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Sugestão: 回答要更自然并避免语法错误与冗余。开头用主题句直接回应，然后用1–2个具体细节支持，并用连接词如“for example”或“however”使逻辑更清晰。注意单复数（advertisements, discounts）和搭配（promote discounts, shopping trends）。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone and computer. For example, I often receive promotional emails and see short ads between YouTube videos, which sometimes show useful discounts but can also be quite annoying.

Sugestão: 内容混乱且语法与词汇错误较多。先给出直接回答（Yes/No + 简单描述），然后用1–2句具体且清晰的细节说明为什么印象深刻，并用连接词如“however”或“later”表明转折。避免不明确的短语（singed light of grapes, get my free deal）。

Exemplo: Yes, one ad that stayed with me showed a free small bottle of juice as a promotional gift for children. I liked it because the toy and bright colors caught my attention, but later I realised such ads are designed to make kids want products they do not really need.

Sugestão: 句子结构和语法需要改进，回答要更简洁流畅。先给直接回答，然后用一两个并列或从句说明原因，使用正确表达（pay attention to ads, browse my phone, listen to music）。避免拼写或单词使用错误（aids → ads）。

Exemplo: Not really. I usually ignore ads on trains because I browse my phone, listen to music or sleep during the journey, so I hardly notice them.

Sugestão: 观点明确但用词不当（virtuosive 不合适）。回答应更自然，用更常见的词汇（appealing, persuasive）。可用一两个具体例子说明如何帮助购物决策，并用连接词承接句子。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Advertisements inform me about sales and special discounts that can save money, and they also explain a product's benefits, which makes it easier to decide whether to buy.

Sugestão: 回答需要更直接并语法正确。用清晰的主题句说明偏好（I prefer ads with user reviews），随后解释原因并举例。注意句子流畅与动词形式（decide to buy）。

Exemplo: I prefer advertisements that include user reviews or customer testimonials because they show real benefits and how people actually use the product, which makes me more confident when deciding to buy.

Sugestão: 句子太冗长且语法混乱。先直接回答（Yes），然后用一两句说明具体情况并举例说明哪类广告最有说服力（discounts, user testimonials）。使用连接词如“also”或“for example”使逻辑更紧凑。

Exemplo: Yes, I have. For example, I bought a kitchen gadget after seeing an ad that offered a big discount and included customer videos showing how useful it was in everyday cooking.

× Yes, I often see an advertisement on my phone and computer.

✓ Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone and computer.

原句使用單數不定冠詞 "an" 與可數名詞 "advertisement" 但在表達習慣性的多次出現時應使用複數。建議將 "an advertisement" 改為複數 "advertisements"，或改為泛指形容詞結構如 "an advertisement occasionally"。簡而言之，當指多次或一般情況時使用複數。

× They usually promote discount on new shopping trends which I sometimes find useful but often a bit annoying.

✓ They usually promote discounts on new shopping trends, which I sometimes find useful but often a bit annoying.

原句中的單數名詞 "discount" 在此語境下應為可數複數 "discounts"（多種折扣／促銷），同時在主句與關係子句之間要加逗號以分隔附加信息。建議把 "discount" 改為 "discounts" 並添加逗號以提升流暢度。

× I was impressed by an advertisement that offered a bottle to get my free deal with a singed light of grapes I didn't when I was child, however, when I got older, I realized it's actually a marketing strategy to encourage consumer development more than they need.

✓ I was impressed by an advertisement that offered a free bottle with a small package of grapes when I was a child; however, when I got older, I realized it was actually a marketing strategy to encourage consumers to buy more than they need.

原句時態和詞序混亂。首先表達過去經驗應使用過去式（"was impressed" 與從句內也用過去式 "offered"、"was"）。"when I was child" 缺少冠詞，應為 "when I was a child"。"it's actually" 應與前句過去時一致改為 "it was actually"。另外 "consumer development more than they need" 語意不清，改為常見表達 "encourage consumers to buy more than they need"。建議注意時態一致、冠詞使用與自然搭配。

× I don't really pay much attention to advertisements on train or public transport and I usually browse my phone, I listen to music or even sleep during the journey so I really not the aids.

✓ I don't really pay much attention to advertisements on trains or public transport, and I usually browse my phone, listen to music, or even sleep during the journey, so I really don't notice them.

原句有多處介系詞與動詞用法錯誤："on train" 應為複數或加冠詞 "on trains" 或 "on the train"；逗號連接兩個獨立子句需加連詞"and"；"I really not the aids" 無動詞且用詞不當，想表達 "我真的沒注意到它們" 應為 "I really don't notice them"。建議使用正確介系詞、保持子句完整並用正確動詞短語。

× They also highlight the benefits of products and make it more appealing and virtuosive to potential buyers.

✓ They also highlight the benefits of products and make them more appealing and attractive to potential buyers.

原句中代詞與形容詞使用不當："make it" 指代不明，應對應前面的複數名詞 "products"，改為 "make them"；"virtuosive" 不是常用詞，應使用常見形容詞如 "attractive"。建議使用正確指代（單復數一致）並選用常用形容詞。

× Our capital documents that include user review or customer testimony.

✓ Our marketing materials include user reviews or customer testimonials.

原句詞序與詞選不當："capital documents" 意義不明，依語境應為 "marketing materials"（行銷材料）；"user review or customer testimony" 要注意數量與名詞形式，應為複數 "user reviews" 或 "customer testimonials"。建議使用常見搭配並保持單複數一致。

× They show the real benefits and how people actually use the products so I feel more confident and easier for me to decide buy.

✓ They show the real benefits and how people actually use the products, so I feel more confident and find it easier to decide what to buy.

原句代詞與結構錯誤："so I feel more confident and easier for me to decide buy" 中 "easier for me to decide buy" 不符合英語習慣，需用 "find it easier to decide what to buy" 或 "it's easier for me to decide what to buy"。同時在並列部分保持語法平行（"feel more confident and find it easier"）。建議重構為常見的固定搭配。

× Certainly yes, the advertisement shows the discounts will appeal me to buy it.

✓ Certainly. Yes, the advertisement showing discounts would appeal to me and make me want to buy it.

原句中情態動詞與動詞不定式使用不當："will appeal me to buy it" 不正確，應使用 "appeal to me"，而表達可能性或誘因時用 "would appeal to me" 或 "would make me want to buy it"。建議使用固定搭配 "appeal to someone" 並用合適時態/情態來表達假設或一般情況。

× At the same time, if the advertisement is including feedback or some real life example that show people actually use the products and also highlight the practical benefits and I would buy it.

✓ At the same time, if the advertisement includes feedback or some real-life examples that show people actually using the products and highlight the practical benefits, I would buy it.

原句混用被動和進行式：應使用 "includes" 而非 "is including"（簡單現在表事實）；"real life example" 應為複數 "real-life examples"；關係子句內動詞需與主句一致，建議用 "show people actually using the products" 或 "that show people actually use the products"。另外在條件句中主從句要用逗號分隔並保持時態一致。建議熟悉動詞 + -ing 用法和簡單現在時的正確使用。