Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 先直接回答频率，再说明广告出现的平台和例子。原回答中“development of technology advancement”和“send my phone or computer”表达不自然，句子结构也不清楚。可以使用“advertisements are often shown on my phone”和“especially when I watch videos”这样的搭配，并避免重复表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements quite often on my phone and computer. They usually appear when I watch videos or use social media. I also see quite a few adverts when I watch TV.

Sugestão: 需要明确说明是哪一个广告、它的产品以及为什么令人印象深刻。原回答存在严重的词汇和语法问题，例如“one child”“made me important”和“was meant the advertisement”都无法清楚表达意思。建议使用过去时，并按“广告内容—印象原因”的顺序组织答案。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a chocolate advertisement from my childhood. It showed a group of children sharing chocolate and having fun together. I still remember it because the music was catchy and the chocolate looked delicious.

Sugestão: 回答方向基本正确，但问题询问的是现在的日常情况，因此应使用一般现在时“Yes, I do”或“No, I don’t”，而不是过去时“No, I didn’t”。还可以补充一个简短原因或具体地点，使答案更完整。

Exemplo: No, I don’t see many advertisements on public transport. I occasionally notice posters on buses, but there are not many adverts on the trains I use.

Sugestão: 应先清楚表达是否喜欢广告，再解释与专业的关系。原回答中的“those meant”“advancement design”和“my major soul”搭配不自然，导致意思难以理解。可以说“Since I study graphic design, I’m interested in the visual side of advertisements”，并加入广告设计方面的具体内容。

Exemplo: Yes, I do, especially well-designed advertisements. I study graphic design, so I’m interested in the colours, images and layout that advertisers use. I also like seeing how a simple idea can attract people’s attention.

Sugestão: 需要直接说喜欢哪种广告，并解释原因。原回答虽然提到了食品广告，但“the other worst thing”“food adversity”和“I go to”表达不准确且重复。建议使用“food advertisements”“show food clearly”和“make me want to try it”等自然表达，并提供一个具体例子。

Exemplo: I like food advertisements, especially those for restaurants and snacks. They often show the food in an attractive way, which makes me want to try it. For example, a video showing freshly made pizza can immediately make me hungry.

Sugestão: 这个回答有相关经历，但需要使用正确的过去时并完整说明购买了什么、广告展示了什么以及购买结果。“when I was chilled”应改为“when I was a child”，“I see”应改为“I saw”，“I put it”不能表达“买了它”，应使用“I bought it”。同时避免重复“advertisement”和“very very”。

Exemplo: Yes, I once bought a chocolate bar because of an advertisement. I saw it when I was a child, and the advert showed people enjoying its rich, sweet flavour. I wanted to try it, so I asked my parents to buy it for me.

× And yes, I do wish development of technology advancement often umm, send my phone or computer and also when I watch TV. Umm yeah.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer, and I also see them when I watch TV.

原句缺少清晰的主语、谓语和宾语，多个词组连接混乱，导致句子结构不完整。回答一般习惯时，应使用清楚的主语和一般现在时结构，例如“I often see advertisements...”。

× And yes, I do wish development of technology advancement often umm, send my phone or computer and also when I watch TV. Umm yeah.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone or computer, and I also see them when I watch TV.

频率副词“often”通常放在实义动词前面，所以应说“I often see”，而不是把“often”放在混乱的位置。副词“also”也应放在助动词后、实义动词前，或直接放在句首。

× Yes, one child I have all the adorsement made me important. It is chocolate that was meant the advertisement. From my.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, an advertisement made a strong impression on me. It was an advertisement for chocolate.

问题询问的是小时候发生的事情，因此应使用一般过去时，如“was”和“made”。“when I was a child”比“One child I have”更符合过去时间的表达。

× Yes, one child I have all the adorsement made me important. It is chocolate that was meant the advertisement. From my.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, an advertisement made a strong impression on me. It was an advertisement for chocolate.

表示“巧克力广告”时，应使用“an advertisement for chocolate”，介词“for”表示广告所宣传的对象。不能说“advertisement from chocolate”或使用不完整的介词结构。

× Yes, one child I have all the adorsement made me important. It is chocolate that was meant the advertisement. From my.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, an advertisement made a strong impression on me. It was an advertisement for chocolate.

“advertisement”是可数名词单数，第一次提到时前面需要使用不定冠词“an”。因此应说“an advertisement”，而不是直接说“advertisement”。

× No, I didn't.

✓ No, I don't.

问题使用“Do you see...?”询问现在的习惯或情况，因此回答也应使用一般现在时：“No, I don't.”“didn't”是一般过去时，不符合问题的时态。

× Yes, I like those meant because my major is advancement design so I feel very I prefer liked my major soul 88 other was meant.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements because my major is advertising design, so I am very interested in them.

原句包含许多无法组成完整句子的词组，连接词“because”和“so”的使用也不清楚。可以使用“主语 + 谓语 + 宾语”的基本结构，并用“because”说明原因。

× Yes, I like those meant because my major is advancement design so I feel very I prefer liked my major soul 88 other was meant.

✓ Yes, I like advertisements because my major is advertising design, so I am very interested in them.

表达“对广告感兴趣”时，应使用形容词短语“be interested in”。“very”应修饰形容词“interested”，所以应说“I am very interested in them”。

× I prefer like a food the other worst thing because I can I can see different food adversity and and I go to.

✓ I prefer food advertisements because I can see different kinds of food, and they make me want to try them.

原句有重复主语和谓语，如“I can I can”，并且多个成分没有正确连接。应删除重复内容，使用完整的句子结构，例如“I prefer food advertisements because...”。

× I prefer like a food the other worst thing because I can I can see different food adversity and and I go to.

✓ I prefer food advertisements because I can see different kinds of food, and they make me want to try them.

“food”通常是不可数名词，表示不同种类的食物时，应使用“different kinds of food”，而不是直接说“different food”。“kinds of”可以清楚地表示不同种类。

× Yes, when I was chilled I see chocolate adorsement and and the adorsement told me the chocolate is very very sweet so I put it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw a chocolate advertisement, and the advertisement told me that the chocolate was very sweet, so I bought it.

“when I was a child”说明事情发生在过去，因此“see”应改为过去式“saw”。广告当时告诉学生巧克力很甜，所以“is”在过去语境中应改为“was”。

× Yes, when I was chilled I see chocolate adorsement and and the adorsement told me the chocolate is very very sweet so I put it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw a chocolate advertisement, and the advertisement told me that the chocolate was very sweet, so I bought it.

第一次提到单数可数名词“advertisement”时，需要使用不定冠词“a”，所以应说“a chocolate advertisement”。再次提到同一个广告时，使用定冠词“the”。

× Yes, when I was chilled I see chocolate adorsement and and the adorsement told me the chocolate is very very sweet so I put it.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I saw a chocolate advertisement, and the advertisement told me that the chocolate was very sweet, so I bought it.

“the advertisement told me...”后面是在转述广告内容，应使用间接引语连接词“that”。由于主句使用过去时“told”，转述内容通常也要相应使用过去时“was”。