Plants— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use plural/singular forms), and avoid repetition. Add one specific detail and a linking word to expand briefly.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. My mother cares for most of them, and we have a variety of houseplants such as pothos and succulents. For example, the pothos in our living room grows quickly and brightens the space.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and follow a clear structure: topic sentence then one or two supporting details with linking words. Be specific about the plant and what you did, and avoid unrelated or unclear phrases.

Exemplo: When I was young I grew a small marigold plant at school. I watered it every day and kept it on my desk, and I felt proud when the bright orange flowers bloomed.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence about your knowledge level, then list specific basic techniques using correct verbs and linking words. Keep it concise and accurate.

Exemplo: I don't know much about advanced gardening, but I know some basic care: you should water plants regularly, give them enough sunlight, and prune dead leaves. For example, watering once every two days and placing the plant near a window helps keep it healthy.

Sugestão: Be specific and correct word choice (plants vs. plans, flowers vs. plants). Start with a clear opinion, then give one or two specific occasions and a linking phrase. Avoid redundant phrases and grammar errors.

Exemplo: Yes, many Chinese people give plants or flowers as gifts. For example, during Chinese New Year families exchange plants for good luck, and friends often send floral arrangements when a business opens to wish success.

× We have various type of plants in in my place.

✓ We have various types of plants in my place.

The noun 'type' must be plural ('types') because it refers to more than one kind; also remove duplicate 'in'. Use 'various types of plants' for correct count agreement.

× When I were young and when I was in school, my T-shirt touched me to grow an easy take caring of plants.

✓ When I was young and in school, my T-shirt motivated me to start taking care of plants easily.

Use past tense 'was' (not 'were') for singular subject 'I'. The original sentence has incorrect word choice and structure: 'touched me to grow an easy take caring' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'motivated me to start taking care of plants' to convey intention and use correct verb forms.

× So I grow.

✓ So I grew.

The event is in the past, so use the past tense 'grew' instead of present 'grow'.

× I grow a small flower at my school and I bring it home and I felt so proud of it.

✓ I grew a small flower at my school, brought it home, and felt very proud of it.

Maintain past tense consistency: use 'grew' and 'brought' instead of present 'grow' and 'bring'. Also combine clauses with commas and remove unnecessary 'a' before 'felt'. Use 'very proud' for natural emphasis.

× I am actually not keen of growing a plant but the basic techniques I know of take carrying your plants is you should flowers and you should gardening it every day and you should watering it too to keep it moisture.

✓ I am actually not keen on growing plants, but the basic techniques I know for taking care of them are: you should water the flowers, garden regularly, and keep the soil moist.

Use 'keen on' (not 'keen of'). Change 'growing a plant' to plural 'growing plants' for general statement. 'Take carrying' should be 'taking care'. Replace awkward 'you should flowers' with 'you should water the flowers' and 'you should gardening it' with 'garden regularly' or 'tend the garden'. Use 'water' not 'watering' in list with 'should'. Use 'keep the soil moist' for correct collocation and noun form.

× Yes, I believe that many Chinese people love to send plans as a present or to celebrate in special occasions.

✓ Yes, I believe that many Chinese people love to send plants as presents or to celebrate special occasions.

Correct 'plans' to 'plants'. Use plural 'presents' to match 'many people' and remove unnecessary preposition 'in' before 'special occasions'.

× For example, during New Year or if you do your own business and on the first day of operation, many people will send flowers to celebrate the successful on the first day and to wish them.

✓ For example, during the New Year or when someone opens a business, many people will send flowers on the first day of operation to celebrate their success and offer good wishes.

Improve sentence structure and clarity: add definite article 'the' for 'New Year', replace 'if you do your own business' with 'when someone opens a business', and use 'celebrate their success' instead of 'celebrate the successful'. 'To wish them' is vague; change to 'offer good wishes'. Ensure tense and phrasing are natural.