Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答内容具体、有故事性，但有几处明显语法问题。注意冠词和介词搭配：说“an advertisement”和“begged my mother to buy it”，而不是“begged for my mother”。结尾可用现在时被动表达物品仍然摆在桌上：“It is still on my desk.”

Exemplo: Yes, I once bought something because of an advertisement. When I was a child, I saw an ad for a toy car and really wanted it. My mother initially said no, but after I pleaded with her for a while, she agreed to buy it. I still keep it on my desk.

Sugestão: 回答切题，也说明了你如何应对广告，但“make me a little annoying”应改为“make me a little annoyed”，因为这里描述的是你的感受；“pay for the ad free”可改为“pay for an ad-free subscription”。建议用“so”连接广告让你烦恼以及付费去广告的结果。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of ads when I’m using my phone, especially while watching videos on TikTok. They can be quite annoying because they interrupt the videos. If I use an app frequently, I sometimes pay for an ad-free subscription.

Sugestão: 你提供了具体的广告画面和反应，这是优点。不过开头“Absolutely OK I see”不自然，时态也应使用过去式；可说“There was an advertisement that left a strong impression on me”。注意“crispy, golden chicken”通常不可数，结尾“at that time”比“in that time”自然。

Exemplo: Yes, a fast-food commercial left a strong impression on me when I was a child. It showed crispy, golden chicken, and the food always made my mouth water. I remember wanting to try it, although I can’t recall whether I actually did.

Sugestão: 第一句直接回答了问题，但后两句有主谓一致和表达问题：“They usually display...”或“Advertisements usually promote...”；“It always give me a lot of new thought”不自然。可以具体说明广告让你发现了什么，例如旅游目的地或旅行优惠。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains when I travel. They usually promote travel companies, tourist attractions, or special deals. Sometimes an attractive poster introduces me to a destination I hadn’t considered visiting before.

Sugestão: 观点明确，也通过对比解释了自己的喜好。这里“contact”应为“content”，描述一般看法时用现在时“ I admire/appreciate it”，不要用过去式“admired”。“valuable things”也可以换成更自然的“meaningful messages”。

Exemplo: It depends on the content. I appreciate advertisements that share meaningful messages, such as the importance of family or becoming independent. However, I find ads annoying if they are repetitive or don’t offer anything useful.

Sugestão: 你给出了个人例子，并说明广告对你的影响，内容较有说服力。注意泛指时用复数“advertisements”，以及说“when I was a child”。“contact family members frequently”可以改成更自然的“keep in touch with family members”；最后一句可表达为“ I still follow that advice.”

Exemplo: I prefer advertisements that share a positive or useful message. For example, when I was a child, I saw an ad encouraging people to keep in touch with their family. I still follow that advice and try to contact my relatives regularly.

× Yes, when I was a child I saw advertisement for a toy car and I really wanted it, so I begged for my mother to buy it for me.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw an advertisement for a toy car and I really wanted it, so I begged my mother to buy it for me.

问题类型：冠词错误。这里的 advertisement 是单数可数名词，前面需要加不定冠词 an。

× Yes, when I was a child I saw advertisement for a toy car and I really wanted it, so I begged for my mother to buy it for me.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw an advertisement for a toy car and I really wanted it, so I begged my mother to buy it for me.

问题类型：介词使用错误。固定搭配是 beg someone to do something，表示“恳求某人做某事”，beg 后面不需要加 for。

× It still be put on my desk.

✓ It is still kept on my desk.

问题类型：被动语态错误。原句缺少正确的 be 动词形式。一般现在时的被动语态需要用 am/is/are + 过去分词，因此应说 is kept。

× Absolutely, when I'm scrolling through videos on Tiktok I often see advertisements which make me a little annoying so I sometimes pay for the ad free and to avoid them.

✓ Absolutely. When I'm scrolling through videos on TikTok, I often see advertisements that annoy me a little, so I sometimes pay for an ad-free subscription to avoid them.

问题类型：形容词使用错误。annoying 通常形容“令人烦恼的事物”；描述人的感受时应使用 annoyed。这里也可以改用动词 annoy，表达广告“让我觉得烦”。

× Absolutely, when I'm scrolling through videos on Tiktok I often see advertisements which make me a little annoying so I sometimes pay for the ad free and to avoid them.

✓ Absolutely. When I'm scrolling through videos on TikTok, I often see advertisements that annoy me a little, so I sometimes pay for an ad-free subscription to avoid them.

问题类型：句子结构错误。pay for 后面需要接名词或名词短语，原句中的 the ad free 不是完整、正确的名词短语。可以说 pay for an ad-free subscription。

× Absolutely OK I see advertisement left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely. I saw an advertisement that left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

问题类型：句子结构错误。原句把 I see advertisement 和 left a strong impression 两个结构直接连在一起，缺少合适的连接方式。可用 that 引导定语从句，说明是哪则广告留下了深刻印象。

× Absolutely OK I see advertisement left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely. I saw an advertisement that left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

问题类型：过去时错误。句子描述的是童年时发生的事情，时间背景是过去，因此 see 应改为过去式 saw。

× Absolutely OK I see advertisement left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely. I saw an advertisement that left a strong impression on me when I was a child.

问题类型：冠词错误。advertisement 是单数可数名词，泛指一则广告时应使用 an advertisement。

× It displayed A crispy and golden chickens that always made my mouth water whenever I saw the commercial and I really wanted to try it in that time.

✓ It showed crispy, golden chicken, which always made my mouth water whenever I saw the commercial, and I really wanted to try it at that time.

问题类型：单复数错误。原句中的 a 和复数 chickens 不能搭配。这里指作为食物的鸡肉，可以用不可数名词 chicken，不加 a，也不加复数词尾。

× It displayed A crispy and golden chickens that always made my mouth water whenever I saw the commercial and I really wanted to try it in that time.

✓ It showed crispy, golden chicken, which always made my mouth water whenever I saw the commercial, and I really wanted to try it at that time.

问题类型：介词使用错误。表示“在那个时候”时，固定说法是 at that time，而不是 in that time。

× They usually displays about travelling companies or the scenery of the destination.

✓ They usually display information about travel companies or the scenery of the destinations.

问题类型：主谓一致错误。主语 They 是复数，谓语动词应使用原形 display，不能加 -s。

× They usually displays about travelling companies or the scenery of the destination.

✓ They usually display information about travel companies or the scenery of the destinations.

问题类型：句子结构错误。display 通常需要直接接它展示的内容；原句的 display about 后面缺少合适的宾语。可以说 display information about...。

× It always give me a lot of new thought about my travel.

✓ It always gives me a lot of new ideas about my travel.

问题类型：第三人称单数错误。主语 It 是第三人称单数，一般现在时的谓语动词 give 应加 -s，改为 gives。

× It always give me a lot of new thought about my travel.

✓ It always gives me a lot of new ideas about my travel.

问题类型：单复数错误。a lot of 后面可以接复数可数名词。这里表达“很多新想法”时，应使用复数 ideas。

× If it shows valuable things like family relationships or lessons about becoming independent, I admired it.

✓ If it shows valuable things like family relationships or lessons about becoming independent, I admire it.

问题类型：现在时错误。这里描述的是对广告的一般看法，与前面的条件句构成一般规律，因此主句应使用一般现在时 admire，而不是过去式 admired。

× I prefer advertisement that shows something valuable.

✓ I prefer advertisements that show something valuable.

问题类型：单复数错误。这里是在泛指自己喜欢的广告类型，应使用复数 advertisements；相应地，关系从句中的 shows 也改为 show。

× For example, when I was child, I saw advertisements that told us to contact family members frequently.

✓ For example, when I was a child, I saw advertisements that told us to contact family members frequently.

问题类型：冠词错误。child 是单数可数名词，表示“我是一个孩子时”应说 when I was a child。

× Until now, I still keep this habit.

✓ I have kept this habit until now.

问题类型：现在时错误。until now 表示从过去持续到现在的情况，通常使用现在完成时 have/has + 过去分词，因此 keep 应改为 have kept。