Friends— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答切题，也做出了过去和现在的对比，但最后一句表达不自然，建议说“we mostly keep in touch online”。“nearby my home”可改为“near my home”，“footballs”应为“football”或“play football”。可以补充一个具体的线上交流方式，让内容更清楚。

Exemplo: Yes, there’s quite a big difference. When I was a child, I usually met my friends in a park near my home, where we played football. These days, we mostly keep in touch online, although we still meet in person occasionally.

Sugestão: 观点清楚，并用“because”和“In contrast”组织了正反对比。注意“quite places”应为“quiet places”，“somewhere crowded”后面谓语应为“is”，也可以说“crowded places are”。最后可用更自然的表达“make it difficult to have a conversation”。

Exemplo: Quiet places, such as cafés or restaurants, are usually more suitable because people can talk without raising their voices. By contrast, crowded places can be noisy and distracting, which makes it difficult to have a proper conversation.

Sugestão: 你直接表达了偏好，也给出了性格和感受方面的理由。注意“prefer spend”应为“prefer to spend”，“one-to-one”需要连字符，“a quiet places”应改为“a quiet place”或“quiet places”。建议把最后的定语从句拆开，避免句子过长。

Exemplo: I prefer spending time with one close friend because I’m a little shy in large groups. We can have a proper one-to-one conversation and talk about personal things. Meeting at a quiet café also helps me relax and recharge.

Sugestão: 回答有个人经历，但过去和现在的时态混用，且“sleep with me”容易产生歧义，可用“stay overnight”或“have a sleepover”。“if my mother is outside”表达不清楚；“have a movie on bed”可改为“watch a movie in bed”，“It really make”应为“It really makes”。建议用两句话清楚区分过去和现在。

Exemplo: Yes, I’d be happy to invite friends over. When I was younger, I sometimes asked them to have a sleepover because I was afraid to sleep alone. These days, we usually chat and watch a movie together at home, which I find really relaxing.

Sugestão: 你说明了朋友对你的重要性，并解释了他们提供陪伴和支持。时态建议统一用现在时：“friends play a big role”；“I would like to feel”应改为“I would feel”；“friend always give”应为“friends always give me support”；“like to sharing”应为“like sharing”。可加入一个具体的共同活动，让答案更有细节。

Exemplo: Friends are very important to me because they make my life more enjoyable. Without them, I think I’d feel lonely and might lose interest in some activities. They’re always there to support me, and I enjoy sharing everyday stories with them.

Sugestão: 回答自然直接，也提供了周末活动和放松效果等细节。注意“such as cafe”应改为“such as a café”或“such as cafés”，“after busy week”应为“after a busy week”。“which”指代整件事时，建议在前面加逗号。

Exemplo: Yes, quite often. I usually hang out with my friends at weekends, and we sometimes visit a quiet café and take photos together. It’s a nice way to unwind after a busy week.

Sugestão: 回答了常见见面地点，也提到安静环境有利于聊天。不过“such as cafe and restaurant”缺少冠词或复数形式；“share our things”含义不明确，可以具体说“share news and personal stories”；“have a conversation more personally”不自然，可改为“have a more personal conversation”。

Exemplo: We often meet at a quiet café or restaurant. It’s easier to talk there, and we can catch up on each other’s news. I also find it more comfortable to discuss personal things in a quiet place.

Sugestão: 你提到了聊天和聊天内容，但表达重复且句子结构不清楚。“such as Cafe”应为“such as a café”；不能说“where provides”，可说“which is quiet”或“where we can talk”；“I think really interesting”缺少主语；“deepen relationship”应为“strengthen our friendship”。建议用具体话题支撑答案，并缩短句子。

Exemplo: We usually chat in a quiet café. We talk about films, our hobbies, and funny things that have happened to us recently. Sharing these stories helps us stay close and learn more about each other.

Sugestão: 答案包含了朋友的名字、相识原因和现在的联系情况，信息比较具体。注意“I have friend”应为“I have a friend”，“so have known”需要补出主语“I”；“keep contact”应为“keep in touch”；“often sharing share”应改为“often share”。建议用清楚的句子说明你们从出生起就认识。

Exemplo: Yes. I have a friend called Lily, and we’ve known each other since we were born because our mothers have been friends for years. We still keep in touch regularly. We often share stories about school and talk about what’s happening in our lives.

× When I was a child, we used to meet each other in the park nearby my home.

✓ When I was a child, we used to meet each other in the park near my home.

表示“在我家附近”时，nearby 通常作副词或形容词，不能直接像介词一样接 my home。这里应使用介词 near。

× We would play some outdoor games like footballs and so on.

✓ We would play some outdoor games like football and so on.

football 指这项运动时通常是不可数名词，不加 -s。

× Now there has been a big change that we just made with each other online.

✓ Now things have changed a lot, and we just meet each other online.

原句中 there has been a big change that we just made 结构不自然，that 从句也无法正确表达“现在我们在线上见面”。可以用 things have changed a lot 表示“情况变化很大”，再用 and 连接现在的做法。

× I think quite places such as cafes or restaurants are more suitable for meeting each other because they provide a peaceful atmosphere where people can talk easily.

✓ I think quiet places such as cafes or restaurants are more suitable for meeting each other because they provide a peaceful atmosphere where people can talk easily.

quite 意为“相当”，quiet 意为“安静的”。这里需要形容词 quiet 来修饰 places。

× In contrast, somewhere crowded are not very suitable because they make the conversation difficult.

✓ In contrast, somewhere crowded is not very suitable because it makes conversation difficult.

somewhere 指某个地方，作单数主语，因此谓语应使用 is，而不是 are。

× Actually I'm quite shy so I prefer spend time with one close friend.

✓ Actually, I'm quite shy, so I prefer spending time with one close friend.

prefer 后面可以接动词 -ing 形式，因此应说 prefer spending。也可以说 prefer to spend。

× We can have one to one conversations and share some secrets with each other in a quiet places such as cafe which helps me recharge and relieve my stress.

✓ We can have one-to-one conversations and share some secrets with each other in a quiet place such as a cafe, which helps me recharge and relieve my stress.

a quiet 后面应接单数名词 place，不能接复数 places。

× We can have one to one conversations and share some secrets with each other in a quiet places such as cafe which helps me recharge and relieve my stress.

✓ We can have one-to-one conversations and share some secrets with each other in a quiet place such as a cafe, which helps me recharge and relieve my stress.

单数可数名词 cafe 前需要冠词 a。这里 place 也改为单数后，表达“一个安静的地方”时使用 a quiet place。

× Absolutely, When I was a child, I would like to invite my friends to sleep with me if my mother is outside because I am so afraid that I can sleep alone.

✓ Absolutely. When I was a child, I would invite my friends to sleep over if my mother was out because I was so afraid that I couldn't sleep alone.

这句话描述童年时的情况，应保持过去时态一致：is、am 应改为 was。表达过去无法独自入睡时，用 couldn't sleep alone。

× But now we just chat with each other and have a movie on bed.

✓ But now we just chat with each other and watch a movie in bed.

表示“在床上”时，固定搭配是 in bed，而不是 on bed。

× It really make me feel relaxed.

✓ It really makes me feel relaxed.

主语 It 是第三人称单数，通常现在时谓语动词需要加 -s，因此 make 应改为 makes。

× As for me, friends played big role in my life.

✓ As for me, friends play a big role in my life.

这里是在说明朋友现在对生活的重要性，应使用一般现在时 play，而不是表示过去的 played。

× As for me, friends played big role in my life.

✓ As for me, friends play a big role in my life.

role 是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词 a，因此应说 a big role。

× Without friends I would like to feel more lonely and lose interest in many activities, because friend always give me a big support and I like to sharing interesting things with them.

✓ Without friends, I would feel lonelier and lose interest in many activities, because friends always give me a lot of support and I like sharing interesting things with them.

would like to feel 表示“想要感到”，不符合这里“没有朋友就会感到更孤独”的假设含义。表达假设结果时直接用 would feel。

× Without friends I would like to feel more lonely and lose interest in many activities, because friend always give me a big support and I like to sharing interesting things with them.

✓ Without friends, I would feel lonelier and lose interest in many activities, because friends always give me a lot of support and I like sharing interesting things with them.

这里泛指“朋友”，应使用复数 friends，而不是单数 friend。

× Without friends I would like to feel more lonely and lose interest in many activities, because friend always give me a big support and I like to sharing interesting things with them.

✓ Without friends, I would feel lonelier and lose interest in many activities, because friends always give me a lot of support and I like sharing interesting things with them.

support 在这里表示“支持”，是不可数名词，不能用 a 修饰。可以用 a lot of support 表示“很多支持”。

× Without friends I would like to feel more lonely and lose interest in many activities, because friend always give me a big support and I like to sharing interesting things with them.

✓ Without friends, I would feel lonelier and lose interest in many activities, because friends always give me a lot of support and I like sharing interesting things with them.

like 后可以接动词 -ing 形式，也可以接 to 加动词原形。原句把 to 和 sharing 连用不正确，应改为 like sharing 或 like to share。

× We also usually go to a quiet place such as cafe and take beautiful photos together which really helps me relax after busy week.

✓ We also usually go to a quiet place such as a cafe and take beautiful photos together, which really helps me relax after a busy week.

cafe 和 week 都是此处的单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。应分别使用 a cafe 和 a busy week。

× We often choose a quiet place such as cafe and restaurant to meet each other where we can share our things easily and have a conversation more personally.

✓ We often choose quiet places such as cafes and restaurants to meet, where we can share things easily and have conversations more personally.

原句用 a quiet place 表示单数，却列举 cafe and restaurant 两种地方，单复数不一致。这里统一改为复数 places、cafes 和 restaurants。

× We often choose a quiet place such as cafe and restaurant to meet each other where we can share our things easily and have a conversation more personally.

✓ We often choose quiet places such as cafes and restaurants to meet, where we can share things easily and have conversations more personally.

原句中的 cafe 和 restaurant 是单数可数名词，却没有冠词。修正时将列举的地点统一改成复数形式，不需要在它们前面加冠词。

× I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as Cafe where provides a quiet place for me and I think really interesting such as movies, hobbies and funny stories will help us to deepen relationship.

✓ I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as a cafe, which provides a quiet setting. I think that interesting topics, such as movies, hobbies, and funny stories, will help us deepen our relationship.

where 表示“在那里”，不能在从句中作主语。这里需要一个指代 cafe 并充当主语的关系代词 which。

× I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as Cafe where provides a quiet place for me and I think really interesting such as movies, hobbies and funny stories will help us to deepen relationship.

✓ I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as a cafe, which provides a quiet setting. I think that interesting topics, such as movies, hobbies, and funny stories, will help us deepen our relationship.

I think 后面的原句缺少清楚的主语，really interesting 也没有说明“什么东西有趣”。补上 topics 作为主语，并将句子拆开，可以让结构更完整、意思更清楚。

× I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as Cafe where provides a quiet place for me and I think really interesting such as movies, hobbies and funny stories will help us to deepen relationship.

✓ I usually chat with my friends in a peaceful place such as a cafe, which provides a quiet setting. I think that interesting topics, such as movies, hobbies, and funny stories, will help us deepen our relationship.

单数可数名词 cafe 前需要冠词 a；relationship 在这里也需要限定词，因此应说 our relationship。

× Yes, absolutely. I have friend called Lily.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I have a friend called Lily.

friend 是单数可数名词，前面需要不定冠词 a。

× Our mothers have been friends for many years so have known each other since we were born.

✓ Our mothers have been friends for many years, so we have known each other since we were born.

so 后面的分句缺少主语。补上 we 后，句子结构完整，也清楚表达“所以我们从出生起就认识”。

× We still keep contact with each other frequently and often sharing share interesting stories about school.

✓ We still keep in contact with each other and often share interesting stories about school.

表示“保持联系”的固定搭配是 keep in contact，不能说 keep contact。

× We still keep contact with each other frequently and often sharing share interesting stories about school.

✓ We still keep in contact with each other and often share interesting stories about school.

句子描述经常发生的事情，often 后应使用一般现在时动词原形 share。sharing share 是重复且不正确的动词形式。