Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接且有相关细节，但存在明显的语法和表达问题。应将“every time when”改为“every time”或“whenever”，将“pop out”改为“pop up”，并避免句子过长导致的连句错误。可以使用“Moreover”连接第二个细节，并准确表达广告难以关闭、容易误触的后果。

Exemplo: Yes, I see advertisements almost every time I use my phone or computer. They usually pop up when I browse websites or use social media, and they can be quite annoying. Moreover, some of them are difficult to close, so I sometimes accidentally open another window.

Sugestão: 回答结构基本清楚，但“an advertisement of Pepsi”应改为“a Pepsi advertisement”，“top class”应写作“top-class”，且“Jolene”可能不是听众熟悉的歌手，最好补充广告的画面、歌曲或印象深刻的原因。注意使用过去时描述童年经历。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember a Pepsi advertisement that impressed me when I was a child. It featured several popular singers, including a singer I really liked at the time. The catchy music and energetic performance made the advertisement particularly memorable.

Sugestão: 回答有直接观点和对比，但“an back things”以及“between all the articles”表达不自然，影响理解。可以使用“seat-back magazines”或“advertising posters”，并用“However”连接通常的个人行为。建议明确回答“不是很多”，而不是只说“some”。

Exemplo: I see quite a few advertisements on trains and planes, especially in seat-back magazines and on digital screens. They often promote products, travel destinations, or local services. However, I usually ignore them and look out of the window because I prefer enjoying the scenery.

Sugestão: 观点明确，但有重复、连句和词汇错误。“pop up advertisements”应为“pop-up advertisements”，“feel very feel very intrusive”应改为“feel very intrusive”；最后的“raid us”无法表达清楚，可能想说“read reviews”。应补充一个完整、准确的购买方式。

Exemplo: No, I do not really like advertisements, especially pop-up ads. They can interrupt a TV programme or an online article, which feels very intrusive. If I want to buy something, I usually visit a shop, ask the staff for advice, and read customer reviews before making a decision.

Sugestão: 回答有清晰偏好，但“positive size”和“negative size”应改为“positive aspects”和“negative aspects”，“so you can have reliable information”逻辑不清，应表达为“so they do not always provide reliable information”。可以先直接说明喜欢真实、信息丰富的广告，再解释原因。

Exemplo: To be honest, I prefer advertisements that provide honest and detailed information. Many ads only focus on the positive aspects of a product and hide its weaknesses, so they are not always reliable. Therefore, I usually trust user reviews more, especially when I am considering an expensive purchase.

Sugestão: 回答内容较具体，也使用了让步结构“but”，因此比较有效。需要改正冠词和产品名称：“an Apple Watch Series 9”，并将“how many functions the watch can do”改为“the functions the watch offered”。可以进一步说明广告如何影响购买决定，以增强细节。

Exemplo: I have not bought anything solely because of an advertisement, but an advertisement partly influenced me to buy an Apple Watch Series 9. It demonstrated several useful features, especially the double-tap function. I was already interested in the watch, and the advertisement helped convince me that it would be practical for everyday use.

× Oh yes, every time when I browse a website or open a social media app, the advertisements just pop out it can be annoying, especially those that are very hard to close the windows, you might accidentally open another window.

✓ Oh yes, whenever I browse a website or open a social media app, advertisements just pop up. They can be annoying, especially those that are difficult to close, because you might accidentally open another window.

原句把多个完整句子直接连接在一起，造成句子结构混乱和逗号拼接错误。应使用句号或连接词将句子分开。另外，广告应该是“pop up”，而不是“pop out it”。

× Yes, there is an advertisement of Pepsi that impressed me a lot when I was a child.

✓ Yes, there was a Pepsi advertisement that impressed me a lot when I was a child.

问题使用过去时“when I was a child”询问童年经历，因此回答中应使用过去时“there was”，而不是现在时“there is”。

× Yes, there is an advertisement of Pepsi that impressed me a lot when I was a child.

✓ Yes, there was a Pepsi advertisement that impressed me a lot when I was a child.

“Pepsi advertisement”是更自然的名词组合。原来的“an advertisement of Pepsi”虽然可以理解，但冠词和名词搭配不够自然。

× I see some advertisements on trains or planes. They usually put an back things on the back seat and when you read it you will see some advertisements of products between all the articles.

✓ I see some advertisements on trains or planes. They usually put a booklet on the back of each seat, and when you read it, you will see advertisements for different products among the articles.

“an”不能放在辅音音素开头的“back”前面；这里根据语境改为“a booklet”。此外，“on the back seat”应改为“on the back of each seat”，表示“座椅的背面”。

× I see some advertisements on trains or planes. They usually put an back things on the back seat and when you read it you will see some advertisements of products between all the articles.

✓ I see some advertisements on trains or planes. They usually put a booklet on the back of each seat, and when you read it, you will see advertisements for different products among the articles.

表示“某种产品的广告”时，通常使用“advertisements for products”，而不是“advertisements of products”。“among”表示在多个事物之中，比“between all the articles”更合适。

× No, I don't like advertisements, especially pop up advertisements because they can interrupt a TV show or an online article feel very feel very intrusive.

✓ No, I don't like advertisements, especially pop-up advertisements, because they can interrupt a TV show or an online article and feel very intrusive.

原句中“interrupt”和“feel”之间缺少连接词，导致句子结构不完整。使用“and”连接两个并列谓语。另外，“feel very feel very”重复，应删除一个“feel very”。

× To be honest, I don't like any kind of advertisements because usually just focus on the positive size and say nothing about negative size so you can have reliable information.

✓ To be honest, I don't like any kind of advertisements because they usually focus only on the positive side and say nothing about the negative side, so you can't get reliable information.

“because”从句缺少主语，应加入“they”。原句最后的“so you can have reliable information”与前面的意思矛盾；广告只强调优点、忽略缺点，因此应说“so you can't get reliable information”。

× To be honest, I don't like any kind of advertisements because usually just focus on the positive size and say nothing about negative size so you can have reliable information.

✓ To be honest, I don't like any kind of advertisements because they usually focus only on the positive side and say nothing about the negative side, so you can't get reliable information.

原句使用“so you can”，表示“所以你可以获得可靠信息”，这与上下文逻辑相反。这里应使用“so you can't”，表示“所以你不能获得可靠信息”。

× I haven't bought anything just because of the advertisement, but I did buy a Apple Watch series night partly because of the advertisement showing how many functions the watch can do, especially the double tapping.

✓ I haven't bought anything just because of an advertisement, but I did buy an Apple Watch Series 9 partly because of an advertisement showing how many functions the watch can perform, especially the double-tap function.

“advertisement”在这里是第一次提到的可数名词，应使用不定冠词“an”，而不是“the”。“Apple”以元音音素开头，所以前面应使用“an Apple Watch”，不能使用“a Apple Watch”。