Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 总体回答直接且相关，但句子结构有些重复和冗长。建议简化句子，使用连接词使表达更流畅，并提供一两个具体场景或频率词以增强内容。例如可把“when I am using my phone to watch videos or on computer like visiting some websites”精炼为两个并列短语，并说明频率（e.g. "several times a day"）。

Exemplo: Yes, I see lots of ads on my phone and computer. For example, I encounter pop-up and banner ads several times a day while watching videos or browsing websites.

Sugestão: 回答能够回应问题并给出例子，但缺乏细节说明为什么印象深刻。建议说明广告令人印象深刻的原因（例如有趣的角色、音乐或故事情节），并使用连接词衔接观点和细节。

Exemplo: Yes, I remember several ads from my childhood, like those for Dove chocolates and Wangsi beverages. The Dove ad had a memorable jingle and colorful characters, which made it easy to remember.

Sugestão: 回答直接且覆盖面广，但句子有些重复（‘on trains’与后面又列举交通工具）。建议先给出总述，再用连接词举一两种具体例子，並可补充广告形式（海报、电子屏等）。

Exemplo: Yes, public transport is full of advertisements. For instance, I often see large posters on trains and digital screens inside buses and the subway.

Sugestão: 观点明确但表达上存在重复与语法问题（例如“it's very noisy to people's eyes”“harmful to pedestrians' eyes”不够自然）。建议用更地道的表达说明原因，并用连接词列出2–3个具体影响（分心、视觉干扰、误导性信息），每点简短清楚。

Exemplo: Actually, I don't like most ads because there are too many of them. They distract people, create visual clutter, and sometimes even mislead consumers when they exaggerate product benefits.

Sugestão: 回答清晰并提出偏好，但语法需调整（主谓一致、名词形式）。建议用连接词补充一两个具体特征或例子，例如颜色、排版或短句广告语，以使描述更具体。

Exemplo: I prefer simple and elegant ads that focus on the product. For example, a clean layout with minimal text and a clear product photo usually appeals to me.

Sugestão: 回答表达意思，但语法和衔接有瑕疵（句子断裂，时态一致性）。建议先用一句话直接回答频率，再用连接词解释原因并给出条件或具体例子，最后用完整句说明可能性。

Exemplo: I rarely buy products because of ads because I usually ignore them. However, if an advertisement is very creative and convincing, I might be tempted to try the product.

× Yes, I often see many kinds of advertisements when I am using my phone to watch videos or on computer like visiting some websites.

✓ Yes, I often see many kinds of advertisements when I am using my phone to watch videos or on the computer, for example when visiting some websites.

句中应使用介词短语“on the computer”而不是“on computer”；另外用逗号和连接词使句子更通顺。建议在计算机前加定冠词“the”，并将“like visiting some websites”改为更正式的“for example when visiting some websites”以表达举例。

× Actually, I think there were many interesting advertisements when I was a child such as the advertisement for dove chocolates and wangsi beverages.

✓ Actually, I think there were many interesting advertisements when I was a child, such as the advertisements for Dove chocolates and Wangsi beverages.

原句中“the advertisement”与上下文的复数“many interesting advertisements”不一致，应使用复数“advertisements”。此外，品牌名称首字母大写并在多个品牌前使用复数形式更自然。建议保持数一致。

× Yes, it is common to see many kinds of advertisements on trains and also like on bus, on the subway or even on planes.

✓ Yes, it is common to see many kinds of advertisements on trains and also on buses, on the subway, or even on planes.

“on bus”应为复数形式并加冠词或改为复数“on buses”；并在列举项之间使用并列结构。建议将“like”去掉以使句子更自然。

× Well, I do not like advertisements actually because there are always too much advertisements. So people cannot focus on the products and it's very noisy to people's eyes. And when it's on digital screen, it's very harmful to pedestrians' eyes.

✓ Well, I do not like advertisements actually because there are always too many advertisements. So people cannot focus on the products and it is visually noisy. And when it is on a digital screen, it is very harmful to people's eyes.

“too much”用于不可数名词，advertisements为可数名词应使用“too many”。“it's very noisy to people's eyes”表达不地道，改为“it is visually noisy”或“it is distracting”更合适。“on digital screen”需加冠词“on a digital screen”。建议注意可数/不可数区分和更准确的表达。

× Well, I like the kind of advertisement that have a sense of simplicity and elegance. It does not have too much texts or images but set its product as the key point.

✓ Well, I like the kind of advertisement that has a sense of simplicity and elegance. It does not have too much text or images but sets its product as the focal point.

先行词“the kind of advertisement”是单数，关系代词从句谓语动词应使用单数“has”。“too much texts”错误，用于可数名词texts应为“too many texts”或更自然的“too much text”。主句中主语“it”指代单数广告，因此动词应为“sets”。建议注意主谓一致和可数/不可数名词的搭配。

× I seldom buy things through the introduction advertisements because I did not pay attention to ads actually. But if the advertisement is very interesting and appealing. Maybe I will give it a try.

✓ I seldom buy things because of introductory advertisements because I do not pay attention to ads. But if an advertisement is very interesting and appealing, maybe I will give it a try.

时态不一致：先用一般现在时描述习惯（seldom buy），后句不应用过去时“did not pay attention”，应改为现在时“do not pay attention”。句子断裂问题：“But if the advertisement is very interesting and appealing. Maybe I will give it a try.”应为一个完整的条件句，用逗号连接并保持时态一致，且将“the advertisement”改为不特指的“an advertisement”。建议统一时态并把从句和主句连成完整句子。