Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng chủ đề và nêu được hai ý trái chiều: quảng cáo gây khó chịu nhưng đôi khi hữu ích. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm/từ vựng như “artisements” thay vì “advertisements”, “they are so much problem” và bị kéo dài, lặp từ “because/sometimes” mà không hoàn thành ý. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó giải thích tần suất, nơi bạn thường thấy quảng cáo và tác động của chúng. Nên dùng từ nối như “however” hoặc “although” để thể hiện sự tương phản, đồng thời giới hạn câu trả lời trong 2–3 câu rõ ràng.

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements quite often, especially when I use my phone. They usually appear while I am watching videos or browsing social media, which can be annoying. However, some of them are useful when they offer products or discounts that I need.

Sugestão: Bạn đã cố gắng đưa ra một ví dụ cụ thể về quảng cáo mì ăn liền “Zin Zin”, nhưng câu trả lời còn khó hiểu do dùng sai từ và cấu trúc, chẳng hạn “impressive attachment” và “my people and I people were stupid”. Cần nói rõ quảng cáo đó là sản phẩm gì, điều gì khiến bạn nhớ, và quảng cáo ảnh hưởng đến bạn như thế nào. Hãy tránh những từ không chắc nghĩa và dùng các cụm tự nhiên như “It left a strong impression on me” hoặc “The catchy name and jingle made it memorable”.

Exemplo: Yes, I remember an advertisement for a noodle brand called Zin Zin. It left a strong impression on me because the name was catchy and the commercial had a funny song. My friends and I often repeated the song at school.

Sugestão: Bạn có đề cập đến việc thường đi xe buýt thay vì tàu hỏa, nhưng chưa trả lời rõ liệu bạn có thấy nhiều quảng cáo trên phương tiện giao thông hay không. Có nhiều lỗi từ vựng và diễn đạt như “train is not my offer vehicle”, “Trent is a good player” và “put on their advertisement”, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp như “Yes, I see quite a lot of advertisements on buses”, rồi mô tả vị trí của quảng cáo và đưa ra nhận xét ngắn.

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on buses, especially inside the vehicle and on the back of the seats. They usually promote food, mobile services, or language courses. I do not often travel by train, but I imagine advertising is common there too.

Sugestão: Bạn thể hiện được quan điểm rõ ràng rằng không thích quảng cáo vì chúng gây phiền, đồng thời đưa ra một ngoại lệ hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, cần sửa ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ: “advertisements ... bother me” thay vì “it's bothered me”, và “when we need information, we search for them” sẽ tự nhiên hơn “when we need help”. Hãy dùng cấu trúc “I do not really like advertisements because... However, ...” để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ “advertisement”.

Exemplo: I do not really like advertisements because they often interrupt videos or appear unexpectedly on my phone. However, I do find them useful when I am looking for a particular product or service. In that situation, I prefer searching for advertisements myself rather than receiving random ones.

Sugestão: Bạn đã nêu được sở thích là quảng cáo có bài hát, và lý do là giai điệu giúp bạn ghi nhớ. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời bị ngắt quãng, lặp “sometimes”, dùng sai cấu trúc “advertisement like a song” và chưa đưa ra ví dụ hoàn chỉnh. Hãy nói “I like advertisements that use catchy songs”, sau đó giải thích rằng giai điệu dễ nhớ và có thể trở nên phổ biến, kèm một ví dụ cụ thể nếu có.

Exemplo: I like advertisements that use catchy songs or jingles. A memorable tune makes the product easier to remember, and sometimes people even share the song online. For example, I still remember a commercial because its cheerful music became popular among my friends.

Sugestão: Bạn trả lời đúng câu hỏi và đưa ra hai lý do hợp lý: quảng cáo giới thiệu sản phẩm giải quyết nhu cầu và cung cấp giảm giá. Tuy nhiên, câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh, có lỗi hòa hợp chủ ngữ–động từ và dạng từ như “it also give”, “beneficed” và “decide buy”. Hãy kể một trường hợp cụ thể, nói rõ bạn đã mua sản phẩm nào, quảng cáo đã thuyết phục bạn ra sao, và kết quả sau khi mua. Có thể dùng “I decided to buy it” và “Unfortunately, I later realized that...”.

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought things because of advertisements, especially when they offered a timely discount. For example, I once bought a pair of headphones after seeing an online advertisement that highlighted their noise-cancelling feature. They were useful, although I later realized that the sound quality was only average.

× They are so much problem at this moment.

✓ They cause so many problems at the moment.

Problems is a countable plural noun, so many is required instead of much. Much is normally used with uncountable nouns.

× I would say artisements on my phone because they are very annoying because they interrupt when I'm watching my favorite shows or TV and sometimes I feel they are very useful because they are so much problem at this moment but sometimes.

✓ I would say that I often see advertisements on my phone. They are very annoying because they interrupt me when I am watching my favorite shows or TV. However, sometimes I feel that they are useful because they solve some problems.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence with several ideas joined together without clear punctuation or structure. Divide the ideas into shorter sentences and use however to show contrast.

× That was very impressive attachment.

✓ That was a very impressive advertisement.

A singular countable noun needs an article. Use a before very because the following adjective begins with a consonant sound.

× Yes, when I was a child, that was very impressive attachment And that made me remember until today.

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I saw an advertisement that made a strong impression on me, and I still remember it today.

The original contains an incomplete and unnatural sentence structure. Use a complete subject and verb, and connect the ideas with that and and. The expression still remember it today is the natural way to express this meaning.

× Actually train is not my offer vehicle.

✓ Actually, trains are not my preferred means of transportation.

When speaking about trains as a type of transportation in general, use the plural noun trains. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are.

× Actually train is not my offer vehicle.

✓ Actually, the train is not my preferred means of transportation.

A singular countable noun such as train normally needs a determiner. Use the when referring to the train as a form of transportation in a general context.

× I usually commute by bus or other other years ago.

✓ I usually commute by bus, although I used other forms of transportation years ago.

Years ago is the correct time expression. The original phrase other other years ago is not grammatically formed. Use by bus for the method of transportation.

× I usually commute by bus or other other years ago but I think Trent is a good player for a very plan put on their advertisement.

✓ I usually commute by bus, although I used other forms of transportation years ago. However, I think trains are a good place for companies to put their advertisements.

The original contains several incomplete and confusing clauses. Separate the contrasting ideas into two complete sentences and use although and however to connect them clearly.

× Advertisement is so annoying and it's bothered me.

✓ Advertising is so annoying, and it bothers me.

The answer discusses a general present opinion, so use the present simple bothers rather than the present perfect form has bothered or the incorrect form it's bothered.

× I think advertisement just is useful and helpful when we need help, we search for them rather than they suddenly appear.

✓ I think advertisements are useful and helpful when we need something. We search for them rather than letting them suddenly appear.

Advertisements is plural, so it must be followed by are, not is. The pronoun them correctly refers to the plural noun advertisements.

× I think advertisement just is useful and helpful.

✓ I think advertisements are just useful and helpful when we need them.

The adverb just should be placed before the adjective or adjective phrase it modifies. The natural position is are just useful, not just is useful.

× I like advertisement like a song.

✓ I like advertisements with songs.

When referring to advertisements in general, use the plural form advertisements. Songs is also plural because the speaker is discussing advertisements generally.

× I can sometimes feel it last when I heard the song.

✓ I can sometimes feel that it lasts when I hear the song.

The answer expresses a general reaction, so use the present simple hear instead of the past tense heard. Use lasts because it refers to the singular subject it.

× When I heard the song and can you see some song for advertisement became popular.

✓ When I hear the song, I can sometimes feel that it stays with me. Some songs used in advertisements have also become popular.

Use the present tense hear because this describes a repeated or general experience. The second clause needs a complete subject and verb; songs have become popular is grammatically complete.

× I like advertisement like a song because it makes me remember and sometimes it's a good song and I can sometimes feel it last when I heard the song and can you see some song for advertisement became popular like.

✓ I like advertisements with songs because they help me remember them. Sometimes, a good song stays with me after I hear it, and some songs used in advertisements become popular.

The original is a run-on sentence containing several ideas joined only with and. Divide it into clear sentences and give each clause a complete subject and verb.

× It also give me a timely discount.

✓ They also give me timely discounts.

The subject advertisements is plural, so use give, not gives. The pronoun they must also be used instead of it to agree with the plural subject.

× Advertisements solve my problem.

✓ Advertisements solve my problems.

Because the speaker is referring to different difficulties in general, use the plural countable noun problems.

× I will decide buy them.

✓ I decide to buy them.

The verb decide is followed by the infinitive with to: decide to buy. The present simple is suitable because the speaker is describing a usual response to advertisements.

× When I buy them after time I feel.

✓ However, after I buy them, I sometimes feel disappointed.

Use after I buy them to introduce the time clause. The phrase after time is not natural in this context. The sentence also needs a complement after feel to express the speaker's reaction.