Exemplo da Banda 7
Tópico: Describe a problem you had while shopping online or in a store
Exemplo
An online shopping mishap When it happened I'm going to talk about a problem I had while shopping online last year. It happened around the holiday season, which is a time when I usually do a lot of my shopping online to avoid the crowds in stores. What you bought I was buying a new pair of headphones as a gift for my brother. I had done a lot of research to find the perfect pair that had great sound quality and were within my budget. I finally found a pair on a popular online shopping website and placed my order. What problem you had The problem started when the package arrived. To my surprise, when I opened the box, I found that the headphones were not the model I had ordered. They were a completely different brand and of much lower quality. I immediately contacted customer service to report the issue. They apologized and assured me that they would send the correct item. However, the replacement took much longer to arrive than they had promised, and I was worried it wouldn't make it in time for the holidays. How you felt about the experience I felt quite frustrated and disappointed with the whole experience. I had trusted the website to deliver the right product, especially since it was a gift. The delay and the hassle of having to deal with customer service added to my stress during an already busy time of year. However, I was relieved when the correct headphones finally arrived, just a few days before I needed to give them to my brother. This experience taught me to be more cautious and to double-check everything when shopping online, especially during peak seasons.
An online shopping mishap When it happened I'm going to talk about a problem I had while shopping online last year. It happened around the holiday season, which is a time when I usually do a lot of my shopping online to avoid the crowds in stores. What you bought I was buying a new pair of headphones as a gift for my brother. I had done a lot of research to find the perfect pair that had great sound quality and were within my budget. I finally found a pair on a popular online shopping website and placed my order. What problem you had The problem started when the package arrived. To my surprise, when I opened the box, I found that the headphones were not the model I had ordered. They were a completely different brand and of much lower quality. I immediately contacted customer service to report the issue. They apologized and assured me that they would send the correct item. However, the replacement took much longer to arrive than they had promised, and I was worried it wouldn't make it in time for the holidays. How you felt about the experience I felt quite frustrated and disappointed with the whole experience. I had trusted the website to deliver the right product, especially since it was a gift. The delay and the hassle of having to deal with customer service added to my stress during an already busy time of year. However, I was relieved when the correct headphones finally arrived, just a few days before I needed to give them to my brother. This experience taught me to be more cautious and to double-check everything when shopping online, especially during peak seasons.
Análise Gramatical
The answer effectively uses a variety of sentence structures, including simple, compound, and complex sentences, which contribute to the overall coherence and fluency. For example, "I was buying a new pair of headphones as a gift for my brother" is a simple sentence, while "I had done a lot of research to find the perfect pair that had great sound quality and were within my budget" is a complex sentence that provides additional details. The use of past tense is consistent and appropriate for describing a past event, as seen in "The problem started when the package arrived." The answer also uses conditional sentences to express hypothetical situations, such as "I was worried it wouldn't make it in time for the holidays."
Vocabulário
  • online shopping mishap
    online shopping mishap
  • holiday season
    holiday season
  • avoid the crowds
    avoid the crowds
  • sound quality
    sound quality
  • within my budget
    within my budget
  • customer service
    customer service
  • report the issue
    report the issue
  • replacement
    replacement
  • frustrated and disappointed
    frustrated and disappointed
  • double-check
    double-check
  • peak seasons
    peak seasons