Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the comparison directly and explain how the places have changed. Your answer contrasts high school and university, but the point is unclear because you say it was difficult to make friends in both settings, and the sentence is unfinished. Use the past tense for high school and add one specific example of where you met people.

Exemplo: Yes, there is a difference. In high school, I usually met friends in the classroom because we saw each other every day. At university, I tend to meet them in cafés or on campus, since our schedules are less predictable.

Sugestão: Give a direct reason and contrast suitable and unsuitable places. Use natural phrases such as “quiet enough to talk” and “a comfortable place to sit” instead of “have a good word.” Correct subject–verb agreement (“some places are”) and avoid repeating similar verbs like “chatting” and “talking.”

Exemplo: Some places are suitable because they are quiet and comfortable, so people can talk without being interrupted. For example, a café with plenty of seating is a good place to catch up. Noisy or dirty places are less appealing because it is difficult to relax and hear each other.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, then explain why one-to-one time suits you. The middle of your answer is difficult to understand, and “prefer” should be followed by “to” plus a verb or a verb ending in “-ing.” Use “have a deep conversation” rather than “do deep conversation.”

Exemplo: I prefer spending time with one friend because it is easier to focus on the conversation. In a large group, I sometimes find it difficult to get a chance to speak. When it is just the two of us, we can have a more personal, in-depth conversation.

Sugestão: Answer yes or no directly and explain your hesitation in a more natural way. Avoid repeating “very” and “actually.” The phrase “voice friend” is unclear, so name the type of friend you mean, such as “my closest friend.” You can say your home is untidy or does not feel welcoming.

Exemplo: I would invite only a close friend to my home. To be honest, I sometimes feel embarrassed because my place can be quite untidy and does not feel very welcoming. I would feel more comfortable inviting people after I had cleaned it up.

Sugestão: Give a complete answer that balances your independence with the value of friendship. “Rely on to” is ungrammatical; say “rely on other people.” Avoid describing yourself as “not like a human,” and finish your final thought rather than ending mid-sentence.

Exemplo: Friends are important to me, although I am quite independent and enjoy spending time alone. I do not rely on them for everything, but I value having someone I can trust and talk to. They also make special occasions more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer gives a clear reason, but avoid repeating “because” and complete the final sentence. Use “prefer going out alone” or “prefer to go out alone,” and say “without having to consider anyone else’s plans” to express your meaning naturally.

Exemplo: Not very often, partly because I do not have a large circle of friends. I also enjoy going out alone because I can choose where to go and what to do. It is convenient because I do not have to coordinate my plans with anyone else.

Sugestão: Name the place clearly and explain why you meet there. The phrases “We made often cafe,” “hoover and tada,” and “so boss” are unclear; use a simple expression such as “We often meet at a café.” Say “a good place to talk” rather than “a good place to talking,” and clarify what you mean about not drinking.

Exemplo: We often meet at a café near the university. It is a comfortable place to sit and talk, and we can stay there for a while without making special plans. I do not drink alcohol, but I still enjoy meeting friends there for coffee or a snack.

Sugestão: Explain one or two activities and connect them to your shared interest in art. Use “go to a café” and “my friend and I are interested in art.” The phrase “Arctic TV” is unclear; if you mean watching art-related programmes, say so. Replace “share it is thinking” with “share our thoughts.”

Exemplo: We usually go to cafés or visit art exhibitions together. Since my friend and I are both interested in art, we enjoy looking at the works and discussing what we think about them. Sometimes we also watch programmes about artists or exhibitions.

Sugestão: Answer directly and describe how long you have known your friend and how often you meet. Say “I met her when I was five” and “we have been friends for a long time.” Avoid repeating “very”; the ending “it is very wishing her” is unclear, so explain that you miss her or wish you could see her more often.

Exemplo: Yes, I have known my best friend since I was five years old. We have been friends for a very long time, even though we only meet about once a year. I miss her when we are apart, and we try to stay in touch.

× It is different because when I was high school, it is very difficult to make a friend because there is a education situation and environment to make friends very easily, but in the university it is very difficult to make a new friend because

✓ It was different because when I was in high school, it was very difficult to make friends because of the educational situation and environment. At university, it is very difficult to make new friends because...

Use the past tense was to describe your experience in high school. Use in high school and at university for the appropriate prepositions, and use the plural friends when speaking generally. The original reason about the educational environment is unclear, so make sure to explain whether it made meeting friends easier or more difficult.

× Because somebody are quiet or have a good word for meeting or chatting or talking or doing work together but some places are very noisy or dirty so it is hard to meet.

✓ Some people are quiet or have something good to say when meeting, chatting, talking, or working together, but some places are very noisy or dirty, so they are hard to meet in.

Somebody is singular and would take is and has. However, because you are describing people in general, some people are a clearer subject and correctly takes are and have. The original sentence also shifts from describing people to describing places, so keep the subject clear.

× I prefer play hang out with one friend because I'm in trouble so it is very you can just take with you just take with when I'm with many friends, so only chatting one friend is more comfortable for me and we can do deep conversation.

✓ I prefer hanging out with one friend because I feel uncomfortable when I am with many friends. Chatting with one friend is more comfortable for me, and we can have a deep conversation.

After prefer, use a gerund such as hanging out, or use the infinitive to hang out. Use chatting with someone, not chatting someone. The phrase about being in trouble is unclear; choose a phrase that expresses the feeling you intend.

× Yeah, but really very, very, very few friends. Actually it is only my voice friend because I think my home is very dirty and don't have good mood, so I'm shy to show my home to my friends actually. So yeah.

✓ Yes, but I would invite very few friends. Actually, I would invite only my close friend because I think my home is very dirty and does not have a good atmosphere. I am shy about showing my home to my friends.

The opening phrase is a fragment because it has no subject and verb. Add I would invite to make it a complete sentence. In the clause about your home, use does not because home is singular, and state clearly what you mean by voice friend; close friend is used in this correction as a possible intended meaning.

× Actually, I don't rely on to other people, so I think they are not really significant things in my life.

✓ Actually, I do not rely on other people, so I do not think they are very significant in my life.

The verb rely takes the preposition on directly. Do not add to after on. Also, people are not things, so describe their significance rather than calling them significant things.

× I guess it is a little bit cold and not like a human, but I'm a really independent person, so I live

✓ I guess that may sound a little cold and not very human, but I am a really independent person.

The original comparison does not clearly say what is cold or unlike a human, and the sentence ends with the incomplete phrase so I live. Make the idea complete and identify what may sound cold.

× Uh no, because I don't have many friends and I prefer go out solo because it is more convenient and comfortable because I can decide everything that I want.

✓ No, because I do not have many friends and I prefer going out alone. It is more convenient and comfortable because I can decide everything I want to do.

After prefer, use going or the infinitive to go. The correction uses going. The original has repeated because clauses, so separating the ideas makes the sentence easier to follow.

× If I want something to do, just to do it without any considering

✓ If I want to do something, I just do it without considering everything in advance.

Use the infinitive want to do something to describe wanting to perform an action. The original main clause is missing a subject, so add I. After without, a gerund is possible, but considering needs an object or a clearer context.

× We made often cafe because it is very um very not prepared, I mean hoover and tada. So cafe is good place to talking each other and also I don't drink so boss.

✓ We often meet at a cafe. A cafe is a good place to talk to each other. I also do not drink, so...

Use meet at a cafe to describe where you meet. Use the article a before a singular countable noun such as cafe, and use talk to each other rather than talking each other. The remaining words are unclear, so complete the final thought with the meaning you intend.

× We usually go cafe or watching Arctic TV because my major is art, so me and my friend is very interested in the art so watching art exhibition together is very fun and share it is thinking is very good.

✓ We usually go to a cafe or watch Arctic TV. My friend and I are very interested in art because my major is art. Watching art exhibitions together is fun, and sharing our thoughts is very enjoyable.

Keep the verbs parallel after usually: go and watch. Use go to a cafe, and use the plural verb are with the compound subject my friend and I. Do not usually use the before art when referring to the subject in general. Use the plural exhibitions when speaking generally, and make both activities parallel by using gerunds: watching and sharing.

× Yeah, my best friend is I met her when I was five years, so we are very, very, very long friend and we are still best friend.

✓ Yes, I met my best friend when I was five years old, so we have been friends for a very long time and are still best friends.

My best friend is I met her joins two clauses incorrectly. Use I met my best friend. Say five years old to give your age, and use the plural noun friends because you are describing your relationship with another person. Have been friends for a long time correctly describes a friendship that began in the past and continues now.

× I met her maybe once a year, so it is very wishing her.

✓ I meet her maybe once a year, and I miss her a lot.

Use the present tense meet for a recurring habit that happens once a year. The phrase it is very wishing her is not grammatical; if you mean that you feel her absence, say I miss her a lot.