Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答观点明确，但有较多语法、词汇和表达问题。应说“Whenever I use my phone or computer, advertisements pop up”，而不是“Every time one phone or computer”。“advertisement”拼写和发音要注意，形容广告令人烦应使用“annoying”或“intrusive”，而不是“noise”。可以用“especially when...”补充具体情况，并避免重复“block”。

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. Whenever I use my phone or computer, advertisements often pop up, especially when I am watching videos. I find them quite annoying because they sometimes interrupt what I am watching.

Sugestão: 回答有个人经历，但内容不够清晰，且有大量重复和句子结构错误。应明确广告是什么、为什么印象深刻以及它带来的结果。“monkey monkey kingdom”可以改为“a cartoon about the Monkey King”，“I must also love this monkey”应改为“I really liked the character”。注意过去时、复数和固定搭配，如“asked my mum to buy them for me”和“the toys were not very good”。

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child, I remember seeing an advertisement for toys based on the Monkey King, a famous character from a Chinese story. I really liked the character, so I often asked my mum to buy the toys for me, even though they were not very good quality.

Sugestão: 回答的主要意思可以推断出来，但很多词语无法理解，影响交流。应直接回答“there are lots of advertisements on trains”，并按“地点＋形式＋看法”的顺序组织内容。注意使用准确词汇：train、subway、screens、posters、carriages；不要重复“watching”，也不要加入不完整的句子。

Exemplo: Yes, there are usually lots of advertisements on trains and buses. They appear on digital screens and posters inside the carriages, and there are sometimes ads on the floors as well. I think they help passengers pass the time, although there can be too many of them.

Sugestão: 回答立场清楚，也给出了原因，但“noisy”不适合描述弹窗广告打断视频的情况，应使用“annoying”或“intrusive”。“block me through block what I'm watching”重复且不自然，可以改为“interrupt or block the video”。建议用两到三句话完成观点、原因和具体例子。

Exemplo: I do not really like advertisements because many of them are intrusive. For example, when I watch videos on my phone, pop-up ads sometimes interrupt the video and force me to wait. However, I do not mind short and creative commercials.

Sugestão: 回答试图进行比较，但最后一句未完成，且“make me laughing or surprised to me”表达错误。可以直接说喜欢“funny or creative advertisements”，并解释它们为什么吸引人。描述普通广告时，可用“simply list a product’s features”。务必完成句子，例如“if an advertisement makes me laugh, I am more likely to remember it”。

Exemplo: I like funny and creative advertisements, especially ones that make me laugh or surprise me. In contrast, advertisements that simply list a product’s features are quite boring. If an ad is entertaining, I am more likely to remember the brand.

Sugestão: 回答没有清楚说明买了什么、广告展示了什么以及购买结果。“some single watch”应明确为“a smartwatch”或“a watch”，“because this impressed me and gave me very good help”应改为“because the advertisement highlighted its useful features”。建议使用过去时并补充具体功能，例如计步、查看通知或健康监测。

Exemplo: Yes, I once bought a smartwatch after seeing an advertisement on my phone. The ad showed that it could track my steps and display notifications, which seemed very useful. I was impressed by those features, so I decided to buy it.

× Every time one phone or computer they also pop up some advisement and sometimes the advisement is so noise because they block what I'm watching.

✓ Every time I use my phone or computer, advertisements pop up, and sometimes they are so annoying that they block what I am watching.

“Every time one phone or computer”缺少主语和正确介词，应改为“Every time I use my phone or computer”。“advertisement”在这里表示泛指的多个广告，应使用复数“advertisements”。“so noisy”不能准确表达广告令人烦恼，应该使用形容词“annoying”。“so...that...”用于表达“如此……以至于……”。

× Yes, I remember when I was young, I saw an advertisement about monkey monkey kingdom about old story about in China.

✓ Yes, I remember that when I was young, I saw an advertisement about the Monkey Kingdom, an old story from China.

专有故事名称前通常使用定冠词“the”，所以应说“the Monkey Kingdom”。“about in China”介词搭配错误，应改为“from China”，表示“来自中国的故事”。“that”可以连接“remember”的内容，使句子结构更清楚。

× I must also love this monkey.

✓ I also loved this monkey.

这里是在描述童年时的感受，应该使用一般过去时“loved”。“must love”表示现在的必要性或推测，不适合表达过去喜欢某个角色的意思。

× Every time I saw this advertisement and these toys I always ask my mum to bud for me.

✓ Every time I saw this advertisement and these toys, I always asked my mum to buy them for me.

故事发生在过去，所以“ask”应改为过去式“asked”。“advertisement and these toys”是两个并列对象，后面用“them”指代它们。条件或时间从句后应加逗号，使句子更清晰。

× Even though the toys is no good.

✓ Even though the toys were no good.

“toys”是复数主语，所以不能使用“is”，应使用“were”。由于描述的是童年时的玩具，使用过去式“were”更合适。

× At the moment have many otherwise on the chain.

✓ At the moment, there are many advertisements on the train.

表达“某处有某物”时需要使用“There be”结构，因此应说“there are”。“advertisements”是可数名词复数，搭配“are”。交通工具前应使用介词“on”，所以是“on the train”。

× Every time I take a separate wage there is on the screen, even though on the floor have some advertisement.

✓ Every time I take the subway, there are advertisements on the screen, and there are also some advertisements on the floor.

表示“屏幕上有广告”时，应使用完整的“There are advertisements...”结构。“advertisements”是复数，所以使用“are”。“on the floor”中的“the”用于表示特定的地面。

× I think this is on the trains the people to not do the nursing like watching watching the.

✓ I think the advertisements on the trains stop people from doing anything except watching them.

原句缺少清晰的主语、谓语和宾语，句子结构不完整。可以使用“stop somebody from doing something”结构，表示“阻止某人做某事”。“watching”后需要有宾语，因此使用“watching them”指代广告。

× Every time when I'm watching the videos on the phone, they always pop up some advertisements and block me through block what I'm watching.

✓ Every time I watch videos on my phone, advertisements pop up and block what I am watching.

“on the phone”在这里应改为“on my phone”，因为是在说自己的手机。“they”指代不清，直接使用“advertisements”作主语更明确。“block what I am watching”表示“挡住我正在看的内容”，比“block me through”正确。

× If I have to talk about or choose one kind of advertisement I like, I will see I feel like the advertisement that will make me laughing or surprised to me.

✓ If I have to choose one kind of advertisement I like, I would say that I like advertisements that make me laugh or surprise me.

“I will see I feel like”结构不正确，应改为“I would say that...”。使役动词“make”后面应接动词原形，所以是“make me laugh”，不是“make me laughing”。“surprise me”是正确的动词和宾语搭配。

× If the normal one or just features or just to point out the product of the features I think is very boring.

✓ If an advertisement is ordinary or only points out a product's features, I think it is very boring.

单数可数名词“advertisement”前需要使用不定冠词“an”。“only points out”中的谓语形式与主语“an advertisement”保持一致。原句缺少完整的主语和谓语，因此需要改成“If an advertisement is...”。“a product's features”表示“产品的特点”，所有格结构比“the product of the features”更准确。

× If the advertisement is can make.

✓ If an advertisement can make me laugh, I like it.

情态动词“can”后面应接动词原形，不能使用“is can”。原句是一个不完整的条件句，需要补充主句，形成完整的“If...，I...”结构。

× Yes, I bought some single watch advertisement on my phone is about because this impressed me and gave me very good help it.

✓ Yes, I bought a watch after seeing an advertisement on my phone because it impressed me and was very helpful.

“watch”是单数可数名词，前面应使用“a”，不能使用“some”。“after seeing...”可以清楚地表达购买行为发生在看到广告之后。“impressed”使用过去式，与过去的购买经历一致。“it”指代手表或广告时要保持清楚，不能使用“gave me very good help it”这种错误结构；“was very helpful”是正确的表达。