Advertisement— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar errors (e.g., plural 'advertisements', omit duplicate phrases).

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of advertisements on my phone because I use it daily. For example, social media apps often show sponsored videos, so I usually just scroll past them quickly.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, structured answer: state whether you remember one, then describe it with specific details (product, visuals, feeling) using linking words. Fix grammar and word choice ('left an impression', 'bought it'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, one ad left a strong impression on me. It was for a soft drink with bright colors and people laughing, so it looked delicious and made me want to buy it when I was a child.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, then give a concise supporting detail with a linking word. Clarify which transport you mean and correct tense and article use. Avoid contradictory phrases without explanation.

Exemplo: Not really on trains, but I do see many ads on other transport. For instance, billboards and digital ads are common on buses and cars, so I notice more advertising when I travel by road.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion, then explain with one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases ('we need it providers some negative things like a cult'); instead, say 'misleading' or 'offensive'. Reduce repetition.

Exemplo: I don't mind some advertisements, but it depends on the content. If an ad is useful or relevant, I watch it, but if it's misleading or offensive, I quickly skip it.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence naming the type of ads you prefer, then support with specific examples and a brief reason using a linking word. Use more natural collocations (e.g., 'healthier drinks' or 'educational products').

Exemplo: I prefer positive, informative advertisements because they promote useful products. For example, ads for healthy drinks or educational notebooks catch my attention since they encourage good habits and motivate students.

× I often see advertisement when I when I'm on my phone because I often use my phone every day and advertisement when advertisement comes, I usually tend to scroll them and close it immediately.

✓ I often see advertisements when I'm on my phone because I use my phone every day, and when advertisements appear, I usually scroll past them and close them immediately.

Plural nouns are required when referring to more than one ad. Use 'advertisements' instead of 'advertisement'. Also use 'appear' instead of 'comes' for advertisements and 'scroll past' is the usual collocation. Remove redundant phrases for clarity.

× When I was a child there was an advertisement that admitted an impression and that advertisement was about a beverage and that beverage looked really delicious and breathtaking and I wanted to buy them and I actually offered them.

✓ When I was a child there was an advertisement that made an impression on me; it was about a beverage that looked really delicious and I wanted to buy it, and I actually did.

Use correct verb phrase 'made an impression on me' instead of 'admitted an impression'. Use singular pronoun 'it' for a singular beverage rather than 'them'. 'Offered them' is incorrect; use 'I actually did' or 'I actually bought it'.

× I see a lot of advertising especially on other transports when I when I on the train I didn't I don't usually see advertisement but when I on car I usually see advertisement.

✓ I see a lot of advertising, especially on other types of transport. When I'm on the train I don't usually see advertisements, but when I'm in a car I usually do.

Use preposition 'on' with 'train' and 'in' with 'car' for typical collocations. Use 'types of transport' instead of 'transports'. Correct tense and articles: 'advertisements' plural and consistent present tense 'I don't usually see'.

× It depends on what the advertisement shows. When the advertisement illustrated something really helpful and beneficial to me, I don't mind watching them but however we need we need it providers some negative things like a cult I tend to scroll past them and ignore them immediately.

✓ It depends on what the advertisement shows. When an advertisement illustrates something really helpful and beneficial to me, I don't mind watching it; however, if it provides negative things like promoting a cult, I tend to scroll past it and ignore it immediately.

Use indefinite article 'an advertisement' for a non-specific ad and match singular pronouns 'it' with 'advertisement'. Correct verb tense 'illustrates' for present general statements. 'Provides' is correct verb form; replace unclear phrase with 'promoting a cult'. Use punctuation to separate contrasting ideas.

× I like positive kinds of advertising because it offers a lot of positive things like healthy beverage juice or maybe notebook that helps students to study and have motivation to study more.

✓ I like positive kinds of advertising because they offer many beneficial things like healthy juices or notebooks that help students study and motivate them to study more.

Match plural subject 'kinds of advertising' with plural verb 'offer' and pronoun 'they'. Use 'juices' and 'notebooks' plural to refer to examples. Use adjective 'beneficial' and correct verb 'help students study' and clearer phrase 'motivate them to study more'.