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Sugestão: 回答自然，但有重复和断裂，句子略显口语化与犹豫。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回应并稍作扩展；2) 避免重复（例如两次‘I’），合并相近句子；3) 使用衔接词如“so”或“because”使逻辑更清晰；4) 保持答案在3–4句内，提供一两个具体细节或例子。

Exemplo: Yes, I see a lot of ads on my phone and computer, especially when I open social media apps. They often appear as pop-ups, and sometimes I can’t find the close button, so I have to wait until the ad finishes. Because these ads interrupt what I’m doing, I find them really annoying.

Sugestão: 回答内容感情真挚且具体，但有犹豫词和一句话被截断。建议：1) 开始直接回答并用一到两句描述广告情节；2) 用连词如“which”或“and”连接句子，避免不完整的句子；3) 加入简短评价或为什么印象深刻的具体原因。

Exemplo: Yes, a public service announcement stayed with me from childhood. It showed a little boy helping his mother wash her feet to relieve her fatigue, which highlighted the love between parents and children. That scene was very touching and made me appreciate family bonds more.

Sugestão: 回答直接且有逻辑，但有轻微停顿词和一处词语错误（'put others'应为'put ads'). 建议：1) 用更准确的词汇并避免填充词（uh）；2) 用衔接词如“because”或“so”增强因果关系；3) 可补充一个具体例子（如车厢海报或车门广告）。

Exemplo: Yes, I often notice ads on buses, taxis and trains because these vehicles carry many commuters every day. Advertisers place posters or digital screens inside carriages to reach a large audience, and this also provides extra revenue for transport companies.

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰但略简短，可用连接词扩展理由。建议：1) 先给简短明确的立场句；2) 接着用原因句支持你的观点并举例；3) 控制句子数在3句内，避免重复。

Exemplo: It depends on the situation. If I’m searching for a product, I find ads useful because they help me compare options, but when I’m casually scrolling on my phone they’re intrusive and annoying.

Sugestão: 回答表达了偏好并给出原因，但有犹豫和重复。建议：1) 直接开始并明确说明喜欢哪类广告；2) 用更自然的词组如“authentic reviews”或“real user ratings”；3) 说明具体为何有用并可举例说明怎样帮助消费者。

Exemplo: I prefer ads that show authentic user reviews and real product ratings, because they give reliable information. For example, an ad that includes customer ratings and usage statistics helps me decide whether a product suits my needs.

× I I can't, sometimes I can't find the close button to close it out.

✓ I can't—sometimes I can't find the close button to close it.

原句中有重复的“I I”且用逗号连接造成断句不顺。应该删除重复词，并用破折号或句号分开两个独立分句，使语意更清晰。建议：注意不要重复词语，两个完整句子之间用句号、分号或破折号分开。

× I gather, sit through it till it finishes.

✓ I just sit through it until it finishes.

原句“I gather, sit through it till it finishes.” 结构混乱，‘I gather’ 与后半句连接不当，且动词缺少助词使句子不自然。将其改为“I just sit through it until it finishes.” 更符合英语习惯。建议：用常见连词（如 until）和副词（如 just）来表达连续动作，保持主语一致并避免多余短语。

× It's about a little boy who helped his mom wash her feet, wanted to ease her tiredness on It left a deep impression on me because it showed the love between parents and kids.

✓ It's about a little boy who helped his mom wash her feet to ease her tiredness. It left a deep impression on me because it showed the love between parents and children.

原句在句子连接处出现断裂且时态/不定式使用不当：‘who helped... wanted to ease’ 造成主语混淆，应使用不定式或连词清楚说明目的；另外“kids”在正式书面场合可改为“children”。建议：用不定式表达目的（to ease），并把长句拆成两个完整句以改善可读性。

× Companies put others there because they can reach a huge number of commuters and it brings in extra revenue for the transport operators.

✓ Companies put ads there because they can reach a huge number of commuters, and it brings in extra revenue for the transport operators.

原句用“others”指代不清，正确应为“ads”（advertisements）。此外在并列句中在逗号前后连接更清晰。建议：使用明确的名词来指代前文提到的事物（ads/advertisements），并在并列句中用逗号连接主句。

× If I need to find something, I'd like to look up advertisements about it, but if I'm just scrolling through my phone or computer I hate them.

✓ If I need to find something, I'd look up advertisements about it, but if I'm just scrolling through my phone or computer, I hate them.

原句中‘I'd like to look up’ 表示愿望而非习惯动作；在条件句中更自然的习惯表达是‘I'd look up’（would look up）表示在那种情况下的动作。并且在第二个并列分句前加上逗号以分隔从句。建议：根据语境选择合适的情态动词短语来表达条件下的习惯性动作；注意句子标点以改善流畅度。

× Well, actually I don't like any kind of advertisement except for the ones that show, umm, real ratings and real world data for customers, because that can help people find the products they really need.

✓ Well, actually I don't like any kind of advertisement except for the ones that show real ratings and real-world data for customers, because those can help people find the products they really need.

原句中“real world data”作为复合形容词修饰名词时应连字号（real-world data），且主语从单数“that”应改为复数“those”来对应“the ones”。建议：注意复合形容词的连写及代词与先行词在数上的一致。