Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答有直接回应问题，也提供了具体频率和场景，但存在明显语法和搭配问题。应说“on my computer”而不是“on my computers”，“on my phone”而不是“at my phone”；“I had to watch”应改为一般现在时“I have to watch”；最后一句没有完整表达，应该说明广告通常持续几秒。可以使用“for example”连接细节，并补充广告出现的具体位置。

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements on my phone and computer almost every day. For example, when I open certain apps, I sometimes have to watch a five-second video before I can use them. I also see banner ads when I browse the internet.

Sugestão: 答案包含童年经历和广告内容，但时态、单复数及句子结构问题较多。“usually watch”应改为“usually watched”，“a lot of advertisement”应改为“a lot of advertisements”；“especially when advertisement about medicine”不是完整句子，应改为“especially advertisements for medicine”。描述两位老人时，要使用过去时“They were dancing and saying...”并说明这个广告为什么令人印象深刻。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a medicine advertisement from my childhood. When I was young, I watched a lot of television, and this advertisement stood out because it showed two elderly people dancing and praising the product. I found it memorable because it was cheerful and quite unusual for a medicine commercial.

Sugestão: 回答直接，但最后一句未完成，导致信息不完整。可以先说明在什么交通工具上看到广告，再列举两类具体内容，例如旅游景点、餐馆或手机应用。“some about the interesting place of a city”应改为“some promoting interesting places in the city”。使用“while”或“such as”连接例子，使答案更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on trains and buses. Some of them promote interesting places in the city, such as museums or tourist attractions, while others advertise restaurants and mobile apps. They are usually placed above the seats or next to the doors.

Sugestão: 答案有明确观点，但第二句表达不清，且“advertisements”应使用复数形式。“It depends if”可以改为更自然的“It depends on whether”；“the nor Beijing advertisements”似乎想表达“北京的广告”，应明确说成“advertisements in Beijing”。建议先给出总体看法，再通过“however”进行对比，并说明喜欢或不喜欢的原因。

Exemplo: It depends on whether the advertisements are interesting. I like some advertisements in Beijing because they are creative and show local culture. However, most advertisements are repetitive, so I usually ignore them.

Sugestão: 答案结构较好，直接表达偏好并提供了例子，但有词汇和语法错误。“I'm patient about”应改为“I'm interested in”或“I like”；“advertisement that are”应改为“advertisements that are”；“an advertisement when”应改为“advertisements in which”。可以进一步说明创意和信息性为什么吸引你。

Exemplo: I like advertisements that are both creative and informative. For example, I enjoy commercials in which people sing together and share funny stories. They catch my attention because they are entertaining, but they also give me useful information about the product.

Sugestão: 答案回答完整，包含时间、地点、产品和结果，内容比较具体。需要改进冠词、介词和搭配：“in a elevator”应为“in an elevator”，“food in local restaurant”应为“food from a local restaurant”；“order the new product”不如“try the new dish”自然。可以说明广告中的什么元素吸引了你，例如图片、折扣或宣传语。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. Last year, I saw an attractive advertisement in an elevator for a local restaurant. The advertisement showed a delicious-looking new dish and offered a small discount, so I decided to visit the restaurant and try it.

× Of course I see advertisements on my phone or computers every day.

✓ Of course, I see advertisements on my phone or computer every day.

“phone or computer”表示两种可能的设备，使用“or”连接时，名词应保持单数形式。不要把“computer”写成复数“computers”。

× When I open some app at my phone, I had to watch about 5 seconds to.

✓ When I open an app on my phone, I have to watch it for about five seconds.

“app”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“an”。“some app”在这里不自然。

× When I open some app at my phone, I had to watch about 5 seconds to.

✓ When I open an app on my phone, I have to watch it for about five seconds.

表示在手机上使用应用程序时，应使用“on my phone”，而不是“at my phone”。表示持续一段时间时，应使用“for about five seconds”。

× When I open some app at my phone, I had to watch about 5 seconds to.

✓ When I open an app on my phone, I have to watch it for about five seconds.

这句话描述每天都会发生的习惯，应使用一般现在时“have to”，而不是过去时“had to”。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watch TV so I saw a lot of advertisement, especially when advertisement about, uh, medicine.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watched TV, so I saw a lot of advertisements, especially advertisements about medicine.

“when I was a kid”表示过去的时间，因此“watch”应改为过去式“watched”。描述过去的习惯时，动词也要使用过去时。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watch TV so I saw a lot of advertisement, especially when advertisement about, uh, medicine.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watched TV, so I saw a lot of advertisements, especially advertisements about medicine.

“a lot of”后面通常接可数名词复数，所以“advertisement”应改为“advertisements”。后面泛指药品广告，也应使用复数“advertisements”。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watch TV so I saw a lot of advertisement, especially when advertisement about, uh, medicine.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I usually watched TV, so I saw a lot of advertisements, especially advertisements about medicine.

“especially when advertisement about medicine”结构不完整。“when”引导时间从句时需要完整的主语和谓语；这里想表达的是“尤其是药品广告”，直接使用“especially advertisements about medicine”更合适。

× They were two older people dancing together and uh, say good things about their products.

✓ There were two older people dancing together, and they said good things about their products.

表示“有两位老人”时，应使用“There were”，因为后面的名词“两位老人”是复数。不能使用“They were”来表达“有”。

× They were two older people dancing together and uh, say good things about their products.

✓ There were two older people dancing together, and they said good things about their products.

这句话讲述童年时看到的广告，属于过去事件，所以“say”应改为过去式“said”。同一个过去情境中的主要动词通常要保持过去时。

× Yes, I often see advertisements on trains or buses, some about the interesting place of a city, some about the.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on trains or buses, some about interesting places in the city and some about other things.

原句末尾的“some about the”没有完成意思，属于句子结构不完整。应补充完整的名词或内容，例如“some about other things”。

× It depends if advertisements are interesting.

✓ It depends on whether the advertisements are interesting.

“depend”通常与介词“on”搭配；在表示“是否”时，正式且正确的连接词是“whether”。建议记住固定搭配“depend on whether...”。

× As I mentioned before the nor Beijing advertisements I think it is interesting but most of the time advertisements are boring.

✓ As I mentioned before, I think the Beijing advertisements are interesting, but most of the time, advertisements are boring.

原句中的“nor”不能放在这里连接意思，导致句子逻辑混乱。这里应删除“nor”，并使用“but”连接“有趣”和“无聊”这两个相反的观点。

× As I mentioned before the nor Beijing advertisements I think it is interesting but most of the time advertisements are boring.

✓ As I mentioned before, I think the Beijing advertisements are interesting, but most of the time, advertisements are boring.

“advertisements”是复数名词，所以代词应使用复数“they”，或者像修改后的句子一样直接省略代词。不能使用单数代词“it”指代复数的“advertisements”。

× I'm patient about advertisement that are very creative and informative.

✓ I'm passionate about advertisements that are very creative and informative.

“patient”表示“有耐心的”，不能表达“对广告很感兴趣”。这里想表达“热衷于”，应使用“passionate about”。注意区分“patient”和“passionate”。

× I'm patient about advertisement that are very creative and informative.

✓ I'm passionate about advertisements that are very creative and informative.

这里是在泛指有创意且信息丰富的广告，所以“advertisement”应使用复数“advertisements”。

× I'm patient about advertisement that are very creative and informative.

✓ I'm passionate about advertisements that are very creative and informative.

关系代词“that”指代复数名词“advertisements”，所以后面的系动词应使用“are”，而不是与单数名词搭配的形式。修改后主语和谓语保持一致。

× Last year I saw an interesting advertisement in a elevator about uh food in local restaurant and I found it, uh, captivating.

✓ Last year, I saw an interesting advertisement in an elevator about food in a local restaurant, and I found it captivating.

“elevator”以元音音素开头，因此应使用“an elevator”，而不是“a elevator”。“local restaurant”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。