is 'Do you like...' which uses simple present for present preferences. Suggestion: use 'Do you like the place where you work?'. (Note: this is correction of question wording; if keeping original, student response should match.)

× Yes, I like this workplace because there are no crowded and but there are many restaurants therefore I can go to eat.

✓ Yes, I like this workplace because it is not crowded and there are many restaurants nearby, so I can go out to eat.

'There are no crowded' is ungrammatical; use 'it is not crowded' to describe a place. 'But' and 'therefore' are redundant together; use 'so' or 'therefore' but not both. Add 'nearby' to clarify restaurants' location. Suggestion: 'it is not crowded and there are many restaurants nearby, so I can go out to eat.'

× I'd like to work abroad in the future because I want to learn about various perspectives through foreign people, so I study English now.

✓ I'd like to work abroad in the future because I want to learn about different perspectives from people abroad, so I am studying English now.

'Through foreign people' is awkward: use 'from people abroad' or 'from foreigners.' For current ongoing action use present continuous 'I am studying English now' rather than simple present 'I study.' Suggestion: '...so I am studying English now.'