Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 回答直接表达了“经常看到广告”，并提到了个性化广告这一具体细节，内容方向正确。但“under my computer”用词错误，应改为“on my computer”；“a lot of advertisements”略显重复，可以说“many ads”。另外，句子之间缺少自然的连接，结尾应补充一个具体例子或个人感受，并注意使用完整句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I often see advertisements on both my phone and my computer. In fact, many of them are targeted at me based on what I search for or watch online. For example, if I look up a pair of shoes, I usually start seeing similar ads on social media.

Sugestão: 回答选择了一个童年广告，并提到了广告歌曲，这是很好的具体细节。但“deeply rotated in my mind”表达不自然，应改为“is deeply etched in my mind”或“left a deep impression on me”；“catching jingle”应改为更自然的“catchy jingle”。答案在最后中断，且没有说明这个广告为什么令人难忘，建议补充广告内容、观看时的感受或它对自己的影响。

Exemplo: Yes. When I was a child, a Norbeijing commercial left a deep impression on me. It had a catchy jingle and colorful images, so I could easily remember it and often sang the song afterward.

Sugestão: 回答基本回应了问题，并列举了车站屏幕、车内海报等细节。不过开头的“And”不必要；“in public transport”应改为“on public transport”；“it often has sound”指代不清且重复。建议使用“such as”和“as well as”组织列举，并补充这些广告给你的总体感受。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on public transport. There are posters inside trains, videos on station screens, and sometimes audio announcements. They are quite noticeable, although I sometimes find them distracting during my journey.

Sugestão: 回答使用了“mixed feelings”这一自然表达，也尝试进行正反对比。但“the advertisement will introduce their products”中的主语和代词不一致，应改为“an advertisement introduces a product”；“it looks very useful”中的指代也不够清楚。答案以“But sometimes”结束，内容不完整，应该说明广告令人反感的原因，例如夸大宣传、重复播放或打扰使用体验。

Exemplo: To be honest, I have mixed feelings about advertisements. On the one hand, they can introduce useful products and help me discover things I might like. On the other hand, some ads are repetitive or exaggerated, so they can be quite annoying.

Sugestão: 回答明确表达了自己喜欢美妆广告，并给出了自信这一理由，符合基本结构。但“makeup stuff”较口语且不够准确，可以使用“beauty products”或“cosmetics”；“more beautiful”容易显得单一，建议说明喜欢的广告特点，例如妆容展示、产品测评或使用前后对比。答案最后中断，且“and”重复，应完整结束。

Exemplo: I particularly like advertisements for makeup and skincare products because I am interested in beauty. They often show different looks and explain how to use the products. I find tutorials and before-and-after comparisons especially helpful because they make the advertisements more convincing.

Sugestão: 回答试图提供购买经历，这是回答此题最有效的方式，但目前有多处表达不清和重复，例如“buy buy”“songs in”以及“make up stuff”。“I always buy”也过于绝对，建议改为“I have bought...”并清楚说明购买的产品、广告中的什么信息吸引了你，以及购买后的结果。答案没有完成，导致内容和语法连贯性明显不足。

Exemplo: Yes, I have bought something because of an advertisement. Last weekend, I saw an online ad for a makeup product that promised long-lasting coverage, so I decided to try it. Fortunately, it worked quite well and I was satisfied with my purchase.

× Yes, I often see a lot of advertisements on my phone under my computer.

✓ Yes, I often see a lot of advertisements on my phone or computer.

“under my computer”表示“在我的电脑下面”，不符合语境。这里是在手机或电脑上看广告，应使用“on my phone or computer”。

× It had a catching jingle which impressed me considerably.

✓ It had a catchy jingle that impressed me considerably.

“catching”通常表示“正在抓住的”或“传染性的”，不能自然地表示“朗朗上口的”。描述广告歌曲容易记、好听，应使用形容词“catchy”。

× I see a lot of advertisements in public transport it often has sound it often has some videos on station screens and a lot of posters inside the train.

✓ I see a lot of advertisements on public transport. They often have sound, videos on station screens, and many posters inside the train.

“advertisements”是复数，后面不能用单数代词“it”，应改为复数代词“They”。同时，需要用句号分开几个完整句子，避免把多个句子连续连接在一起。

× Sometimes the advertisement will introduce their products.

✓ Sometimes advertisements introduce their products.

这里是在泛指广告，不应使用单数形式“the advertisement”。“advertisements”应使用复数形式；同时，复数主语后面的代词“their”才保持一致。

× Sometimes the advertisement will introduce their products.

✓ Sometimes advertisements introduce their products.

“the advertisement”是单数，但“their”通常指复数对象，前后不一致。改成复数“advertisements”后，使用“their”就正确了。

× It looks very useful and I will want to buy it.

✓ They look very useful, and I want to buy them.

前文的“advertisements”是复数，所以应使用“They”和“them”，不能使用单数代词“It”和“it”。这里表达一般喜好，使用一般现在时“I want”比将来时“I will want”更合适。

× It looks very useful and I will want to buy it.

✓ They look very useful, and I want to buy them.

回答的是对广告的一般看法，不是特定的将来计划，因此应使用一般现在时“want”，而不是“will want”。

× I like the advertisement about makeup stuff because I like makeup very much.

✓ I like advertisements about makeup because I like makeup very much.

这里是在泛指一类广告，应使用复数“advertisements”，而不是单数“the advertisement”。

× Makeup can make me more beautiful and I will become more confident.

✓ Makeup can make me more beautiful and make me more confident.

这里描述化妆品通常带来的效果，应使用一般现在时结构。使用“make me more confident”可以和前面的“make me more beautiful”保持平行，也避免不必要地使用将来时“will become”。

× Last weekend I bought a very useful make up stuff after I

✓ Last weekend, I bought some very useful makeup after I saw an advertisement.

“makeup”通常是不可数名词，不能与不定冠词“a”直接搭配。表示一些化妆品时，应使用“some makeup”。此外，“after I”后面必须接完整的从句，所以补充了动词短语“saw an advertisement”。

× Last weekend I bought a very useful make up stuff after I

✓ Last weekend, I bought some very useful makeup after I saw an advertisement.

不可数名词“makeup”前不能使用“a”。应删除“a”，并使用数量词“some”。“an advertisement”中的“an”用于元音音素开头的可数名词单数，使用正确。